SS :A Night in the Rain:ArHi-Part 4b pg 43 updt - Page 6

It's just awesome and very intriguing
Loved your way of narration

Interesting start...update soon..eager to know happens next 😃

Intresting concept and update!!!!

Okay….confession first……. I saw the "cover pi"c and "Barun in blue" in your siggy, I kept going back and forth between these two pics….☺️ Came out of Sapno Ki Duniya and after reading the pool scene went back to Sapno Ki Duniya!!

When the show was on, oh! How I wished these two fell in the pool….there was so much more the pool could have contributed to their romance but...

So thank you for fulfilling that wish thru your SS!!👍🏼

Love the start and thank you for keeping Arnav and Khushi true to their characters – Angry, arrogant Arnav and Fire, Feisty Khushi….👏

this ff is amazing,, i liked the fact tht he didn hold her hand for the 1st time n let her fall in the water,, so uncharacteristic of arnav,, the intensity has got me hooked.. plz update ,, i really wanna know,, wht compelled khushi to leave him for good,, y is she letting this hatred to rule over her heart,,

Hi Priya..

Originally posted by: jakhushi

Monday just got really better 😉.

And you have taken them to our City... Aren't you a darling. Just for that... A big hug.

So she ran and away..and both have it down to hours, the time they have spent apart. Now waiting for the revelation behind the running...and of course the passion that will come when Both turn 'stubborn'.

Loved the prologue especially... It had so much of restrained sparks... Sighhh.

Update soon... Don't make us wait. Pleeezzz.

ya when i write at work, there is always more restrain -- that goes for the prologue...😉😆

Hi Priya 😊
Awesome start and very intrigued to know what happens next.
I so miss the Crooner and your beautiful style of writing. You should make posts more often; I miss all the great writers of the forum..