Smitar's OS2:Finding Khushi#3Part15(1-3)Pg122(1/4)

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#881

Read the chapter last night and commented and now reading Rulama's posts and commenting again!

I love Rulama's analysis as much as I love the actual story!

It's such a enjoyment to read. The quotes and so on you use are lovely!

Thanks for those pleasing posts Rulama! :D

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#882

awesome

i hv no word for this Arnav

omg he is so dam sweet

n romanticcc

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#883

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP
Read the chapter last night and commented and now reading Rulama's posts and commenting again!

I love Rulama's analysis as much as I love the actual story!

It's such a enjoyment to read. The quotes and so on you use are lovely!

Thanks for those pleasing posts Rulama! :D

Its generous of you to say so.

Thanks a lot!

Rashmi.

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cherry227

@cherry227

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#884

aww... im loving this unbearably sweet and naughty arnav :)))

poor khushi... i can understand her dilemma... the cruel laad governer has become her sapnon ka rajkumar...

and even devi maiyya wont stand by her LOL

i love the way hes wooing her smita... and love the way it is expressed in your writing :D

keep them coming dear...

missed your updates these last three days :(((

thanks a million for the pm rashmi :)))

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annieK

@annieK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#885

Lovely long update ...three in one is the way to go ...loved it !

Little touches ...the cars Arnav sent for them ...the kangans slipped on with love ...the extras , Cinderella slippers ...the love being showered upon her , the sheer bliss of being valued and adored by her love ...the caring that overwhelmed a slip of a girl who'd never have dared to hope for even one tenth of the same from a self confessed cynic ...beautiful !

Thnx for th pm @rashmi

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831628

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#886

Smita!!!!!! You master writer (create wonderful stories) !!!!

Rashmi !!!!! You master interpret (Indepth analysis)!!!!!!

You both Rock !!!!!! 😃

Cannot put it words how thoroughly i enjoy re-reading it.

Loved it thoroughly.

Waiting for next part.

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831628

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Posted: 12 years ago

#887

Originally posted by: smitar

Too tired. Had a terrible day running around in circles. Am going to write Part 16 now. Hoping to post it late tonight or early tomorrow!

Bin Likhe Sanam, Mar Mitenge Ham, Aenge Merii Updatewaa...

Likhna Hii Padega, Sajanaa, Zaalim Hai ArHi Kii Lagii...😃

Smita