10/07/14 NEW part 38 page 44 :virman pehla pyaar story - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i decided that i am going to continue for the people who like this story
and sorry if i have spelling mistakes its because im using my phone to type and its really difficult to type on phone sorry and thanks to all the people who have been commenting

back to the story part 36
in car
manvi put her head on the head rest and closed her eyes whilst virat was drivinh.
virat was look at manvi he was really worried for her
manvi opens her eyes and looks at virats worried face she smiles at him and he smiles back.
manvi:hum kaha ja rahe he
virat:apke ghar
manvi:thik hai
virat:qp esa achank behosh kese ho gayi
manvi:pat nahi
they reach to manvis house
virat:ghar agay chale mein apko andar thak chor ata hu
manvi:nahi ma chali joungi
virat:nahi thik hai or was bi jub thak main yeh na dekhe lo ke ap aram se so rahi hai mujhe chainn nahi milaga isiliye chaliye
manvi smils and nods
virat comes out of the car and comes and opens manvis door
manvi got out of the car
all of a sudden manvis head starts hurtying again she put her. hand on her forhead and close her eyez
virat worried:kya huwa
manvi:kuch nahi bus sur me dard hai
then manvi feels dizzy and is about to fall
virat catchs. her before she falls
virat:manviji manvii...manvji ...a..ap thik hai na
manvi:...h...hai..v..viratji mein thik hu
virat:nahi ap thik nahi hai
virat bend down and puts one hand under her knees and onehand behind her shoulder and lifts her up
manvi shy: v...vir...viratji yeh...ap kya kar rahe ha mujhe niche rakiye koyi de lega
virat:manviji ap chup rahi ap thik nahi hai idiliye main apko utaya hai
virat starts walking and manvi and virat keep taking glimps of each aftter
virat gets to the door and rings the bell
manvi:viratji ub mujhe nicha rakiya koyi dekega to problem ho jayegi
virat:nahi hogi dont worry
suddenly door opens
beeji is shocked to see manvi in virats hand
manvi is lookin down
virat: wo...wo beeji manvji thik feel nahi kar rahi thi isiliye main une uta liya wo thor der pehle behosh be ho gayi thi
beeji:kya..manvi tu nehosh ho gayi thi
manvi:..j...ji..b..beji
beeji:virat beta manvi ko andar room mein lejo
virat takes manvi to her room
virat puts manvi down on the bed and puts the blankit on her
beeji and everyone come to manvis room
dabu:di apko kya ho gayaa
manvi:kuch nahi dabu
dabu crying: pur beeji ne kaha ke ap behosh hogi ti
manvi:daba mera pyare daba mein bilkul thik ho
virat smiles seeing manvi behaver she look really cute when she said that to daboo
virat goes out and calls doctor while.manvi i.s talking to everyone
virat come back
virat:beeji main doctor ko call kar fiya wo thor der.main atr honge
manvi shock listening to thiis
manvi:KYA!!!! DOCTOR!!! pur q main to bilkul thik hu mujhe doctor ki zurorat nahi hai
dabu:di hume patha hai apko doctor ke nam se dar lagta hai but plz doctorr ko to dekna hoga.na
virat:hai manvi ji
manvi:par mein bilkul thik hu dekye (she gets of the bed) main...(manvi about to fall but virat hold her and make her sit on the bed
virat:deka ap thik nahi hai isiliya ap chup betiye jubvthak doctor.nahi athe
manvi:pur...(cut of by virat)
virat strictly :manviji
manvi makes.a pouting face and folds her hand and puts a finger on her lips
virat smiles seeing her childish behavier

