10/07/14 NEW part 38 page 44 :virman pehla pyaar story

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sweets1126

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

you did it!!!:) you update today!! thaaanks!! but continue sooon!:D

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Awesome one...
Too good..
Liked it...
Continue soon dear as u get time...
Both stories r fab...
Waiting...

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

its really soo sweet and cute..
virat cares for manvi alottt
and ge calling her manviji was cute
update next part soon

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AsadZoyaILU

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

part 35
virat hugs manvi and kisses her hair
virat come out of hug
virat:manviji ap tik hai na
manvi:j..ji..vi..vir..viratji
virat hugs manvi again and say main dar gaya ta mujhe tori der ke liye laga.ke main apko pana se pehle ko diya.
tears fall from his eyes
manvi pulls out of hug and puts her hand on his cheek and says viratji..m..main tik hu dakiye mari taraf
virat looks at manvi
manvi:see main bilkul tik hu and wipe his tears and nods negitively telling him not to cry any more
mrs s puts her hand on virats shoulder and he looks at her
mrs s:viratji mujhe lagta hai manvi ko ghar jana chaiye
virat:tik hai to pir hum chalte hai
virat:virika come lets go home
virika:par romeo hum to abhi abhi ayr hai
mrs s :ap isa yahi rehne dijiye or ub ap manvi ko ghar chor ay isa yaha se le jana jub ap ghar lotu rahe ho
virat:ok
virat to manvi:chaliye
virat gets up and forwards his hand in front of manvi for support
manvi looks at virats hand and then at virat he gives a smile and then looks at his hand and while blushing and smiling puts her hand in his hand
with virats support she stands up but shes to weak so she. was about ti fall back but virat grabs her from the waist and hold her tightly if she dont fall and as he pulls her she falls on his chest and they have a small eye lock.
virat with smile:chale
manvi looks down and smiles and nods
virat is still holding her from her waist if she dont lose balance and as they get to the door manvi stops
virat looks at her confused
manvi:gaadi kitni dor hai
virat:two three minutes ka walk hai or pir hum car tak pohach jayenge par ap kyun pucg rahi hai koi problem hai
manvi:nahi asai puch rahi ti(manvi was asking cuz she feels too weak ti walk anymore and becuz she feels dizzy)
virat looks at manvi and realizes that she is feeling dizzy ajd shes weak so he picks manvi up in his arms
manvi:viratji!!!!!(shocked)
manvi:virattji ..ye ap..k...kya kar rahe hai..m..mujhe neche rakiye koi dekhe lega(nervous and shy)
virat:manviji koi nahi dekhe ga or agar kisi ne. dekhe be.liya to kya huwa humari shaadi hona wali hai to main apko uta sakta hu or any ways ap chalne ki halat main nahi hai.
manvi:pur
virat:pur wur kuch nahi chup...
virat start walking
manvi thoughts:virat ji kitne ache hai wo mara kitna hayal rakte hai main itni lucky hu ke mujhe in ke jasa jeewan saathi mila itna caring and sweet (manvi thinks this and then admires virat while smiling shyly
suddenly virat cauht her admireing him and manvi notices this and gets shy and look her and there and virat smiles at her
they get to thr car and virat opens the door and makes manvi sit and puts her belt on and while putung belt on there faces are two three inches away and manvi just looks at him while smiling and then virat looks. at her and they have a small eye lock whick is broken shortly.when she realize ther position and look her and there.
virat movies back and sit on his side set.

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

nice update he is taking care her
and fear loosing her update soon

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@.jai.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Superb yaar... Caring virat loved it... But manvi ko kya hua he... Update soon...

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AsadZoyaILU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

NOTE
hey i am myvirman and im thinking of disconnecting this story becuz of the lack of comments so im leaving this on u lot to decide if i should continue or not!!!!! do comment its important

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: myvirman
NOTE
hey i am myvirman and im thinking of disconnecting this story becuz of the lack of comments so im leaving this on u lot to decide if i should continue or not!!!!! do comment its important

hey plz don't discontinue the story
I really like it😊