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fhussain237

@fhussain237

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Yay a new story :-)
So arnav n lavanya are married n khushi a hacker.a interesting start
Its very different from your other stories
Looking forward to read more hun
Continue soon

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

oh a new story from you

wow thats superb news

great start

continue soon dear and pls pm me when u update next - will send u a buddy request now

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

So much laughing, I totally thought it would be Khushi - and there, it was Lavanya. Twiggy is hooked, right there!

And a hacker ! That has gotto be the quirkiest profession anyone has ever imagined Khushi in.. to add to that she swears with ease, and has piercings on her chin and tongue...now what is she up to ?

I guess that whole get-up is the reason Arnav gave her a look of "disapproval" - one look and he's made an opinion. Or has he? You will tell me more and in good time, I know. Arnav is a mystery here - his relationship with Lavanya is clearly not as rosy as it looks through Khushi's eyes - Lavanya cries secretly and their happiness is not effortless; and of course - whats Arnav without a smouldering look in his eyes? :D

You've got me, Masam. Now gimme more!

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Unresd on page 1 =)

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

A hacker, thats the most unexpected profession to be imagined for Khushi & that makes your story pretty interesting. There are troubles in Arnav's paradise & khushi's life is not so good, lets see how you unfolds this story. Looking forward to read more 😊

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Sadaf Rizwan

@saduf

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

No doubt u r a brilliant writer and u have got fantastic brains to come up with an entirely different and unique concept...first chapter is amazing though i didn't know what the story is about...but i simply love this chap...i know u r a busy person but still plz try to update soon coz otherwise i will spend my days and nights thinking about what is gonna be in next chapter

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Summer99

@Summer99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

nice update

A and l a couple though at the start i thought it was A and K

Really enjoyed reading about this tapori and hacker khushi😆

waiting for how the story unfolds

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awww Doctor Sahiba again...i thought it was a simple love story..and then u were delaying Mrs. Raizada's name there my intution told me the wife is nt my angel then boom u declared the name Lavanya..and Arnav in a house like that..so unlikey...when La said house is perfect just like our mrge i was like what the man...then came Arnav's reply what is their mrge like nt so directly...pretending to be happy nd all is well in our la la land,r we La...for hw long..then came our lil angel or may be devil here with her f**king word and her f**king job...Hacker?f**king money hacker..again my intiution telling me Khushi being the reason behind Mr.Raizada in a dirty brocken apartment as her neighbour...molten caramel nd hazel green clashed already twice within a minute..began their eye sex...and the ring a ring on Khushi's finger telling something??oh and i love this grey shaded Khushi more...no mentioning about If Only...after all it is ur itchy fingers giving us tinkling sensation .bring it on...