SS :A Night in the Rain:ArHi-Part 4b pg 43 updt - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Ma'm It's freaking awesome! I have always loved your writing,,,,n this is just a wonderful way you have begun,,,

I lov the calculative Raizada..who first let her fall and dived in to rescue her and his dialogue on cold water!

Keep writing darling looking forwards for the sparks!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Priya updated on pg 7
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
👏so he remembered it too👏

the Pool side area

..she took a step backward...

He saw that...and stepped forward......soo typical of them...



"I am more stubborn than you...and you know that better...'..😆.we know too...


- and since then -- each time he had held her back...but this time -- she didnt yet sense his touch !😭

- and I still have the hold on you...you can never drown...even if you want."👏



i feels the ipk magic...uff...reminded me of soo many magical things...thanks ...

waiting for the laad governer's next step to get the sankadevi back


thanks for the pm...


Edited by adithyan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Wow...this sounds really good!!

Is it left off from the end of the contract marriage? I'm guessing its an Arnav redemption story...

Loved the fact that Khushi is independant and in a new life! Loved the fact that arnav sure is adamant not to let her go...This sure is gonna rock ;) Thanks for the PM 😊
Edited by serendipitylove - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
wow the magic again the scenes are running on my mind...feels like if at all there s going to be season2 () it'll sure be starting like this...whats gonna happen nxt...wen i hear poolside ...sure thought there is goind to b intense nd passion
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
hello honeypriya hw r u?
u have started a new ss...
i really like the concept...
read prologue n first part...
i want to read further...
update soon...n pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Really it was superb.amazing update yaar.looking fwd to nxt chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Part 2

You fill up my senses like a night in a forest
Like the mountains in spring time
Like a walk in the rain
Like a storm in the desert
Like a sleepy blue ocean
You fill up my senses, come fill me again

Come let me love you, let me give my life to you
Let me drown in your laughter, let me die in your arms
Let me lay down beside you, let me always be with you
Come let me love you, come love me again

Let me give my life to you
Come let me love you
Come love me again

- the song that Arnav told Khushi about...Annie's song : John Denver had written it as a tribute to his wife...Denver was Arnav's one of classic faves -- he had shared lots of his notes on the songs by Denver when he first introduced Khushi to western music.

The small living room in the suite was filled with the aroma of hot coffee.. smell of fresh baked muffins on the table... his design team flipped across the different presentation slides spread on the make shift large table...

"Sir, I think we have covered all the bases..I will get the illustrator to do the touch up on the last two slides.."

He kept his eyes fixed on the slide...his eyebrows knotted..."I went too impulsive with Khushi...finding her after so long..the reaction to my temper...its not that simple like...it used to be"

"Sir.."..."what do you think"...ASR sifted out from his thoughts...

"oh...yes...its all fine.."..."I will go through them tomorrow morning again...Mr Dey, we are presenting our line to the buyers for the first time in this International conclave in Kolkata.Over the next 5 days...I want AR line to be the best in the hall...get all the last minute changes in place as soon as possible".

'Certainly Sir...'
He dismissed his team and went and stood by the large mirror near to his bedroom...the coffee mug in his hand...his tie hanging loosely around hid neck...his eyes were tired from the travels and jolts of the day...he tilted his head down , lost deep in his thoughts...he traced the rim of the cup...it was hot...he looked up slowly and observed himself in the mirror...he saw a show reel playing there...of the last night...before she had left.

"Di, we both are hurting each other...loosing the baby...the accident...blaming each other...Di,I think we both need a break."

Anjali had looked at him staring hard at the light of the diya...his coming and sitting next to her for the evening Aarti, had surprised her -- but till everyone didnt disperse..she had not questioned.

"Break...? Chotey...marriages are not with brakes...they do face storms...you got to face it together...what happened neither of you can change it back...but be there for each other...that will be the biggest healing.", she had insisted.

"Di, its not that simple. anymore...when I see her...there is those accusations in her eyes...I am the driver of her loss...the guilt of that makes me hurt her more...not able to reduce her pain makes me more mad at her...we end up hurling words that is breaking every bit of this relation."
"What..." he had found Di staring hard at him with concern and intrigue.

"Chotey, I have never seen you open up your thoughts to me this much...say so much of your feelings...I sense and read your bottling up always...but never this way..." she sighed.."When I had lost the baby -- it killed me somewhere inside...but for me things came in packages of deception -- so in truth they were never meant to be ...Khushi ji,loves you a lot...how much you know better than anyone can tell you...the baby was a fruit of that love...loosing it ripe...and the way it happened...it wont be easy to accept."

"I know Di...but Di its just not the baby...she also thinks what she saw...anyways...Di I have made a decision...and thats I wanted to talk to you about...I am going to London for six months..."
"Chotey..." Anjali was shocked to hear the firmness in his voice.
"Di let her get a grip of her emotions...me being around makes her more angry and hurts her more...here you all...the whole family is there with her...she needs I guess you all more than me now anyways..."
He had walked away after that --- when he had gone to his room...Khushi had just seen the tickets in the file...

"You are flying to London...?

"Yes...I thought its best to..."
"How long you are going for..."

"6 months...Khushi, I was going to tell you tonite"

"Dinner will be ready downstairs..." and she walked past him...he didnt see a tear this time...no accusations...neither he had in him to argue more that time.

As she reached the door...he asked "Khushi, will you come along with me...?"
She paused for a moment.
"Its too late...Arnav." And she walked away.
Dinner was getting cold -- and she had meant that-- he had wished it for months -- when those last words had played in loops in his mind...and when her absence haunted him in night -- the last syllable -- her slight stress on "Arnav"...it came with new interpretations always...Ar-nav...oh yes, in that cloud he had not realised..she had forgotten to add "ji"...or did she not want to...

