VirMan SS: Unrealized LOVE!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys!
I am new here in IF. One of my readers in MeD wanted me to post theis story over here. I don't know if you will like it, but I just wanted to fulfill her wish. Hope you will like it!

And the suspense part is that it is going to be based on cricket! That does not mean there will not be any love in it, but cricket is going to play an important role in the development of the story.

Another important part is that , this is only going to be based on Virman and no Virika will be there, sorry to Virikians, but if I get good response for this story, I will surely write one on them soon.

Now onto the story :) Please forgive my mistakes and typos.

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The bat held tight in the muscular arms hit the ball hard. It flew past the boundaries and into the gallery. The crowd stood up and cheered for their only star Virat Vadhera.

Being the handsome hunk of Delhi Ranji trophy cricket team, each and every girl died for him. But the one who was lucky to get him was Misha Malhotra.

As always she was there for the match, cheering for his each and every move. She ran into the ground to congratulate him for his "Just- achieved milestone"! He had completed 1000 runs, in regional cricket in just 6 tests, becoming the fastest and the youngest one to achieve it.She has become the encouragement and strength for him.

But there was one who always fumed in jealousy and anger, when they both were together.

It was none other than Virat's friend cum reporter cum photographer, Manvi Chaudary. She had a secret crush on Virat since ages. She knew him better than anyone else and he knew her better than anyone else. But he had never imagined their relationship to be bigger than friendship.

She was a journalist and now the reporter of the sports newspaper, "Run and Run". She was appointed in the cricket section and that is why, she was there in the stadium on every Ranji-Trophy match. She enjoyed cricket and loved analysing on issues based on cricket. She was the one who told Virat that he will have a huge future in the field of cricket. Following her advice didn't disappoint him. There were only achievements in his carrier and no flops. Each and every fan of his knew that Virat was going to become the star of Indian Cricket!

Manvi was running fast to the ground to click some snaps of Virat. She and Misha reached Virat together. When she was about to extend her hand towards Virat to congratulate him, Misha hugged him.

She didn't like it. Whenever she has looked into Misha's eyes , she always saw fake love. She has always wondered if she was the only one who has noticed it.

Virat loved her like his life. But it seemed to be impossible for Manvi to accept the fact that they were lovers. Does occassional hugs and kisses prove that its true love? She never thought so. True LOVE had a special meaning in her mind and she could never agree that Virat's and Misha's was true love. There was something hidden behind the smiling face of Misha which no one except Manvi has noticed. Virat was like blind for her!

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Thats all, I know it was a short update. But it was meant to be like a character sketch! Hope you got Virat's, Manvi's and Misha's characters from them. If you didn't get it, don't worry, you will understand it in the following updates.

Please comment and encourage me.

Love,

Linaya

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Posted: 12 years ago
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really interesting start...and also its written very well 👍🏼
update soon and do pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its great plz add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys!

I am back now and I will try to update at least thrice a week, but I cannot assure you cause I am quite busy nowadays!

Thanks to all those who commented.

Here goes the story!

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Finally virat managed to escape from his fans and set off for the dressing room along with Misha.

Still, Manvi didn't like it but she couldn't do anything.

She decided to concentrate on her job and started asking his fans about his performance and all of their's opinion was noted down.

A girl said ," Mishaji is a lucky girl. She has got the best star. I feel jealous of her. He He. But if I say sincerely he was just rocking today. I started watching cricket just to see him bat, bowl and field. This milestone is nothing compared to whatever he is going to achieve in future. He is going to be the match-winner of Indian team."

Manvi liked her words, even though she was just joking of her jealousy that was the truth about Manvi.

She was actually jealous! Jealous of Misha.

She never knew why she was jealous and she is not even sure whether they are just friends or something more.

She didn't have much time to think more, she had a lot to do! She had to interview Virat even though she knew it was unnecessary cause she knew his heart.

But she went to his room.

On the way, she heard some kissing sounds. She didn't pay much attention as it was common. But her heart told her to look who it was.

She knew that it was not in a room as the sound was quite clear. She couldn't recogonize from where it was at first but then she noticed it was coming from behind a huge cardboard.

She didn't want to interfere but she was just looking who it was.

Whatever she saw, made her shocked.

It was Misha with some other guy. She couldn't believe her eyes.

She felt irritated, uncomfortable and moreover happy. Happy? Why? She didn't know.

All that she knew was Misha was cheating on her best friend, she was pretending to be in love with him. But why? Why should she do so?

She didn't know what to do, she wanted to shout, drag her, slap her etc. But the most important was she had to inform Virat, to make him aware that Misha was a cheat.

She ran fast, as fast as she could, to his room, knocked on the door and the door was opened immediately. She flew in. Virat was confused to see her rush in and that too so fast.

