SS :A Night in the Rain:ArHi-Part 4b pg 43 updt

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Pooja

@Ilin

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Very interesting first chapter was 😳 looking forward to many more chapters now 😃

You really write very beautifully and I didn't want it to finish only 😊

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Tas.Chow

@Tas.Chow

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Hey! Nice work um liking it a lot! Keep up the gud work and update soon!

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shybabe

@shybabe

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Priya darling...I just got the first look to your writing..

Awesome my dear..

Cant wait to read further...

I love the title very much...😳

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laap

@laap

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Awesum Priya...loved it...I got d familiar dhak dhak we all r accustomed to
Cant wait for d nxt update...
Interesting...vry vry interesting

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: shybabe
Priya darling...I just got the first look to your writing..
Awesome my dear..

Cant wait to read further...

I love the title very much...😳

hawww...😲 chunti kaato...

wat u doing here 😆 thanks...i didnt expect you would bother to read seriously 😛

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

very nice Priya...please update soon!

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zonera1

@zonera1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Wow!An SS by Priya!Intriguing plot!Waiting for u to unfold the plot.And tell us what happened 1yr ago.
Never expected Khushi to fall in the pool and Arnav to let her fall.But that was only coz Arnav wanted her to fall!please update next part soon.

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Nina

@-Maggie-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Wow! Really intriguing start to the story! I wonder what happened to separate them, and I wonder what Arnav's next move will be!

Hope you keep going with this fan fic!

Maggie

Edited by -Maggie- - 12 years ago

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

No Copy does not work beyond the first page. 😔

Great going .. only making me want to know more about what happened before 1 year,3 months,14 days ... it is interesting that even Arnav had that count!

Watermelon or Guava .. lol .. you cracked me up there. He pretty much would have drank Bittergourd Juice then .. lol.