SS :A Night in the Rain:ArHi-Part 4b pg 43 updt

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.Brooke.

@.Brooke.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Thanks for the update I was kept reading part 1.

Priya its very intense and the build up of the story is very interesting.I always wanted her to disappear from mandir after pugphere.For me it was Nainital and dhabba family.But you chose kolkata and it seems very classy. The song is good and I liked that you showed they shared some memories and Arnav introduced her to something new to her and his fav.

Looking forward for more😆

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

beautiful Priya...loving the intensity and the little flashback...sort of a glance back into their separation...

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priya

@priasweet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

wow amazing story
read both the parts awesome

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

i love this story

from prologue to chapter 2

there are intensity passion and pain to loss each other

please unfold the story soon

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sami99

@sami99

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Very interesting.looking forward for the next part.thanx

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barun ki deeewani

@.aarnav

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

lovely update😊

continue soon

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

What happened .. what happened .. what happened ..

LOL .. I will keep chanting till you decide to uncover. 😛

I knew it! Intensity is your other name. 😉

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nandu_2007

@nandu_2007

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Beautiful Priya !! It's so intense. Absolutely loved the 2 nd part .

Waiting for the next part 😊

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RajPreet_Preeto

@RajPreet_Preeto

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Thank you Priya for the beautiful updates. After a long time read a FF. It just felt like I am watching ARSHI (SARUN) playing their parts on TV. Love the intensity, the eye lock, the holding tightly by ASR. Possessive ASR, a delight to read. Thank you. Looking forward for next part. 👏

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

wow...this was interesting...yep so we got a sneak peak in to their past...and as usual ASR left her without consoling...oh god...and now hes here for her...so khushis boss knows about the marriage and i loved how he left her for arnav...that was a sweett gesture of him...hope they make up quickly...loved the update and waiting for the next...