Smitar's OS2:Finding Khushi#3Part15(1-3)Pg122(1/4)

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arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#621

What a beautiful update...

LOVED IT!

You have such a beautiful way of writing :)

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Smitaajii... Im so glad tht Garima ji was not in pic in Arnav baba ka past...

Liked the new twist you gave to the story... Khusiii talking to dukling... 😆

waiting for the todays part... Bher is todays update??? Or mere demads ke bina update nahi karogi esaa oath liyee hoo?

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smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#623

Originally posted by: sayali_d23
Smitaajii... Im so glad tht Garima ji was not in pic in Arnav baba ka past...

Liked the new twist you gave to the story... Khusiii talking to dukling... 😆

waiting for the todays part... Bher is todays update??? Or mere demads ke bina update nahi karogi esaa oath liyee hoo?

Aapki kavita ke bina hamara din shuru hi nahi hota he, darl!! Kya kare! Aadat se majboor!😉

Kavita Likhiye! Let your shayiri inspire me to write Part 15...😆

Smita

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shradha_23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#624

Awesome
Loved last two updates 😊

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#625

Okk... Here youu gooo

Chand sitare.. Fool aur taree yeh tohh sab purane hain..
Taza taza khabar mile hain.. Smitaji update likhane gaye hainnn...😛 😆 😆

Edited by sayali_d23 - 12 years ago

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smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#626

Originally posted by: sayali_d23
Okk... Here youu gooo

Chand sitare.. Fool aur taree yeh tohh sab purane hain..
Taza taza khabar mile hain.. Smitaji update likhane gaye hainnn...😛 😆 😆

So sweet!😆

Here's a poem from Arnav:😉 (Part 15)

Mujhe haq he!

Uski haath kas ke pakdoon, Mujhe Haq he!
Usse Dekhta jaaoon, Mujhe Haq he!
Uspe ghooosa ho jaaon, Mujhe Haq he!
Uspe pyaar barsaaon, Mujhe Haq He!

Mujhe Haq he! Mujhe Haq he!

He Koi ShaQ?

Smita😉

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Varsha Dutt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#627

Awesome Kavitas Smita and Sayali 😊

Great Creativity guys 😃

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#628

Originally posted by: smitar

So sweet!😆

Here's a poem from Arnav:😉 (Part 15)

Mujhe haq he!

Uski haath kas ke pakdoon, Mujhe Haq he!
Usse Dekhta jaaoon, Mujhe Haq he!
Uspe ghooosa ho jaaon, Mujhe Haq he!
Uspe pyaar barsaaon, Mujhe Haq He!

Mujhe Haq he! Mujhe Haq he!

He Koi ShaQ?

Smita😉

super duper ⭐️

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#629

Originally posted by: smitar

So sweet!😆

Here's a poem from Arnav:😉 (Part 15)

Mujhe haq he!

Uski haath kas ke pakdoon, Mujhe Haq he!
Usse Dekhta jaaoon, Mujhe Haq he!
Uspe ghooosa ho jaaon, Mujhe Haq he!
Uspe pyaar barsaaon, Mujhe Haq He!

Mujhe Haq he! Mujhe Haq he!

He Koi ShaQ?

Smita😉

Smitaajii... I m sooo proud of youu... 🤗
Lekinn esaka matalab update se chutti nahi milegi...
Where is the updateee... Quality compromise karake i wrote tht rocking kavita... Aur abhi taq new update postnahi kiyee raheee... 😭