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arshiyakanishka

@arshiyakanishka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

First and foremost loved the unique narration...almost detached but effective.Loved the cute convo between Arnav and Khush in the first part.I had a smile on my face as i was reading that part and *boom* the train derails!I am thinking where's this leading with Arnav loosing sensation in his legs and the rescuing team almost missing him.

The second part with Khushi getting subconsciously aware that something is not right...With all the nightmare and restlessness.NK and Khushi's almost brush with an accident had again my heart beats increasing!

The way Arnav knew that Khushi will understand what to do about Khush and that she really understood speaks volumes about their connection and their relationship.Loved the way he said"She'll be the most beautiful woman in the whole wide world".

After all this time?

Always

Nothing to say about this...this said it all.

Wonderful writing Vee.

I am glad that i read it.

Edited by arshiyakanishka - 12 years ago

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Hello there!

Well, I most certainly loved this three shot and even more than that I loved your way of writing! :)

I present you with a quote, which seems to be my current commenting obsession! Hehe. I mean, when will I put my love for literature and amazing memory to use? ;)

For the bond you should between Arnav-Khushi, even when they were separated.

"Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage." - Lao Tzu.

Love,

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 12 years ago

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

"After all this time?"

"Always"

Do you know that those lines alone, all by themselves, have the ability to make me cry. Coupled with such a beautifully written TS, you did justice to those lines.

I'm sorry for the late response. I had too many stories to read and comment on. Just read this in one go. It was excellently written. Keep up the good work!

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

lovely shot...

thnks for the link

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glimmernglitter

@glimmernglitter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

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happy_cupcake

@happy_cupcake

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

thanku for the happy ending 😊

it was so beautiful

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nj.123

@nj.123

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

BRILLIANT! I don't have to say anything more but the I still will😆

This was so lovely, the way you shaped the ending and made it a happy one, it was wonderful to read and the last lines ~sigh~ I loved it very very much.

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Shrutee

@Shrutee7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

I've bookmarked this on my to-do list (I might just do it😉!) and will read it soon
Do you have a work index? Or perhaps I can rely on your amazing pimping..I mean marketing skills?

Can't wait!

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heavenspirit

@heavenspirit

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

WOW..!!
so serene...
i mean...so less dialog between Arnav and Khushi...but still you showed everything...
Fortitudo...
really...love...passion...hazel eyes...
wonderful...
loved it..!!

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

this is one of the most beautifully written TS i have ever read...
loved the two boys, loved the resemblances of khush with her, loved the way Arnav thought of her when he noticed the boy's hazel eyes..
loved the way you showed the bond between this two in a subtle yet in a definite and certain way...
love the way Arnav spoke about his wife to the nurse...loved the feeling of bliss you created in mere three chapters.. hats off.. :)