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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#281

poor girl.. she has been through lot more than an average girl of her age would go through.. from being trapped by a married man into falling for him to defame she faced, to dasya-shyam and her babuji's death..

beautifully written dream..

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

tht was one horrible but close to reality dream. hope khushi takes this sign n avoid shyam.

will she tell arnav abt the dream??

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Fantastic chapter.
The dream was so scarey. I could feel it. You rocked it.
This happens the same in dreams that you want to run but can't, you think that it will catch you but that thing never reach to you.
Khushi not like Shyam and that think come in her dream also and his true face could be sen in dream.
Hope they could find out about him in real also.

Thanks for the update.

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mbibi

@mbibi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Oh wowww that was a VERY vivid and good portrayal of khushis dreams and her emotions afterwards...seeing Shyam in that form will definently alert her to remain very very far away from him but I hope Khushi is also able to discover the truth behind his manic killing of her father...it's good that in trying to soothe khushis pain, Arnav let her cry out and vent her emotions without asking her anything...the silent support is what she really needed.

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Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Beautiful update.. Dream was horrible.. I am glad, Arnav is there to soothe her pain..

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heavenspirit

@heavenspirit

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

the dream was simply horrible...
Jha's has killed her soul...
poor Khushi...
felt sorry for her and her Babuji...
Arnav's embrace did the magic...

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

The dream was terrifying. I feel so bad for Khushi. You have written this so well that I had tears in my eyes by the end. Amazing!!!!

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Sexlover_arshi

@Sexlover_arshi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Krani...

I dunno what you do but you make ur stories look real...it feels as if its really in present...its happening in front o me...

HATS OFF TO YOU DEARY!!!!!!! 👏

BUt plsss...

my poor khushi!!!!!

give her some mercy...

Nyc Update...

Continue soon love...

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Nice chapter. Khushi's dream was really horrible. I hate Shyam. I hope Arnav get's to know that Shyam was the one who attacked Khushi, as soon as possible. Looking forward to the next update.

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twinkle662

@twinkle662

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#290

That was an intense and detailed update, not that your other updates aren't but this was vivid and the dream sequence was easy to relate to for me because I have had a dream in the past where my mother committed suicide or got murdered, it completely random but it freaked me out then cause I wasn't able to do anything and this time I can totally relate to Khushi's feeling of helplessness and loss.

I'm really glad that Khushi finally let some of her pain out. Although, a parent's loss is always inconsolable, the pain can subside slowly. Really grateful for Arnav's support.

Thank you for the update and the crave for your updates just never ends!!