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napk

@napk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

poor khushi... hope she finds some strength thru arnav... that was a scary dream... hope she finds out the truth about shyam soon..

thanks for the update Krani... was waiting for this for a long time.

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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Okay that was one hell of a dream and you did an awesome job in writing it out :) I'm so happy Arnav is there for her I just can't imagine what that poor girl is going through... Thank you for this unexpected update :)

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divya

@diyadivya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

emotional heart wrenchng updt

glad arnav s by her side

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Too much angst. Why indeed is the question. So unfair.

Hope Arnav is always there to comfort her.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

Very emotional...feel so much for Khushi...proud of Arnav very proud!

Very well written...

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noreen

@noreen

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

great ud thnks!!!!!

the dream was so real to khushi, u made it so real for khushi. it described all the fear and terror

poor khushi is finally letting all the built up anguish out!! Arnav really needs to look out for her now that she is so vulnerable

really looking forward to the next ud

thnks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

she's finally reacting, as glad as I am, it also makes ne sad. the dream was scary and awful, it was evil and now I just hoor that arnav constantly sticks around her for her safety.

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SoniaGhafoor

@SoniaGhafoor

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

[/I]Yeay! I'm so glad you finally updated!! I love the way Khushi's dream is giving her clues about Shyam, it is almost as if her subconscious is warning her about how dangerous he is. I also enjoyed reading how Arnav tried to placate her when she was crying especially as because you've been moving the story at a slower pace I felt that it highlighted even more how out of character it was for Arnav to do that without thinking as much. Can't wait for your next update! Sonia x

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5armad

@5armad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

such a heart wrenching breakdown.

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#280

Hey!

I got excited when I saw an update, that dream my god. Very descriptively written, well done!

I hope Khushi can put two and two together and realize her guyt instinct about Shyam is right