10/07/14 NEW part 38 page 44 :virman pehla pyaar story - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
all parts in one go . Super story dear
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part 33
virman walk in to the party hall
virat looks at the decoration
virat:manviji kya ye sub ap ne decorate kiya hai
manvi:ji..q acha nahi lag raha
virat:nahi wo kya hai na it looks really beautful mana parega apke decorating skill bohat ache hai
manvi:thank u
virika comes to virman witu her friend
virika:romeo yeh hai meri best friend jis ki birthday hai
virat:hello beutiful happy birthday
virikas friend :thank u kya ap virika ke chachu hai
virat:hai q apke pass chachu nahi hai
vf:nahi (sad)...kya main apko chachu bula sakti hu
virat:q nahi our main apko beautiful bulaunga
vf:k thank u chachu
virika pulling her.friends arm
virika:wo dekho toys chalo unke sath kelthe hai
vf:k
all this time manvi was just watch them.and smiling
virat looks at manvi smiling
virat:kya huwa ap smile q kar.rahi hai
manvi:q usme be tax lagta hai.kya
virat:nahi to
manvi: virat ji agar ap bura na mane to.mein ek bath puchu
virat:ji puchuiay
manvi: kya apko bacha bohat pasand hai
virat:bohat but mujhe baby girls sada pasand hai
manvi:q
virat:q k wo naughty mahi hoti boys bohat naughty hotha hai or girls bohat preety sweet and peacful just like my butterfly
manvi:apko butterfly bohat pasand hai na
virat:bohat jub se wo born huwi hai na tab se wo meri se sada close hai or jub be koy hume dekta ta na sath.mein une lagta ta k butterfly meri beti ha
manvi:acha
there was silence for 3-4 minutes
virat:manviji chalo ei game kelthe hai jis mein pehle main question puchnga or ap answer dena pir ap question karna or mein answer dunga is game sa hum ek dusra ko our jan lenge
manvi:ok
virat:ok to mera first question hain...umm...ap ka favourite colour kya hai
manvi: mera favourite colour red
virat:mera pehle blue ta but ub white
manvi:q
virat:q ke jub meine apko pehli bar white colour mein dekha tha
manvi blushes
virat:k apka favourite flower
manvi:red roses
virat :mera be
manvi feels dizzy again virat notices this
virat:manvi ji ap thik hai na
holds her from shoulder manvi blushes
manvi:ji...mein pani pe k ati hi
virat :mein apko le chalta hi
manvi:nahi mein chali jaungi
virat a bit worried:sure
manvi smiles and noddes
virat:k
manvi walks a few steps and shee feels everthing spinning and the next thing she nos is it gone all dark and she fell in someones arms and can her a voice calling he name in paniked voice and she realizes its virat voice and she faints


do pm me to continue and press like if u want me to continue and dont worry manvi is fine will continue soon if i recieve lots of pm and cmments

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Posted: 12 years ago
ek bar phirse thank u bolti hu..
🤣
And awesome part!!!:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
plzzz plzzz update it quick...
and do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome part and lovely one
waiting 4 next part
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice updatelike the game virman r playin to get to kno each other morethank god manvi is ok bt its nice to see he cares for her sooo muchdo continue soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb all parts r awsm just love it...plz pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
virats pov
virat was looking at manvi as she was walking he was still worried for her so he kept an eye on her
after a few minutes he saw manvi feeling dizzy again
virat;mujhe manvi ke pass jana chahiye wo bohat weak lag rahi hai
virat walks to manvi he was 1-2meters wen he sees manvi faint
virat:manviji !!!!
virat holds manvi in her arm and he looks really worried and manvi faints
virat taps manvis check while calling her name
virat:manviji manviji plez akehe koliye manviji
everyone gathers around virat
virika comes out of the crowd and runs to virat while being worried
virika:romeo romeo juliat ko kya huwa
virat:kuch nahi butterfly dont worry
mrs s: viratji manvi ko ap us sofe pe betaye hum abhi pani leke athe hai
virat:jaldi kijiye
mrs s goes to get water while virat pickes manvi up and takes her to the sofa and makes her sit on there and sits next to manvi
virat:manviji plez utye (while tapping her check)(while he has tears in hes eyes)manviji ...utye na
mrs s comes to virat
mrs s:viratji ye legiye pani
virat takes the water and sprinkles some on her face
virat: (while sprinkling water on her face)manviji manvji
manvi gets concious
as she opens her. eyes she sees virats worried face manvi smiles at virat and he gave a weak smile while a drop of a tear falls down he check
manvi quickly moves her hand and wipes the. tear and noddes negitivly telling virat to not cry anymore to virat while giving weak smile .
virat smiles and hugs her and kisses her hear
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Posted: 12 years ago
i will update as soon as arti updates sorry but u have to. wait maybe i will update both storys theb bye for now
Edited by myvirman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
plzzz continue...
and continue ur's other story...

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