SS :A Night in the Rain:ArHi-Part 4b pg 43 updt

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Divya

@Divya1503

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Awesome update di!👏 waiting for the next!😳

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

wow...that was awesome...so what happened before 1 year??? and arnav let her fall to the pool..haww...and he jumps too...that was sweet of him by the way...and loved the update...so khushis a business development manager in a luxury hotel...hmm interesting... update soon...

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Claire0206

@Claire0206

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Very interesting Priya. Loved it hope you get time to update it soon.😊

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

reswa for my place. Will take time to read it and will give my feedback.

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Suchi

@ChitraF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

That was awesome.. looking forward to next part now..

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Jay

@Sharaa

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Mindblowing start priya...

Am crazy fan of ur crooners...

They r having spl place in my hearts while travelling down with IPK...

Crooner threads r my treasure land..

though am not active,i keep loving different analysis of you guys...

loved ur writing style...

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Btw,thanks for continue ur writing with ArHi...

Arhi in ur version always does some magic dear...

cant wait for Part 2...

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sadia

@sadianabil

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Nice update.

I wonder what happened to them 1 year, 3 months , 14 days & 9 hours ago.

"I wanted the cold water to first get senses back into your hot head -- and I jumped...to remind you...you are still my wife -- and I still have the hold on you...you can never drown...even if you want."--------- 😆 so ASR type dialogue!

Waiting for next chapter.

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PrashT

@PrashT

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Wonderful Priya Di👏👏

Our hunk wants to get her back..😳 I love that...😳

I wonder what could have happend that Khushi left

Continue Di.. wanna read moreee

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

awesome !!! Arnav and Khushi both stubborn... Arnav is proud of fact that he is more stubborn than her.. cool.. loved the update and story idea.. hope to read more.. will you pm me too...

do update soon... HAPPY WRITING 😊

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riti4u

@riti4u

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Intense and passionate..will love to see how this story unfolds..and how you reveal why khushi left him too...as always loved your work..😳..greedy for more!