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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

awsome os
lykd it
do write all ur swaron work in kr version
i'll luvd to read them

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Good one loved it..
Swaron and cute fights..

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Trailblazer

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Great Work and beautifully done -Marium-...Ur concepts are always fresh & new...keep going 👏👏

When ever I red ur SS post , I felt that u are so much in to the characters...I meant the dialogues u have assigned/written is so natural...

Thank U 4 this Beautiful OS...

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shelly_Arsha

@shelly_Arsha

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

amazing keep the good work up 😊

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Swayam challenging Sharon. Role reversal thing was well written. Thnx for the PM.

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Tooba

@maliha_khan

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Beautiful os... Bechara swayam Khana b nai parka saka n I love da way both understand their mistake widout speaking a word...

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nightlife1881

@Priyanka_G14

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

awesome story

thanx 4 d pm 😊

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kuhu bhatta

@kuhu_Arsha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

wowww awsummm os,,,,,😃

i m a KRians,,,bt read both d version😃

n it was jst fabulous,,👍🏼,,,,,,,loving it,,,,,,❤️

gr8 writing👏

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rinku bathija

@rinkubathija12

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

amazing work..! 😃 one day challenge... hehehe... swayam and sharon both had to suffer because of just a challenge,...! swayam worked whole day, cooked; i mean tried to cook..😆and also tried to clean house but all his efforts were in vain... :P and on the other hand sharon tried to manage his office but found it boring and too difficult to handle... tabhi kehte hain "jis ka kaam usi ko saaje, koi aur kare to thun thun baaje" this line suited them best...🤣.. you know you should have also tried phone exchange... :P aabhi aabhi add dekhi thi mene... but i also believe that this was better than just a phone exchange...! totally it was fun to read...! thankxx for pmz and do send me pm whenever you write... i love your writing...

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Mind blowing OS Maruim...You know off course i read Swaron version 😛 they swapped their duties for one day...Nice challenge...Swayam made a mess at home and Sharon in office 😆 Loved the way you have shown that how much they were struggling to do the other person's job and how difficult it is to manage...it was wonderful...Loved the end part it was cute...your work is always brilliant n this was fabulous as usual...loved it ❤️ ❤️

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