precape
manvi scard
virman huge
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Loved it
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it dear
love tis virat nd manvi
continue soon and plz give us longg updates...
jaldi update karna
pm metoo😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update...
Love how Virat cares for Manvi...
The precap is really looking Nice..
Pleasee update soon...
And thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow it was an awesome update
really loved it very much dear
virat really loved maanvi very much
and he took great care for her
plzzz do continue soon
and do pm me dear😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
hope manvi is fine
precap is interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 29 - page 29
Part 30 - page 31
Part 31 - page 34
Part 32 - page 35
Part 33 - page 37
Part 34 - page 39
Part 35 - page 40
Part 36 - page 42
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 37
After a few minutes the door bell rings
Bejji:dabbu ja kr darvasa kol
dabbu brings the doctor in the room
Doctor his stuff on the bed
Doctor :patient kaha he
Bejji: doctor manvi patirnt hai pointing to manvi
Bejji: chalo sab log bar chalo doctor ko check karne do manvi ko or virat beta app yahi rahiya
Every one goes out only manvi virat and doctor in the room
As manvi sees the doctor aproching towards her she holds onto virats hand, tightly.
Doctor: kya huwa hai inko
Virat: bohat weak feel kar rahi hai or faint bo hogayi thi
Doctor:k
Virat:kya huwa hai manviji ko doctor wo tiik to ho jayengi na
Doctor does the check up and looks at virat
Docctor: yeh bohat weak hai lagtaa hai ino ne suba se kuch nahi kaya
Virat looks at manvi and ask :manviji kya ye suchh hai
Manvi looks down :ha
Virat: par apne suba sa kuch kaya q nahi
Manvi:main bohat busy thi time na mila
Docyor: asi laparvi achi nahi hai apko at least do bar din main kana kana chaiye
Manvi:sorry age se deyan rakongi
Doctor:k pur abi ke liya ek injection lagaunga jis se apko takat mila
Manvi:nahi!!! Doctor plz muje injection nahi lagan
Virat squezzes manvis hand she lloks at him worriedly
Virat:manvi ji injection to lagan ho ga
Manvi:nahi viratji mujhe dar lagta hai
Virat:trust me kuch nahi hoga
She looked horrified as she saw the Dr hands, which had a needle.
Dr. : Ok Maanvi, apna haath aage lao. Maanvi: (sitting up on the bed) Nahi...Nahi, Viraatji, mujhe sui(needle) se bahut dar lagta hai. Nahi please nahi. (hid her face in Viraat's chest, as he sat on the bed, beside her) Viraat: (wrapped his hands around her back) Maanviji, apko thik hona hai na, toh yeh injection toh lagana hi padega na. Maanvi: (holding him as tight as she could) Nahi Viraatji please.
Dr. : Maanvi,kuch anahi hoga
Viraat: (looking at Dr.) Dr. main baat karta hun.
Viraat pulled her away from his chest, cupping her cheeks in her hands.
Viraat: (looking into her eyes) Maanviji dekho isse kuch nahi hoga. Maanvi: (holding his hands, which were on her cheeks) Mujhe dar lagta hai Viraatji.
Viraat: (looking at her assuringly) Maanviji trust me, bilkul dard nahi hoga, I promise.
Maanvi: (moved his hands away) Nahi, main nahi lagaungi, (hugs him tightly, yet again) please Viraatji
Viraat: (stroking her hair, lovingly) Maanviji, ap toh strong ho na, ap ek needle se dar gayi? Arey yeh toh kuch bhi nahi hai.
Maanvi: (pulling him close to her) Nahi, nahi Viraatji.
Viraat: Acha thik hai, koi nahi lagaye ga apko injection. Maanvi: (breaks the hug) Sach mein? Viraat: (smiles) Haan, koi nahi lagaye ga. Ap meri ek baat mano gi?
Maanvi: Kaun si baat?
Viraat: Pehle apni aakhein band karo. Maanvi: Aakhein? Kyun?
Viraat: Mujhe par bharosa hai na? Maanvi: (nodding her head possitively) Ha..haan.
Viraat: Toh aankhein band karo
Virat:ok ab imagine karo ap ek beautiful beach pa kari ho
Virat signals the doctor to put the injjectiion on
Virat:kuch dika
Manvi:haan
Virat: ab imagine karo us insan ko jis se ap bohat pyaar karti ho
Virat:dika
Manvi :imagine virat coming towards her(manvis shocked to see virat as she did not know she loved virat she just though shhe likes him)
Manvi:haan
Doctor:ho gaya
Maanvi snapped open her eyes wide and looked at Dr with questioning eyes.
Viraat: (smiles) Dekha Maanviji apko injection bhi lag gayi aur apko pata bhi nahi chala.
Maanvi: (looking at her arm) Lag gaya, par mujhe pata kaise nahi chala. Viraat: Main kaha tha na, bilkul bhi dard nahi hoga.
Dr. : Very Good Maanvi, ab tum yahan aram se leth jao, or kana ka lena
Doctor to virat:yeh kuvh davi hai do thin dino ke liya kani hai kana ke bade ab mainn chalta ho
Bejji come in
Beeji:kya kaha doctor na
Virat:ka manviji ne suba se kuch nahi kaya isiliye ye behosh ho gayi ti or uno ne kah hai ke ye davi kane ke bad.kani
Bejji:thik hai pir main kana leka ati hu
Bejji brings food and gives it to virat and leaves
Virat:chaliya utiya manviji or kana ka lijiya
Virat and manvi eat food and in between keep look at eacb other afte thay finished eating virat puts the plates away and comes and sits next to manvi
Virat:(smiles)manviji kya ap mujse ek vada karsakti hai
Manvi:kasa vada
Virat:(puts his hand in gron of manvi for a promise)ka app davi or kana times se kayengi abse
Maanvi: (placed her hand in his) Pakka wala vada.
Viraat: (smiles) Good, abhi tum chalo so jao. (gets up from the bed) Maanvi: (poutingly) Par mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai.
Viraat: (looking at her) Aise kaise neend nahi aa rahi? (making her lie down, by her shoulders) Chalo leth jao(lie down).
Maanvi: Par..
Viraat: Do as I say Maanviji
Maanvi without arguing, lied down on the bed, looking at Viraat, while pouting cutely.
Viraat: (suppressing his smile) Aise shakal mat banao. Aakhein band karo.
Maanvi closed her eyes, as Viraat started caressing her hair lovingly. After a mintue or so, she opened her one eye to look at Viraat, who was looking at her with a admiring smile.
Viraat: Maanviji aankhein band.
Maanvi immediatedly closed her eyes. She didn't know when sleep engulfed her. Viraat, after admiring a sleeping Maanvi.
Beeji comes invthe room and see virat taking care of manvi and smiles
Virat after making sure.manvis sleeep properly gets of the bed and goes to bejji
Virat:main jalta hu beji
Beeji:beta thor de or ruk jate
Virat: nahi bejji bohat der ho gayi hai
Virat goes out of the house but before that looks at manvi for the last time
Virat goes and picks virika and goes home
Prcap:big suprise waiting for virman

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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally you are back..
Awesome update..
Loved it..
Awww loved Virman part..
Awww Manvi love Virat..
Loved how Virat console Manvi..
Love how they call eachother Viratji and Manviji..
Update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update he is taking care her
so much update soon

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