Smitar's OS2:Finding Khushi#3Part15(1-3)Pg122(1/4)

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Breath-Mark

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Posted: 12 years ago

#861

Lovely storyline. Was awesome catching up with the updates.

He is so guilty and had apologized for his mistakes. I hope she confesses too! 😳

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foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#862

Last few chapters were amazing! Arnav is not leaving any chance to convey the massage that he is not leaving until he is sure that Khushi has given her consent for the marriage. Enjoyed the family teasing directed towards the duo and Arnav presenting the collection of his mother for his bride was amazing and when mami was thinking that Akash was slow Arnav has already given a hug and a kiss to Khushi when bidding good bye what a contrast!

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rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#863

Originally posted by: sayali_d23
Ayeeree ayeeree Rashmii...

Layee ree layee ree khushi...
Update ki raining hone llagii...
Coments se thread ki shobha badhanee lagii... 🤗

Thanks dear🤗

That was a nice warm welcome.

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aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#864

Khushi is slowly melting with Arnav's love and care..

It's amazing to see this caring side of Arnav.

Loved it..

Thanks for the PM😊

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rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#865

Originally posted by: pepples_joy
Glad to Have you back Rashmi..!!!!!!🤗🤗

Me too dear!🤗🤗🤗🤗

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robinhood008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#866

That was an amazinggg update!!!

It was sooo cutee the way they went thru the albun
N haha out of sll khushi wondered if nanaji mustache tickled nani...lol

Yayeee the sandals were perfect fit!!!
Arnav iss sooo in love with khushi!!!

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Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#867

Fab updates!!

You have covered the journey from ASR to Arnav very well.. This OS is better than the serial since you kept every character intact not OTT. ASR & Khushi really conveyed their feelings by talking & not just unnecessarily shouting at each other.

All the scenes between Arhi were so well explained, sweet & meaningful.. You took the important scenes from IPK & build your story around it very nicely. At least here ASR got to know that the plants & letter were from Khushi & not La.

The scenes which I really loved in this story till now-

1. ASR apologizing & talking to La.

2. Khushi disclosing her hurt & taunts from ASR to him.

3. ASR & Khushi discussing his past.

4. ASR's redemption.

5. The bangle scene.

Waiting for the next update!

Thanks for the pm.

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ArSh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#868

Loved all the updates for ch. 15! I love how Arnav and Khushi are slowly getting closer to one another. Those bangles he gave her are beautiful! Khushi is finally starting to understand Arnav better. I hope she says yes to the wedding soon! She has already started accepting Arnav's mother's gifts, so hopefully she puts her acceptance in words. Can't wait to read the next part!