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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Great update... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
This Naina, ye kabhi bhi maan nai sakti na.๐Ÿ˜”
๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” Major Nair I hate this man. ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก How can he be so cheap?๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ How dare he hurt Naina?
Even Raj's blood was boiling at it but still Naina gave him a solid pay back by proving that she is not less.๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š Raj suggested her to go to infirmary so she denied but when Raj said as in tone of Captain so she couldn't deny.๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
Oho second year cadets are not allowed in Fresher's Ball, why? ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• Ab Huda is making plan to spoil their fun not fair.๐Ÿ˜’
๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ I just wish he is not gone caught. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
Update soon dear


Hi Mahak!
Thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ
All Major Nair has are cheap tricks. And our Naina does not fall for such things. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Rajveer know how to make his lady listen to him. ๐Ÿ˜‰
And they aren't allowed because the older students usually rag the first years.
Glad you liked it, will do.
Edited by starasdf - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

I hate this b*****d Major Nair,๐Ÿ˜ก every time he tries to hurt Naina by any mean.๐Ÿ˜’ Shalu and Raj also knew that he will be planning something but he was trying to make her injured it's sick.๐Ÿค” But Naina once again proved that she can't be stopped by someone who intentionally tries to hurt her. ๐Ÿ˜Š Pls update soon n thanks for pm... ๐Ÿ˜Š


Ik, Major Nair isn't really a likable person.
Naina is determined, a determined person, especially like Naina can't be stopped by cheap tricks.
Thanks and will do.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

Nice part๐Ÿ˜Š


Ye Major Nair is janam me to nahi sudhar sakta hai ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Aur Naina bhi kuch waisi hi lagti hai thodi thodi bechara Rajveer bhi kitna sambhalega use๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Continue Soon๐Ÿ˜Š


Thanks Shreya!
And yes that very true.๐Ÿ˜†
I'm back and planning to continue soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: arpita25

Great part,๐Ÿ‘ Raj jaanta tha Naina kabhi us ki help nahi legi but still being his mentor it was his responsibility to offer her his help.๐Ÿ˜Š This kameena Major Nair,๐Ÿ˜ก kabhi nahi sudhar sakta na ye? ๐Ÿค” How can he behave like this with a cadet? ๐Ÿ˜• Sab ne dekha but no one could say or do anything. Raj could feel her pain but this stubborn girl.๐Ÿ˜› She showed Major Nair that she still has the guts to win and all Major Nair could do was he being irritated.๐Ÿ˜‰ At last she had to go to infirmary. ๐Ÿ˜† So now try to update fast.


Thanks Arpita!
Raj is logical whereas Naina, in her anger will not think with logic.
I plan on updating soon, thanks again.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Updating as we speak.
-Star
Edited by starasdf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Chaos

"Stupid Huda" She whispered angrily as she walked down the hall with a lighter. "Had hoti hai, pata nahi sab kaise man gaye is stupid plan kilye."

She had told the rest this plan is stupid. Yes, it will cause chaos but it will only reinforce the idea that the upper year students were raggers. Naina didn't want to be a part of this plan but apparently she was "walking away when her friends needed her the most." Whose words were those? Of course Huda's, and he had Pooja backing him up too. Eventually she gave in, and here she is, walking down to the entrance of the ball room to meet the rest.

Ali on the other hand was much stronger against these emotional blackmails. But that was only because Pooja refused to ask him. If she had, hands down he would have said yes right away. Now Yudi was in charge of getting us in and out of the ball room.

Yudi

"Target aquired" He told himself as he watched the guard sneak drinks after drinks in front of the ball room. The ball had started and everyone going in and out had to report to him.

The entrance to the ball room was grand, with streamers and balloons all around it. Loud music, ranging from English to Hindi was blasting through the room. Your body could feel the bass.

He walked by once and then twice to just get a glance on what was going inside. Short dresses. He watched dreamily. He should be in there. Hitting on those girls and simultaneously being reject as well.

His job was to get rid of the guard and he had the perfect idea. An intoxication pill. Why did he have one? Well let's just say it was for a prank he had planned for Alekeh but this was more important. How dare they not invite us to the ball?

