ArHi SS: An Apate Affair# 1; *Completed* - Page 52

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Posted: 12 years ago
You know something. I have to THANK you for writing this particular chapter. Why? Because I echo your sentiments about Akash!

This chapter was fun to read! :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yes, I too would have loved for them to explore Aakash's character further, it held a lot of potential. Never mind, they've done things much, much worse than that..

Saiyyu, I cannot say this enough number of times - when you write humour it is just spectacular.

Khushi's focus was moving from one brother and then the other while this conversation was going on as if she was watching a ping-pong match.

Hahaha!

Now ASR is thankfully not at his angriest at this point, yet he is the unbelievably handsome Laad Governor :D

Aakash is kickass anyway. Now wonder what will become of Arnav once you add Anjali to that mix! To top that the girl is none other than Sanka Devi! Now only Devi Maiyya can save the day..or is all this a part of her big plan ? Next update jaldi do, Saiyyu :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome story..

Hilarious update...

Cant wait for their dinner...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loving it so far
really like akash in here, he isnt the typical shy shadow

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Posted: 12 years ago
this is awesome! Really, love how the remembrance scenes have been embedded in the story. Oh really this Aakash. Lol, nice going khushi, already in just glance bhabi. Aakash seems to be on mission khushi as mere brother ki dulhan!
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Posted: 12 years ago
looking forward to seeing a stronger Aakash.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hilarious update... !!! Aakash is so dead... After being physically thrown out of the office by Arnav he went ahead and called Di...😆 Arnav is going to blow a fuse...!!! Wonder how Khushi will react, as its not very often tht u walk into an office prepared to give an interview and end up being ur possible boss's pretend girlfriend!!!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update dear :) <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!! i love this new SS!!!
poor Khushi!! imagine asking to be ur boss's girlfriend by his brother!!😆
drama at its best!!
and I am sure Akash will be my fav character!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hehe...that was sooper funny...glad you have some role for akash!

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