Look Into My Eyes S2 | Rajveer-Naina | Part 4

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Hey guys,

So I know I haven't updated my FFs in over 2 years but I would like to continue and finish this FF. Why this FF? Because this FF was my first one and recently I have been reading RN and LRL FFs and this FF brings back memories of the show. This story will continue from where I left off before. A lot of things will have changed though because I found some loop holes. This is why it will be Look Into My Eyes Season 2.

To new readers and old ones who have forgotten the story. Going back and reading it will not be needed. I will provide a summary and some things will be different, like I said, due to loop holes. So bare with me. I also hope this FF will bring back the essence of LRL.

For PMs, just say so in the comment and the rest will be taken care off.

Look Into My Eyes S1

Above is link to S1 but I have provided a summary. If you decide to read S1, my writing style is different and the story may seem a little scattered because I started this when I was young.

If you don't decide to read S1, the summary will be enough for you to be caught up. If anything, read the last 3 parts of S1.

Summary -

Naina is a lawyer who fights for justice while her brother Naveen is in the military serving the country. Soon enough hell brakes lose into her life when her brother is announced a traitor for smuggling triggers and is considered dead. She heads to KMA with Alekeh, a small criminal to prove her brother's innocence.

She meets Yudi, Pooja, Huda and Ali there. She also meets Caption Rajveer Shikhawat, her teacher, her mentor and he starts developing feelings for her. Soon enough she starts returning those feelings as well. Before their relationship can develop Rajveer reveals to Naina that he himself had killed Naveen because he was under the impression that Naveen was indeed a traitor. In a flash back, a man named Red Eye/Raman is introduced. Ritu, another teacher at KMA, on the other hand provokes Naina to kill the man who had murdered her brother. Naina instead shoots Ritu who had been involved wit Red Eye somehow. She had been presumed dead after that.

It is also revealed that Raman, also known as Red Eye was killed in a fight with Naveen.

No one has figured out what and who Red Eye is yet and their tries to prove Naveen innocent are failing.

Prolouge

Back to KMA

Confrontations

Drills, Major Nair and Plans

Chaos


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue

Naina

"Ms. Naina please, you are wasting your own time and our time. Naveen was a traitor and still is. We thank Captain Rajveer for putting an end to him and his actions" said the Judge with a sigh. This woman had been running around with the same theory about her brother. She was such a capable woman, a lawyer and now in Kanchanganga Military Academy. What is she doing with her life. He thought.

Naina gritted her teeth. She had been running around in circles during her time off from off from KMA. Her last year at KMA was about to start but before that she had decide to act on her promise she had given Rajveer. To send him to jail. But without any proof that Naveen was not a traitor, Rajveer would be given a pat on his back for this murder. Yes, murder. "Sir! Naveen was NOT a traitor!"

She turned around on her heel and left while the judge rolled their eyes at her statement.

She gave out a little laugh remember Rajveer. She had loved him; she had looked up to him. Heck she even trusted him blindly. But all she felt now was hate. She hated this man. "Rajveer.." She whispered.

Rajveer

He sighed as he looked at Naina's picture. This is not how it was suppose to be. Naina was not suppose to hate him and Naveen was not suppose to be dead.

No, Naveen was not supposed to be dead. He was supposed to be alive and by now they should have proven him innocent.

The grenade he threw was a part of their plan, what wasn't a part of their plan was that the grenade fell near his best friend. The grenade was supposed to fall away from him and he would have secretly crept away. Trying to get him caught was all an act.

When he told Naina, he told her what the world knew just in case she decided to confide to someone. He still didn't have proof that Naveen was innocent and he knew neither did Naina. They were fighting for the same person's justice but they were on different sides now.

A lone tear fell. He'he never meant to kill him. He never meant to hurt him. He never meant to hurt Naina, after all he loved her.

Edited by starasdf - 11 years ago
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Back to KMA

She walked through the halls of KMA and let out a little sigh. These halls brought back memories, some that she would cherish forever and some that she wished she could forget.

"Naina!"

Naina turned around. Next loud screams filled the hallway almost deafening the other students.

"Girls" A couple of boys rolled their as they saw the two girls hug and scream.

"I missed you so much!"

"Me too Naina, me too. Tera network break main busy kyun tha?" Pooja complained to Naina.

The girls decided to catch up in their new room. Something's never change, like her roommate and her best friend Pooja.

