10/07/14 NEW part 38 page 44 :virman pehla pyaar story - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
cute but wat about the party????
Edited by Sia12345 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update yar! when l u update the next part! =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
extremely sweet and cute update loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thaaank uu!!!:))) its a nice update! continue soon!^^
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Posted: 12 years ago
been waiting for ur update thank u for updating it really sweet update the cute eye locks n hug awww continue soon plz😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...
plzzz update soon this time...
can't wait to read more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read u r story its fab I really like looking forward how story moving update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
we r waiting!! continue soon plis!:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great story 😊
Just finished reading
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part32
As they get to the car virat stops and opens the back door for manvi
Manvi smiles at virat and he smiles back they have a small eyelock which is broken by virika
Virika:juliat!!!!
She hugs manvi and manvi hugs her back and places a kiss on her cheek
Manvi:kaisi hai meri butterfly
Virika:ek dum mast or meina appko bohat miss kiya while widening her arms
Manvi:maine be apko bohat miss kiya and they hug again
Virat smiles as he looks at there bonding
Virat:(thoughts) manvi ji bilkul wasi hai jasi larki mujhe chaye ti wo bohat. Sweet caring adourable or good hearted hai wo mari virika sa bohat pyaar karti ha.
Virat back to reality
Virika:juliat ap bohat bohat pretty lag rahi hai ek dum meri beutiful doll jasa
Manvi:really but mein butterfly sa preety to nahi hi na
Virika:nahi ap mujse be pretty ho
Manvi:nahi ap pretty ho
Virka;nahi app
Manvi:thik hai hum dono pretty hai k
Virika smles; k
Manvi makes virika sit in her lap wase mera paas apke liye kuch hai
Virika:kya(excited)
Manvi:chocolates
Virika :chocolate!!thank u
As virika is about to take chocolate she see virat and she gets upset and virman notice this
Virika:nahi mujhe nahi chaye
Manvi:looks at virika then virat q
Virika looks down:main nahi le sakti q k romeo ne mana kiya hai apse kuch lene sa
Manvi looks at virat confused:q..mein q nahi butterfly ko kuch de sakti
Virat: wo to meina isi liya kaha ta q ke tub hum shop mein the or aggar butterfly ko kucu chaye tha to mujhe keh sakti ti . Mera ye matlab nahi ta ke gift nahi la sakti
Manvo smiles at virika:ab to le sakti ho na
Virika smiles k thank u she kisses on her cheeck
Virat:butterfly mein dekhe raha hu jb se manviji ayi hai tum to mujhe bol gayi ho fake anger
Virika gets up and hugs virat:romeo gussa q ho raha ho mein isi liya juliatt se bath pehla ke q k ap to pehli be mara saath the julat to abi aye
Virat smiles and say k ab tum kapne kuliat ke saath beto hm party mein chalte hai
The reach at the party
Manvi virika out side standing by virats door
Manvi:thank u virat ji
Virat:thanks to mujhe kehna chaiye q k ap meri butterfly ke saath ja rahi hai
Manvi:it k
Mrs sharma(who party they r at another name garima)
Mrs s:manvi
As manvi heard her voice she turns
Mrs sharma came and stood on front of manvi
Mrs s:kasi ho manvi
Manvi:thik hu anty
Mrs s notices virat
Mrs s:manvi ye kon hai
Manvi smiles at virat
Manvi:wo..wo...an..anty..yeh mera...fia...fianca hai inla nam hai virat or yeh virika hai inki bhai ki beti or apki payal ki bff. Manvi say starting bit while blushing
Mrs s:mr virat kya ap humari party join karna chahenge
Virat:um..well...
Virika:plez romeo come na it will be fun
Virat:um..
Mrs s:aye na plez manvi tum q nahu samjati
Manvi:viratji plez aye na plending lok
Virat smiles wen manvi asks and say k ap chaliye main car park kar ke atha hu
Virat leaves
Mrs s:manvi tum unka yahi wait kar mein virika ko leke jati hi
They leave.now manvo alone on the ras she walks to left to right while waitingsuddenly she feels dizzy and stops and hold her head
Manvi:yeh mujhe achanak chakar q a raha hai shaid thakan ki waje se
Virat comes and see manvi
Virat:ap yaha
Manvi: wo mrs s ne kaha ta ke mein apki wait karo
Virat:to phir chale
Manvi:ji
They start walk all of a sudden manvi feels dizzy again
Virat notices this
Virat holds her arm
Virat:manviji ap thik ha na
Manvi: h..ha..main thik hu
Virat :ap thik to nahi lag rahi
Manvi: nahi mein thik hu
Virat:par..
Manvi:viratji chintha math kijiye main thik hu
Virat:k pir chaliya
They go in together

Precape:manvi faints in party
Virat takes her home

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