Swaron OS/SS: The day that changed the life Part 3 Pg 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Hey I loved both the parts they were super awesome..
One look at sharon's face and swayam is already smitten..😳.
I wonder why was sharon crying like that and that crying troubles swayam inspite of him not knowing her yet connections are already made..😊.
Keep up the good work kri and update it soon after your exams I'll be waiting for this one..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Awesome start..Do continue
Thanx for PM


Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3

They both entered the office. As Swayam look Sharon, world around him stopped. She was the same girl who he saw in the morning. But the only difference he found right now was that she was smiling and her eyes had this different twinkle in them as the kids had surrounded her and were jumping as she was giving each one of them a handful of chocolates.. His lips curved into a crescent as he saw her smile.. There was something about there that didn't fail to awe him.. He stood rooted to his place as Akash had also rushed to meet their Sharon didi!'
Sharon' he mumbled under his breath and continued looking at her..
Didi Me!! Me!!' he heard Akash going and standing next to her
One minute! One minute kids! Wait kiddo's.. You all got your chocolates what about my thank you gift??' Sharon asked the kids with a cute pout..
Swayam grinned wider looking at her.. Then he saw Sharon sitting down on her knees and all the kids pecking her cheek one by one.. With each peck Sharon's eyes closed as she felt the unadulterated love from the kids seep into her.. Once all of them stood there munching on their chocolates Sharon stood up and that is when she noticed a young guy stand there and gaping at her.. She felt butterflies in her stomach at his gaze.. Unintentionally a soft blush formed up her cheek and she looked away for a second to hide it.. She looked back at him and saw that he had not blinked once yet.. She wasn't uncomfortable with his gaze and that surprised her too.. She noticed the his masculine features, from his silky soft hair to his chocolaty brown orbs.. And that's something that had caught her attention.. Those eyes seemed so truthful and loyal with a depth of emotions in them that surely can get anyone lost in them.. She herself felt this pull towards them and didn't want to tear her gaze..
She suddenly felt a tug on her hand and was bought out of her thought.. She looked down to find Akash standing there trying to get her attention.. She bent down to his level..
Hey Camp!' Sharon said while wrapping her hands around his shoulder..
Didi I want you to meet my new friend' said an excited Akash
Just then Kaka entered in the picture as he was looking for Swayam.. He came and patted on his shoulder Baba I was looking for you' Kaka saw Sharon standing there holding Akash's hand
Sharon dear, How are you? It's been long I've seen you..'
I'm fine kaka.. Yeah I know we been missing each other just by a few minute every Sunday..' said Sharon smiling warmly at Kaka..
Oh by the way, meet baba.. I mean Swayam.. You remember Bade sahib and bade memsaab had spoken to you about him.. (to Swayam) and baba this is Sharon.. She is the girl your grandparent told you about'
Sharon looked at him a bit shocked at first but then relaxed a bit as he wasn't a stranger and she had finally met the guys whom she was told so much about.. Swayam looked at her and forward his hand..
Hi.. Swayam.. Swayam Shekhawat..' Sharon gladly accepted his hand
I know.. I'm Sharon.. Sharon Rai Prakash..'
They both smiled at each other.. But everything went all silent.. Awkwardly silent.. Kaka looked at both of them and thought of leaving them all alone as he was well aware of the purpose why Swayam's grandparents had spoken so much about them to each other.. He called all the kid and took them to the play room..
Swayam and Sharon looked at the kids leaving and smiled.. They again looked at each other and smiled not knowing how to start a conversation.. So finally Swayam thought of breaking the ice..
So.. Let go out.. In the garden.. maybe?! Only.. if you a comfortable..'
Sharon smiled and hesitantly said Sure.. Sure'
Swayam step aside and gestured saying After you'
Both Swayam and Sharon moved out and sat by the step in the garden.. It was nice and sunny.. But not hot.. So it felt quite pleasant with the birds chirping.. Swayam felt this unknown happiness as she had accepted to talk to him.. He was practically dancing from the inside and the smile didn't leave his face for a single moment.. But also he didn't know why was he feeling so..
Here Sharon felt a bit nervous only because she didn't know what to say.. She was continuously fiddling with her fingers.. Both sat in silence stealing glances of one another..
Sharon remembered incident that took place a while ago where she had caught him starring at her.. There was something different about that moment.. Those eyes.. There were so captivating.. (mentally slapping herself) God what am I thinking about.. Sharon think straight.. You've just met him.. But he is a perfect gentleman as per what I've heard and seen so far.. And a Handsome Gentleman (blushed at her own thought) Gosh! Think straight.. What do we talk about?! Say something Sharon.. But what?'
Her thoughts were broken by him..
So.. You live here only? I mean I thing town?'
Yeah.. I love this place.. What about you? I mean I know you don't live here.. So..'
Before she could explain what she was trying to ask Swayam answered smiling at her..
Yeah I was just here to relax a bit.. A short holiday just need a break from the busy life at times'

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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
i guess i never commented on dis SS before...sorry for dat... 😔

now coming to d fst part i loved d way story has begin...
itz something new and interesting...
love d way u have portrayed both d characters...
der is something mysterious about sharon...
and gud to see swayam concerned for her...
ashram part and sharon asking for return gift dt was really cute... 😳
now waiting for swaron convo in next update...
update soon... 😃


Edited by sweetdivya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Short nd sweet...

swayam did not blink, jst looking at her...
in d midst of what to say nd what not...great dear...
their family has planned it.. wow..
update soon n thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
😛 read all the 3 parts all together
really loved the story ... u write beautifully 😃 👏
swayam was soo much curious to console her and know why she was crying 😉 😳
so finally they both met in the 3rd part 😃
really looking forward for the next part 😛
thanks for the PM ... update soon
MINI
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Sweet update
Full of love and cuteness
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww... awsm... just read all 3 updates... its superb...
keep writing... & plz update soon... 😊 god bless
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Read all three updates in one go...
A very different concept... Loved it...
Sharon was crying... I'm curious to know why...
Their first encounter also superb... Nicely penned...
Update Soon...
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
read all d parts nw😳
awesomee t s👏
continue soon😊

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