The guard was a big man. A big BIG man. Those alcoholic drinks weren't even shaking him, let alone causing him to pass out. So Yudi will have to deal with this his own way.
Par kaise? Think Yudi, think!

He knew he had to slip this pill into the bottle he was hiding behind a desk placed there, but how?

Pooja and Alekeh

"Are chup hona please Pooja, please. Mein tere hath jodta hun." Alekeh begged. Pooja had gone on and on but the cockroaches in the box she was hold. Sometimes screaming if a cockroach tried to climb out of the box and other times praising Huda of his genius plan. But it was mostly screams.

Pooja looked slightly offended but quieted down. Actually she stopped speaking completely. Ja maine mera network kat diya tere se. She thought angrily as they walked to the ball room's entrance where they were going to meet Naina, Huda and Yudi.

Alekeh rolled his eyes when Pooja stopped speaking. He could tell by her facial expression that she was not happy with him. "Pooja?"

He was met with silence though. "Poojjaa,"
Again, nothing. Silence was annoying, especially with Pooja around him. Alekeh knows he tells her to shut her pot hole quite a bit, but she had grown on him. As much as he enjoyed silence, with Pooja, he could escape his thoughts with her nonstop chatter. So yes, silence was very annoying with Pooja.

"Pooja dekh! Tera Ali" He screamed loud after a minute startling her. He was hoping to get a reaction out of her but this was not what he expected.

"Kaha?" She screamed louder, looking around. But no one was there. Of course no one was there. Why would Ali come? He was no longer hers. Someone else's actually.

She looked at Alekeh in anger and stepped closer to him with her head high. With a dangerously low tone she spoke. "Ali mera kuch nahi hai. Toh mere samne uska naam mat lena."

Alekeh was shocked, he had expected her to scream at him, but this reaction was not something he thought she was capable of. But before he could as her what was wrong, they had reached the entrance and the rest were there before them.

"Guard kaha hai?" Naina asked curiously, somewhat afraid of the answer too. Yudi looked proud. Way to proud.

"Well..." Yudi started.

Yudi had pathetically made a loud noise and hid so the guard would come running to check the noise. Which he did. Yudi slipped the pill in his drink with no difficulty.

The difficult part was trying hid the unconcious body and answer Dr. Shalini if he had seen the guard. I mean the lady was gorgeous with that red halter dress. Lying was not the first thing in his mind.

"Guard kaha hai?" Naina asked slowly.

Yudi grinned and asked everyone to follow him. He opened a closet door near the ball room door and the guard's unconcious body fell out. Everybody gasped and Naina snapped.

"Yidu pagal ho gaye ho! Kisi ko pata chal gaya toh?" She screamed while Huda put a finger on her lips.

Naina shook the his hand off in anger and yelled at him as well. "Yeh tumhari vejese hua hai. Agar pakdi gayi na, toh sab ko bachalungi par tumhe sath leker doobongi!"

She opened her mouth to yell more but Alekeh interrupted her. "Guard ya kisi aur ne tuhje dekha?" Yudi nodded a no "Toh kyun chinta karti hai? Nahi pakde jayenge Naina chal."

And they sneaked in to put the plan in action.

In the ballroom with Rajveer.

He didn't have a date. He didn't want one actually, he didn't even want to be at this ball but atlas, he had to be. His thoughts roamed around the rut he was in with Naina. Did he deserve it? Yes. But he didn't want this anymore. He was tired. Seeing Naina everyday. Instead of admiration that use to shine in her eyes, hatred shone.

He looked up from his drink and across the dance floor. The lady who had asked him to dance was still staring, no, drooling at him. He had of course denied politely, but her stare was starting to make him uncomfortable. They way her eyes kept moving up and down his body and stopping at his chest then face. He had worn a fitting black suit with a white shirt. It was simple but unbelievably sexy on him.

He moved to a secluded corner, away from the dancing, away from the people enjoying themselves. He went around a pillar to lean on it but he found something completely unexpected. "Naina?"

Naina was standing on a table with the lighter held up to the fire alarm when she heard his voice. She didn't even have to turn around to know who it was. "Sh*t."

"Naina get off the table." He ordered, back to his Captain mode but she didn't listen. Something about that tone made her angry. It was the same one he had used when he ordered her to go to the infirmary. She didn't like being ordered, especially from the people she didn't like.

