ArHi SS: An Apate Affair# 1; *Completed* - Page 106

I just came across this FF. nice story

I read it at one go, and it was simply awesome!
The way u write made me feel closer to the actual IPK!
U included scenes from the show, and it was so apt, i cud almost imagine the characters!
With Chappi 1, we got a glimpse of that strong and highly manipulative Raizada's and Anjali!She was very clever whilst interrogating Arnav, i loved her character portrayal here👍🏼
And i seriously loved this Akash! He's gentle yet his portrayal is strong and im glad that u've not sidelined him here!Hmm so he goes to lucknow regularly, but now i guess he wouldn't have to go so often, last that i heard Payal was moving to Dehli soon...😆
And i liked the way he put a fight to bring Khushi as his Bhai'a gf!And his calling her Bhabhi on first sight made me LOL😆
I loved how he removed the pen, indeed it seems that he has a right on her, and he is abusing of that right, poor Khushi, i'm sure her heart must have been on a spree🤣
Though she didn't fast for him, her thoughts were surely haunted with that Laad Governer!hmmm😳
I loved all the updates till how, and i also like the way u include those IPK at the end of the updates!Cheers for that...