ArHi SS: An Apate Affair# 1; *Completed*

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Wow that was a brilliant and fantastic update, I am loving Akash he is superb, even after Arnav gripped him by his collar and pushed him out of his cabin, he had the courage to come back and still arrange the dinner date for khushi with Arnav at the raizada mansion, simply fantastic. Totally agree the CV's ruined Akash's character in the serial, it's such a shame because he is a brilliant actor. Hope you bring justice and redeem his character in your story, I must admit you are doing a fabulous job so far. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

First things first, that's a wonderful banner!

Great job, NB!

This update truly belonged to Akash, and I completely agree with what you said at the end. Akash was one of those characters that was never allowed to become a substantial part of the story, and I'm glad you decided to change that here.

So Khushi thinks he could be the man of her dreams!

Very first rabba ve ho gaya na!

And Akash plays a trick, and she falls for it!

And now, the much awaited introduction to the Raizadas, kya hoga Shantivan mein?

PS: Truly appreciate the effort you are putting into this, with the dedications at the beginning, and the pictures at the end.

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smarty94

@smarty94

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

res.

*EDIT*

O jeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! inni shocking update toh kafi arsay baad parhi hai😆😆

room mein entry karne se pehle hi "BHABHI"🤣🤣 can i just say i laaavvveee Akash in your stories?😆😆 the guy is simple *ZEE BEST* (y) (y)🤣 jaan naa pehchaan, sar chara mehmaan wali situation thi for Khushi😆

and then Arnav and Khushi discussion, although kuch garbar nahi lagi mujhe, but i'll be honest here, I'm very innocent when it comes to YOUR stories! do i need to remind you of your Ramanchi-doing and out-of-the-blue walay dhamakedaar twists and surprises? nahi na? good! issliye I am not trusting anything and will just try to not go all *the-famous-KKGSR-ke- 3 'O's' 😆 ( although i know, i'll end up doing exactly that)😆

take care and update soOn jee.. I is the waiting😃

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

awesome update loved it akash keep calling her babbi and khushi understanding because she has her sister she just got roped in to having dinner at the raizada awesome update thanks for the pm

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

Short and sweet - leaving our heroine to wonder if she has just walked in a twilight zone. How is she going to work with these 2? I agree with you that Akash never got his due on the show and will be glad to read some more about him.