The clipping sounds of Ar-nav playing in jingles...he could see the end of show reel...the Mirror...he liked seeing his flesh and colours...he wanted to see -- what does she see when she sees him...the father who could not save the baby -- or the lover who tries to...guess just tries...thats what -- the word "try" -- as he took the last sip --- he resolved -- this time I will show her -- "I am not going to try" -- "but certainly do and get things right for her -"

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"He is staring at you..."

"Who...", Khushi asked without turning.

"Hmm..." he smiled slightly..."that man in the black suit...that man whom the models and top designers are crowding around...flocking to make a bit of impression...but he is only staring this way..."
Khushi didnt turn...

"You forgot to pick Ashu from school today...i sent the car."

As they waltzed slowly...he had a glass held delicately in his other hand...a sip but still held the same delicate focus on her face.

"Khushi...by the way Green looks good on you...has anyone ever told you..."

She went on with the motions of the waltz... --

"waise yeh rang tum pe...utna bura bhi nahi lagta..."

A lifetime ago...the heartbeats...but why could she hear them now suddenly again..."he is staring at you..."

She had worn the saree she had picked some days back on Neha's insistence from the Hotel store -- delicate green chiffon...she had particularly liked the golden peackocks hand-embroidered to the pallu. It had instantly reminded her one of the sarees she had gone to sell to Naniji...on the first day of visit to Shantivan.

"Khushi...you seem distracted...what happened...you didnt like the music...this is Annie's song..one of my..."

She hurriedly interrupted...

'Shantanu...this party is really important for you...media is all over the place - Fashion conclave of the season...you hosting the party makes it even bigger show to..."

"Khushi...his eyes are only looking at you even in this crowd..." Shantanu had his focus on the man in black suit...watching him closely from the corner of his eyes...

"I dont know what you trying to say...will you be having dinner here or going home." not a frown on her face as she steered the conversation...Shantanu studied and smiled...

He slowly eased his hand from her waist...and gave the glass to the waiter crossing...Khushi steppped back slightly...Shantanu started to walk past her -- not before whispering into her ears...

"Arnav Singh Raizada...your husband...he is coming here now..." and merged into the crowd...power entertaining !

Before Khushi could turn, she felt the touch on her waist...those hands delicately but firmly clasped each molecules of her flesh -- he pulled her instantly close to his chest...inching the gaps...as with a swift finesse he took her hands into his...

"Why were you dancing so close with that man ?"

His blazing eyes shot fire...she tried to disengage...but he held firm.

"It should not be of your concern"

"How do you know him..."

"He is my Boss."

The music had picked up the higher chords...the madness of a Fashion ball reached its dizzying heights --- the fairylights danced on the couples...breaking the darkness in the hall...a massive Silver star globe in the center highlighted each of the swashaying curves of the ladies in their gorgeousness on the floor...the clinking of sparkling wine and relaxed laughter toxicated the Power men brushing against each other...

But his eyes oblivious to the universe of glitteratti around...drank to her face.

He frowned.

"Oh really...too close - for a Boss...to be holding his employee"

Like the heat of each other's breath that blazed them with each twirl of their dance...she snapped...

"There should be other matters of business in this Hall to get your attention,Mr Raizada -- I am not any of your prospective client..."

"How can you be so sure..."..he finally smirked, challenged..."Well I thought should start making the opening proposal to you..."

"Then you have still not learnt your lessons well...ghaate ka sauda...rejection for offers wont do good either to your ego and business..."

She shot back...why did she have to look back into his eyes...she reprimanded herself...she tried to get out of his grip...there were people around...and she knew it was futile to fight his grip without making a scene...as he was not going to make it any easy...not now.

As the chords slowed down...he softened his grip on her palms...but their fingers entwined...she watched -- how small are my hands in his palm...for a moment she forgot everything -- what she was running away from...gave into the embrace of the moment -- when the music was just right -- the closeness just in rhythm...she traced her finger like a feather kissing his palms...

His eyes shone -- catching the fairylights...

"Khushi you remember this song -- the night I told you about it...one of those nights when I took you for a drive to the garden...

Like a storm in the desert...
like a sleep blue ocean...you fill my senses...''

His voice was laced with the passion...reached the deepest locked crests of her heart.

The moment stood still...

"Khushi...I want to talk to you...give me one chance..." As he swirled her, he softly yet tensely pleaded..

And the magic broke...she eased away from the grip...took steps back...where was she going...its over.

She turned to leave but paused to say -- meeting his eyes...

"Its too late...Arnav."

And she walked away...
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PS - Thanks for appreciating the Prologue and Part 1. Hope if you reading this, then this Part too made some sense...would love to hear your thoughts and criticism...helps to keep in mind while struggling writer's block...
Also please excuse the formatting of the script -- my Browser is acting lousy with the Formatting...thanks again for reading...hope to see you again on the next part, if this Part doesnt bore you away !!!
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C21G2OkHEYo[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by honeypriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😃 wow interesting update... so Arnav-Khushi separated coz she lost her child due to Arnav.. and somewhere arnav cudnt fix that n wanted a break..I loved green eyed monster... and awesome song chosen... I hav nt heard it but lyrics seems so apt for them... waiting to see how further this story unfolds...😊
Edited by riti4u - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Wow! The second part is beautiful 😳 just can't get enough of it at all 😃 waiting eagerly for the next part 😛

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