He asked concerened, "Manvi, what happened? why are you breathing so heavily?"

"Virat, will you believe me if I say something important?", Manvi said catching her breath.

Virat became even more confused and asked, "Manvi, are you okay? why are you saying stupid things?"

"Will you believe me Virat? Say Yes or No.", Manvi again asked,

Virat assured her, "Of course, yes, moreover we are best friends. Note that I will believe only if it is believable. Don't say things like there are aliens over here or something. Okay?

Manvi became irritated, "Its not a joke yaar. Its serious. I just saw Misha..."

Virat interrupting, "What the big deal yaar? I see her everyday."

Manvi irritated, "Let me complete virat. I saw Misha with a guy and they were..."

"They were?", Virat asked with questioning eyes"

Manvi completed the sentence, "They were kissing."

Virat was shocked, "What! Kissing?"

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Thats all, hope it was a nice update! If you liked it, then please comment and like the story.

Love,

Linaya

Edited by Linaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome to the forum

i liked ur story something different its really an amazing with cricket story i wasbefore watching the cricket and now not at all but i really liked the story pls go on
Edited by dairymilk12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsum update!!!
Virat as cricketer...n Manvi as journalist...quite different...luvd it n well written
Guess he wont belive Manvi...
Its really interesting...plzz cont soon...wud luv to recieve pm for ur future updates!!! 😊
Edited by alicemath - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I LOVED IT.
👏👏👏
PLZ CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow virat as cricketer n manvi as a journalist
amazing idea
awww manvi so in love with virat😉
but misha😡
in the starting i was so afraid that may be virat n misha were kising but so happy just like manvi that misha was kising someone else
just hope virat will believe her or see them both with his own eyes
plzzz cont soon
it really different n a good concept😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys!

Thanks alot to all those who commented!

Here goes the story!

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Virat was shocked, " What! Kissing???"

Manvi insisted, "Yes, Virat, believe me! I saw it with my two eyes."

Virat replied in a cool manner, "I guess, something has happened to you yaar! You are tired that random thoughts are coming to your mind! Now, go and take rest! Let's talk afterwards."

"But..", Manvi tried to defend herself.

Virat kept on interrupting her, "No buts and ifs. Now go!"

He pushed her out of the room and said a sweet, "Bye", and then closed the door.

Manvi was sad, "He didn't believe me! He has always understood my every situations even before I told him. But now, why??", she thought.

She left, completed her work and finally slept in tiredness still not able to believe the fact that her best friend rejected her statement.

She was so sad! But she was determined that she will show Misha's real face to Virat soon with adequate proof.

On the other hand, Virat didn't even think once more about what Manvi said.

He was totally blind in Misha's fake love which has even made him capable enough not to believe his BFF!

The next morning dawned. Manvi and Virat had an off day.

They both decided to enjoy the day in which Manvi went out for a film with her friend and Virat went for fishing which was his hobby!

Manvi took the tickets and went. She was over- excited cause she has not watched any movie since ages due to her busy schedule. Mean while Misha was there in the same theatre with a guy.

Destiny was with Manvi who got Misha infront of her eyes and no doubts, it was the second time, she has seen her.

She was determined that she won't leave this chance. "What to do?!", "What to do?!"

Her mind kept on asking. Yes, finally she got it. She took her mobile and tried to click photos of both of them together.

But what to do?! She was helpless! The phone's battery was DEAD!

She had nothing else to do, other than watching Misha cheating Virat!

She felt hopeless, irritable and extremely uncomfortable. She couldn't enjoy the movie at all.

Waiting, for the Interval to come, she rushed out without even minding her friend. She had only one word in her mind, "Inform Virat.."

But she was not at all sure that Virat would believe her, she has started losing trust in him. But she had to make him believe!

Still destiny was not with her, she realized Virat was not in his room, he has gone out! She didn't know what to do!

But she knew one thing that she could do nothing else but to wait for Virat to come!

After saying the receptionist to call her when Virat comes, she went and sat in the guest room.

Second, minutes and even hours passed by. Due to extreme tiredness, slowly her eyes closed and she slipped into sleep.

She was woken by a tap on her shoulder, she opened her eyes, it was the receptionist.

She said, "Ma'am, Virat sir is here."

Manvi was happy, "Thank You for informing me."

She rushed into his room. He was like so surprised to see her.

He asked, "What happened?"

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That's all. Do you think that Virat will believe Manvi? Share your thoughts in the comment box.

Please encourage me by commenting and pressing the like button.

Please don't go without commenting. It really encourages me to update soon.

Love,

Linaya

Edited by Linaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update. . . i hop virat believs manvi this tym. . . plz pm me wen u update

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