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Posted: 12 years ago
Im so sorry ! I missed out on the updates, but luckily I caught up with it now !

And Im so glad I did !
Whatever Khushi went through she didnt deserve, nobody deserves that, and that pretty much explains why she was the way she was. And you finally put an end to the constant nagging about the therapist there ! So Arnav did affect her so much ? It often happens doesnt it, that the people whom we think wont affect us a bit, affect us in much more stronger ways than we can ever think of !

And Arnav ! *sigh* So he finally put into words what he has been going through for ages ! Yes, what happened to Lavanya was bad, she deserves better than him. But being in a marriage, feeling stiffles and letting the other person think its their fault, isnt right ttoo ! So *kudos* to Arnav for ending it with Lavanya !

And the ending , it really did make me smile ! So finally, I can sleep peacefully, knowing and dreaming that this time, it is for the right !

Thank you for writing this Masam ! An absolute amazing work it is !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Your FF's always keep me thinking...the characters you bring out are always so perfectly written...

Love the ending and loved the story...

It was as If Arnav was her savior...


Very diff...superbly written.
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Posted: 12 years ago
read the last few chaps!!

AMAZING STORY!!

and i apologize for going MIA for a while!!

loved this different version of khushi and arnav!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the late reply.. A fantastic story.. Arnav's pain, his guilt.. Khushi going thru a tough time.. And 2 yrs pass and they meet again.. This time for the right.. Wow, I loved this and the ending even more.. Thank you..
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Posted: 12 years ago
i had it book marked for quiet some time and finally read it last night.
it was actually not my thing, i really try to stick to fan fictions that if not exactly similar to ippknd keeps the essence of the character intact and your story had neither of these things yet i read it.
i am not going to lie and say that it moved me emotionally etc but yes it gripped me and made me feel especially the last part it made me feel so much, despair for her, pride on her and so much more. the title is so perfect that i really cant imagine how u found it, no other title would have suited it better. in the end when she was talking abt what was wrong and what she thought was right, it was a marvellous conversation. i guess it must have been difficult to pull it off this well but u did gr8.
awesome work. i would love to read any other ff or ss of your now. keep up the good work.
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Posted: 12 years ago
read in a go .its really a different story
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg.. Can't believe I missed this beautiful story...
I didn't expect the end would b this but loved the way u twisted the story...
My heart goes for khushi she had gone so much in her life n finally now something is going to be right...
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
I came across this SS as a recommendation. I really applaud
the way you have written arhi in a very total different
setting. The story was gripping and loved how the characters
churned by the emotions they were undergoing had reacted to
each other. But most of all loved khushi's character for being
strong.
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Posted: 12 years ago
What an amazing story.
You've written it beautifully.

The story line is different.
The complexed characters are a delight to read

Good one.
Edited by IronButterfly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I found your SS through Rasgulla. I loved the way you wrote such dark story in very subtle way. Very intense and bold but everything abt it felt right. Great job!!

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