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Rudri

@Rudri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

I read it in a go. Though action/thriller is not my cup of tea i loved it! It was something different! Shyam and dasya's are strong infact very strong negative characters portrayed very well! Their beliefs,views,behaviour,nature are so intriguing. Lust Plays the stongest trait for them. Arnav is mysterious,hot,complex and i love him! Not being able to vent out his anger on shyam fully is sad! About khushi i am a confused girl! Everytime i think yeah this is the reason of her past why she gets falling in trouble and then i get to know that it is not! Your plot is a strong one with stronger characters and the emotions are strongest! I love it! Do continue soon. 👏

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MithilaTorr

@MithilaTorr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Pain has a strange way of connecting people. In times of pain and loss,you could hold up yourself in the face of everyone else except when we are alone. It is the emptiness that actually makes us realize the loss. Your loved one would never be there, you wouldn't hear their voice, you can't hold them..the loss is even more painful when the death is unnatural. You will be reminded of what might have happened, the pain they might have endured...

It was good to know Khushi had Arnav holding her and she felt he would understand.. It is that learning shoulder most people miss in life...A silent listener..Who wants advice and logic when heart is tearing into million pieces!!!

I am not much of a interpreter..I simply read..But you already knew that.. Beautiful update! I didn't know Khushi suspected Syam..I am slipping on story

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564436

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

finally read it all couple of months back i had only read 4 parts but love the way it's going so glad she's staying with Arnav off to follow you on twitter

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

happy tht she is staying with arnav. Loved ur narration. Updt when u hav time.

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Eleanor

@ElenaElenor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#305

The pain never goes away- it lessens in time but it's always there. This is beautifully depicted in your FF. The dream was heart-breaking- how she witnessed her Bauji's death and how she sub-consciously linked it to Shyam. Shattered. I like the relationship between Arnav and Khushi in this FF- even if they go on to develop a romantic relationship, I like that up till now- he's been the healer, the comforter to her and she has been the one who has calmed down when he's around and opened up to him. It's a comfortable relationship- a deeply connected one. Their relationship runs much deeper. Brilliant, brilliant stuff! I might fancy this Arnav! Sigh!

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Oh, this was beautifully written, K.

Khushi, that poor thing has gone through soo much, but she has been strong. A flghter. But this has to come, this break down. She needed to vent, and I am so glad Arnav was there.. The description of Khushi's breakdown was stunning.. her pain was so palpable.

Waiting to see where it goes from here :)

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addictedx53

@addictedx53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#307

I like the fact that though this story is Arshi inspired, the concept is completely different. Makes it so much more unique...the fact that Arnav is so trustworthy, no mu's so far, mystery not yet clear, but intriguing!

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achu_arshi

@achu_arshi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#308

This is really sad, you showed khushi's emotions very clearly I really love this...

And Arnav you are just great love him

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sweet.obsession

@sweet.obsession

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Posted: 12 years ago

#309

You write so deeply and brilliantly. The reader feels everything. Thanks for the update!

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#310

I miss you so much! !
This chapter was amazing. I can't even imagine how Khushi must be feeling. The pain of losing a loved one especially a parent must be unbearable. I'm glad that Khushi was able to find comfort in Arnav's arms. Thanks for this update and this story!