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lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Freddy thrives on fear, Khushi :D

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Part Two

What a coincidence! I watched a horror movie last night - The Ring and rings. There is no fun like watching a horror movie, alone at night in a dark room :D Yes, I am weird that way :D

I so want to have a Freddy Krueger marathon! It was very mean of NK to tease her like that. Heart attack aa jaata toh? But Khushi has Fortitude as well - yes she is the strong one too :D

I hope Arnav is safe :)

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Part Three

The first part of the update in a few lines shows a sad truth - the inequality prevalent in our country :(

She sees the white light before she closes her eyes and he sees the white light when he opens them :)

With their collective strength they will make Khush's life better :)

A really nice TS :D

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

It's beautiful Vee. I loved the title of the story. So apt. The understanding , the love between Arnav n Khusi without much word was the highlight of the story. And yes thnx for the happy ending. I was really scared reading the parts...

Thnx to Sayiuu for recommending this..

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Wow this was an amazing and brilliant short story, beautiful and exceptionally well written. Awww loved the fact that Arnav saved the little boy as well and they both have adopted him, so beautiful. A special thank you to rasgulla_sp for recommending this mind blowing story to me xx

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simran

@crazymg.04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

this is so well written...the end was the best part👏

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Jessica

@jessicad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

I am so hopelessly in love with every single thing you wrote that I think putting it into words will sound inconsequential to what I actually feel.

My love, you are so good, that I am in tears right now, and why?

The last two lines, that's why!

"After all this time?"

..."Always"

The usage of that one poignant dialog from the best book ever completely turned the meaning of the story for me.

They never needed BIG words to define their love ever. It was there. Always.

Strength to extricate himself from the ruins of the train, yet stand up for the boy in his almost dead state, whilst not forgetting his Happiness who waited for him back at home -HIM.

Strength to compose her rattling nerves when she almost experienced near death akin to her parents when on the other hand her only Reason to live was hanging between life and death- HER.

Strength to find solace in each other's silence and presence, yet understand each other through their silence- THEM.

I love how you've applied the hazel eyed boy Khush there, implying him as Khushi's former self.

Ask me why my comment is here After all this time?

I can only say I Always wanted to read, but never got around to it.

Glad I did though.

❤️