An ArHi SS: Scandalous *Thread Three*

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mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

i am in rush nowadays i dont remember whether i posted anything for this update!but superb writing yaar do you plan to end with a cliffhanger it seems to come to you effortlessly and now i am worried over what khush decides and arnav reacts...waiting for more scandal...

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Preethi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

Hii,

I had read ur FF's a long time ago...But couldn't comment as i had no time too coz of my exams...

I Love ur writing...The story is aptly titled "Scandalous"...Now can't wait for knowing the answer?!!!!!! will Khushi go with her mom or stay with Arnav...

Do update soon !!!!!!!

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Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Sorry for the late comment...

It's futile to predict the directions of your stories.. My brian was running on all the possible routes but I never thought of Shyam to have a liking for Anjali. That was one superb twist without getting into the cliched negative situations (like Shyam as villian)... Anjali also seems to like/admire him.. Poor soul Shyam has a sword named ASR hanging over his head :)

Everyone should have sisters like Anjali & Payal who are always there to shower their unconditional love & support on the family.

Glad that Garima took the initiative of calling Khushi back home after the shocking incident they all went through..

I loved & enjoyed the update a lot!!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks for the PM..

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Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#414

In this story...so far...this was climax chapter. You surprised me with the fact that Shyam was single and in love with Anjali...that was a serious twist. Also the feelings may be returned!!!!

Loved Payal and your exploration of the Guptas culpability into forcing Khushi into a marriage.

Arnav and Khushi...these two definitely can not stay away from each other and you honestly highlighted that issue...I respect your handling of that so much...neither right nor wrong...but an issue all the same.

Once Payal comes with the offer to take back Khushi...you end on a suspense note...now I am scared Khushi will revert to the person she has been forced to be all her life...the grateful daughter.

I hope she either takes a chance on Arnav or becomes her own woman and carves out a life while he figures out and articulates what he feels.

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nazca

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Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Juhi, I am two minded

I want update because you know, I don't have to spell it.

I don't want update, the feel of SS approaching the count down is bothering. This ss is going to end will Juhi start other new or no. Please start a ss or ff.

As show ended lots have started watching other shows may be you are also watching some other show, may be you want to write in other forum, I love your writing but due to various constraints I can't watch any new show. If you are going to write in other show please let me know, I will try to watch the show to savour your writing.

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clarissajohn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: rulama

Thats OK dear,

When you churn out such good stuff we can afford to wait!

Take your sweet time!

Ha its ok give us fab update like always worth our wait . its in crucial point and you left is in cliff hanger so can wait for another day. No probes dear. Don't stress yourself. 😃