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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Aww..so sweet n real os..
Really amazing..!!
Luvd it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
😆 swayam singing kyunki saas bhi kabhi bahu thi..
god marium tat was hillarious.. the sharon nd swayam's assistant... infact the whole os was funny
nice idea😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
awesome awesome awesome
well done lady dinosoar
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Again! Both versions were flawless!!😃

Yes, I know your waiting for updates but I have final board exams coming up..so hopefully after that I'll be back on track😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Hey Marium
both d versions r amazing yaar. N posting of work on such intresting idea was amazing
cuz this kind of fight common today bt in d end both of them understand what they meant to each other

coming to updates, especially i like swaron bt kr too nice

swayam fight with her on issue nd in d end thy challenge each other to take their duties for one day.
Swayam doing household work n he didn't even knw, how to do hehehehe 🤣
even in whole house he create mess with his duster. He break sharon's beautiful vass, surely now sharon wil kill him 🤣

even sharon bored by her work nd when his PA take entry
sharon started murmering for her behaviour and sure swayam too
then one of swayam client poured all anger on bechari sharon bt sharon maintaned her calm

swayam shopping was fab nd last item shopping embarassed swayam nd he also felt how girl being victim of sum of bad boys in mall.

Sharon also cried cuz mehta hell angry on her nd she understand how much swayam face prob in office.
Swayam also understand how much sharon maintain home with all d possiblity nd plus facing some embarassment

at night, sharon what will be happen in their home without anything she started clean house n made dinner for them
nd swayam maintaned both d clients

end of os was nice with their confession

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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Amazing OS with different concept Marium 👏
Swayam challenged sharon so he had bear the consequences also after all she is siren ,swayam doing household work and especially supermarket scene was too hilarious 😆 and also I loved the convo between sharon and swayam's P.A, sharon jealous of her 😆
By the end of the day ,realisation stuck to their minds .. As always it was awesome OS 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Itz so awesome..
I'm basically a KR fan. Bt Have read both of KR n SS versions..
Luvd ur writing style..
Do pm me plz when U write something on KriYaansh..
Much Luv
Shukti
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
ohkay well.. firstly.. i read ur story for the first time...

and i loved it...

yes.. me a kriyaansh fan...but i read both the versions..

and both of them were simply amazing...

truly said... "jiska kaam ussi ko saaje" ... hehe... hope u understand the meaning... lol...

in all.. simply amazing...

loved it..!!! 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Wow...i mean wow...marium u r really a grt writer...i just loved the challenge
Specially the Balaji part N shopping part 😆
Swayam N Rey singing n shaking their bum while singing the title track l 🤣 🤣
All in all best os 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
enjoyed readg it...
message behind dis os was nice.. u have beautifully penned it down..
i love ur writtg skills n different concepts u come up with..

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