Naina told Pooja about her failed attempts to get Rajveer punished but of course failed. Pooja still couldn't digest that Rajveer sir had killed Naveen. The man was a role model, how could he do that? "Don't give up Naina, Rajveer sir ko unke kiye ki saza zaroor milegi"

Naina had not told many people of this except for Pooja and Alekeh. Alekeh as expected absolutely hated Rajveer and Pooja still had a hard time believing that Rajveer sir would do that.

"Tu isse jhod. You tell me how Ali is doing." Naina asked while winking. She loved teasing Pooja, this was the one good thing that had come out of her past year at KMA. She was happy that Pooja had someone like Ali. Ali was a responsible, patient and an ideal mean. A complete opposite from Pooja but of course opposites attract and they fell in love.

Pooja's face fell as soon as she hear Ali's name. "Woh Naina, ab hum saath nahin."

"What?" Naina raised her voice a little. She was surprised. The last time she saw these two, they were talking about marriage and now they had broken up. That didn't make any sense.

Naina was about to ask Pooja what had happened but her voice was cut off by a voice.

"Hellooo my jananis, how are you beautiful ladies doing today" Huda asked with a wink.

"Huda, how are you?" Naina asked with a smile and a hug.

"Bus ekdum fit" He replied while giving a hug to Pooja as well.

Pooja excused herself to the washroom while Naina and Huda sat with little chit chat of their own.

"Baki teen kidhar hai?" Huda asked.

"Right here" said a voice stretching the 'here'. It was Yudi who greeted them with a wide smile with Alekeh and Ali beside him. "Hey guys, kaise ho?

"Pooja kidhar hai?" Alekeh asked. Ali's ears shot up as soon as he heard this name. Naina replied with a she's coming.

This was a little fear he has ever since he broke their relationship. How would he face her again? He was the reason they were not together anymore but what could have he done.

"Ab hum sab saath hai-" Pooja said breaking Ali's chain of thoughts. She came in with great excitement and hugging each of one of them except for him. No one else noticed that she had not hugged Ali, or even acknowledged him except for Naina but she decided to stay quiet for now.

Pooja tried to busy herself with small talks with the rest of the group but she knew Ali's eyes were on hers. Next she saw him approach her slowly. Shit, Why is he doing this? She listed herself a few options like walking away from here or telling him straight up not to talk to her. But those options would create a scene and right now she was in no mood to answer questions.

"Pooja" He called her with a soft voice. "How are you?"

"Fine" She said with a curt voice and then excused herself. She needed to get away from him before she says anything in front of others.

Ali sighed as he watched her leave. He would have gone after her but of course he had no right anymore.

Next Morning 'First Day of Classes

Naina stood in her Strategy and Communication II class watching the man she had loved once. He looking at papers ' notes she guessed. She looked on with disgust; Naveen was his friend, his best friend. How could this man not trust her brother? They had been best friends for the longest time.

"Rajveer Singh Shikhawat" She said in a low voice filled with hatred.

"Phoolan devi, road block kyun karke rakha hai? Andar chal" Huda said while pushing her a bit inside the classroom.

Rajveer looked up when he heard her nick name and his heartbeat sped up a bit. He knew he would have to face her in class, in drills and in the halls knowing that the love they were starting develop had died. Somewhere in his heart he wished that he never would have told her the truth about Naveen. If he hadn't then they would have been together by now and their biggest problem would have been how to hide their relationship from the board which wouldn't have been hard or painful as this.

He looked up starting at his class and started teaching. He first told him the difference between Strategy and Communications I and II.

"This course will be more intense then the last one. The first one focused more on communication. We learnt what good communications and what types of devices are used to communicate, this course will focus more on strategy. We will look at everything, from war strategies to spying strategies'"

Naina barely paid attention to what he was saying. All she could do was glare at him, not being able to let go and focus on the lecture. Stop it Naina, focus. Pass hona hai ki nahi? Forget that it's him teaching, at this rate you will fail for sure.

She spent the rest of the lecture either giving him hateful looks or fighting with herself and trying to focus.

After a good hour which felt forever for both Naina and Rajveer, the lecture finished. Both of them took a breath of relief. Naina because she wouldn't have to stand Rajveer and Rajveer because it was getting hard for him act normal as if nothing had ever happened.

"Rajveer sir kaise ho app? Yudi asked with enthusiasm, he had missed KMA, his buddies and Rajveer sir. After all Rajveer was one of the best teachers he had ever had.

"Bus theek, how was your break?" Rajveer, Huda, Ali and Yudi started talking abour their break. Yudi talked about his vacation is Shimla while Huda told everyone about the number of girls he had flirted with. Ali like usual patiently listened to all the stories the two had to tell. He was fine with that arrangement; after all he wasn't egger to share what happened with him in the vacation.

