SS and KR OS!Separate versions |One day challenge| - Page 2

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

ok so technically i'm actually the first one to comment...yippee...

this was awonderful os...i read the swaron one...it suited them better.

loved the concept...is it btw inspired from the idea telephone exchange vala advertisement? just asking.

your writing was a dream...loved loved loved it.

keep writing marium.. be back soon with new write up...demand kar rahi hoon...you are amazing.

love---medha.

The idea was randomly stuck my mind then afterwards i realized that how similar it is to that advertisement. So yeah it's a personal idea.

Yeah, will surely give an OS..may be this weekend only! 😊😊

Awesome update...
It was daam hilarious 😆
Specially the Balaji part N shopping part 😆
Swayam N Rey singing n shaking their bum while singing the title track l 🤣 🤣
All in all best os 😊

amazing os👏

great both os... loved it... and awesome...

Yippee another os and that from you is a treat to read
First of all swaron fight n challenge to each other was nice
Swayam doing household work and sharon doing office work
Hehe mrs. Chopra's blast n sharon crying
Poor swayam has to buy sanitry napkin rofl
Over all super os keep writing Daily
Thanx for pm

They say men and women are two wheels of a cart. The complete each other and also compliment each other. There could not have been any better example than this OS. In the middle of argument, they said things they should not have and they realized it a hard way. Loved the way you made them realize each others worth.

Amid all this, there were some hilarious portions as well. Like when Swayam ( Rey) was looking for first aid to tend his cut. he was thinking why Sharon (Kriya) had to keep things in proper places? Duh!! Because things are meant to be kept in places so that you don't have to run all around to look for a single thing🤣. And Sharon's (Kria's) conversation with her husband's personal assistant, total fun!!!


Nice work, Marium!!! Keep writing more!!

they both were messing things as both were illiterate in others deptt so itwas gr8 to see there realization

awsum & fabulous os
Luv it kr doing work vice versa
Pls pm me
Wen u update on kriya

wooow