Swaron OS/SS: The day that changed the life Part 3 Pg 7

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Part 1

The day had just began. The sun was showing its presence from the midst of snow covered mountains. Birds were chirping as if singing in the celebration of a new day. Swayam loved these natural wonders. It was very different from populated Mumbai. It was a routine for him to come here every year to recollect the memories of his childhood with his grandparents. this environment helps him to clear his mind off from the tensions in Mumbai.

He was just wandering in the woods of the valley. Suddenly he heard a faint sound of crying. He followed to the sound. A girl wearing a white suit sitting on a rock in the spring. How can someone cry in a beautiful environment, Swayam thought. He didn't know why but he wanted to talk with her n solve her problems. But he didn't have the courage to walk to her. He hid behind a tree n stood there watching the girl n mustering up his confidence to talk with her. How will she react? After-all he was a stranger to her.

"DIDI" He heard a shout. A little boy of age 10 came towards the girl. The girl turned her face to the boy. Swayam was mesmerized by the beauty in front of him. Her eyes, her facial features were perfect, her hair was blowing with the wind some were on her face. She was looking like an angel for which god took his special time to create.

His thoughts were disturbed by the voice of the boy, "I'm hungry n it is getting very late. Come lets go home." Girl just nodded n wiped her tears. She stood from the stone, washed her face in the water n walked with the little boy. the boy was continuously blabbering something but she was lost somewhere.

Swayam just wanted to console her n make her happy but he couldn't. He stood there watching the retreating figure.


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Res.


iske aur bhi parts hain?
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Awesome start.
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Nice start :-) can't wait to read more
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REs plz only 30 min 😛
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nice start!!!but why did you have to leave it like that i want to know what happens next!!continue soon!!!
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Really short, but an interesting read. Continue soon, and thanks for the PM.
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Awesome... :)
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hey awesome part :)
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nice start..
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