Naina, Pooja and Alekeh on the other hand knew the story of betrayal. They knew it wasn't Naveen who was the traitor it was Rajveer sir. Rajveer sir had betrayed Naveen. Pooja and Alekeh glanced at each other and then at Naina who was leaving. They decided to go with, after all their loyalty lied with Naina.

Rajveer closed his eyes as he noticed Naina leave. She hated him, but why wouldn't she? Maybe she didn't know the all the facts but in this case all that mattered were the results. The results that said Naveen died by his hands, his grenade.

Major Nair's Class

These measly cadets think that joining the army is joke! Nair thought with a scoff. But he had just gotten a green signal from Brigadier Chandok for new planned drills. The cadets have something new coming for them. This year he has included a real life job, this will not only be marked but a serious job that they can't mess up. Let's see how they pass now. Especially Cadet Pooja Ghai and Rajveer Singh Shikhwat's favorite Naina Singh.

"Dude, ye Major Nair kitne scary hai nahi?" Yudi asked Alekeh after their lecture with Major Nair. The man scared the shit out of him with his talks and drills.

"Tu kitna fatu hai" Alekeh replied with a eye roll and the rest laughed,

Next - Confrontations

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Okay guys here it is. I hope you like it. Next update will be coming soon. Pooja-Ali track will be a side track while RN deal with their issues.

Comment and Like!

-Star

Edited by starasdf - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Update was gud.👏

I wish Naina cud understand Raj's position and doesn't blame him for Naveen's death.Raj is already in so much pain..😕😕
Do continue soon
Edited by suhana.dixit - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice intro...continue

Originally posted by: starasdf

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Hey guys,</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">So I know I haven't updated my FFs in over 2 years
but I would like to continue and finish this FF. Why this FF? Because this FF
was my first one and recently I have been reading RN and LRL FFs and this FF
brings back memories of the show. This story will continue from where I left
off before. A lot of things will have changed though because I found some loop
holes. This is why it will be Look Into My Eyes Season 2.</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">To new readers and old ones who have forgotten the
story. Going back and reading it will not be needed. I will provide a summary
andsome thingswill be different like I said due to loop holes. So
bare with me. I also hope this FF will bring back the essence of LRL.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">For PMs, just say so in the comment and the rest will be taken care off.</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"></font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Summary -</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Naina is a lawyer who fights for justice while her
brother Naveen is in the military serving the country. Soon enough
hellbrakeslose into her life when her brother is announced a
traitor and isconsidereddead. She heads to KMA with Alekeh, a small
criminal to prove her brother's innocence.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">She meets Yudi, Pooja, Huda and Ali there. She also
meets Caption Rajveer Shikhawat who soon develops feelings for her. Soon enough
she also started returning those feelings. Before their relationship can
develop Rajveerreveals to Naina that he himself had killed Naveen because
he was under the impression that Naveen was indeed a traitor. Ritu on the other
hand provokes Naina to kill the man who hadmurderedher brother.
Naina instead shoots Ritu who had been involved wit Red Eye somehow. She had been presumed dead after that.</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">It is alsorevealed that Raman, also known as
Red Eye was killed in a fight with Naveen. </font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Prolouge</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Back to KMA</font>


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Posted: 12 years ago
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feels so gud to read a lrl ff after a long tym...nyc intro...cont soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Oh no!!!!! Naina is trying to send Rajveer to jail for killing Navin!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

But thankfully she is not succeeding in it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina hates Rajveer now and this hurts him a lot!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

So the whole thing happened because of a plan gone horribly wrong!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

I do hope that Navin is alive and will be back soon because only he can solve this mess now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The final year of KMA starts and all the relationships seems to have changed!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Ali and Pooja have broken up and Aalekh hates Rajveer because of what Naina had told him!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

I wish Naina would understand Rajveer's position and not blame him for Navin's death!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Rajveer is already in so much pain and Naina's hatred is killing him!!!!!

He should tell Naina the whole truth!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Major Nair is as usual upto no good and planning to make things difficult for Naina as usual!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡


Edited by Shaina_b - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start
liked it
and glad to read a RN story after so long
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi
Feels so good to read a new LRL ff. I have always been a fan of your writing. I am so glad that you have started this new FF.
Thanks for the PM...will be waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi
the up is really
reminds me of the old lrl moments
so its the second year and it seems that relation which developed btw the friends and their fav teacher gets changed
Naina for whom his sir rajveer was her idiol now hate him to the core whereas pooja and ali whose relationship got a new dimension last yr is broken now
and alekh he is supporting naina

plz cont soon and pm me

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