Instead of stepping down she stretched herself to lift the lighter closer to the fire alarm in defiance.

In a matter of second Rajveer heard loud screams. The girls shrieked on top of their voices, while the boys ran. Future soldiers? He though sarcastically.

There were cockroaches scattered everywhere and Naina had set of the fire alarm. When the fire alarm goes off, so do the sprinklers in the room. The first year students were wet and scared. It was basically chaos.

Naina stepped down with a smirk on her face and started to walk away.

"Oh no you don't" Rajveer and stepped in front of her. "What is the meaning of this Cadet?" He asked annoyed.

He had been friends with these cadets. They told him about pranks, they told him their plans and here they had gone behind his back and pulled such a chaotic stunt. He was hurt, the other cadets were no longer his friends either?

Now that they had pulled a stupid stunt, he will have to do his job as their teacher. But he knew that he was going to cover for his cadets, cover for his Naina. Save them from whatever extreme punishment Major Nair would give.

Naina just shrugged at his question and tried to walk away while the first years ran left and right around them. She had resorted to childishness, she knew. But frustration was building up in her. The court would not listen to her side of the story, Rajveer walked free and Naveen was still a traitor. At least this way her frustration was silenced for a bit.

"Cadet Naina!" He called again but she was in her own thoughts, and even if she wasn't she wouldn't have listened.

In her own thoughts she didn't see the large panicking first year cadet running towards her with a cockroach on his hand but Rajveer did. He pulled her with force and dragged her to the corner where she had set the alarm of.

"Dekh ke nahi chal sakti ho Naina?" He whispered. His annoyance was put aside and the new proximity replaced his thoughts. His hands were on her hand which he had pinned to the wall. His face was mere centimeters away from hers.

Naina looked and him and turned her face away. Old feelings, the ones she wanted to forget were returning. Every time she looked into his eyes. Her eyes may shine with hatred, but his were still filled with the admiration for her, maybe even love. These mixed feelings caused chaos heart.

What are you thinking Naina! Naveen Bhaiya. This man killed him!

Rajveer was still in his trance. Naina's cheeks were flushed with red. Probably anger.He thought and let go of one of her hands and touched her cheeks gently. She was beautiful.

Taking advantage of that, Naina used her free hand to forcefully remove his grip on her . With that she also gave him a sarcastic smile. She will fight, she will fight her feelings, she will fight for her brother and she will fight with the world if she has to. She is a soldier.

He winced in pain and surprise as her nails dug into her arms. A slight grin crept up his face as he watched her smile sarcastically and then leave.

Once a soldier, always a soldier. From heart, mind, body and soul. He thought, almost as if reading hers.
Edited by starasdf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Pheww!
Back after a long time eh?
That's a long update. I wouldn't be surprised if it's one of the longest I have written. It certainly felt like it.
I hope you guys liked it!
I apologize for any mistakes with grammar and spelling.๐Ÿ˜ณ
I do have a question for you though:
How do you guys like Naina? I am content with her in this story. She is reacting the way a real person would with Rajveer's story. And she also reminds me of LRL's Naina too. This Naina also has a little bit of flavor from me too. But how do you guys like her? Would you agree with me?
Please comment and review, thanks!

-Star
Edited by starasdf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Why is Naina participating in this stupid plan??๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•

Just because her friends said something doesn't mean she had to agree to it!!!!๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’

Good that atleast Ali is not participating in all this!!!!!

Yudi came up with the perfect idea to get the guard out of the way!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Aalekh is sick of Pooja screaming and praising Huda and Pooja shuts up in anger!!!!๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜”

But Pooja's silence also annoyed him and he said Ali's name to get a reaction out of her!!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Yudi had successfully gotten rid of the guard but as Naina said this was crazy!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

It is good that Rajveer does not have a date because I can't stand him having anyone other than Naina as his date!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Rajveer is looking very good in his black suit!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Rajveer should talk to Naina and tell her the truth as even we are tired of it!!!!!๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค”

He caught Naina setting off the fire alarm and ordered her to get off the table!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

But Naina did not listen to him and now the first year students are wet and scared and there is chaos!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’

Rajveer is hurt that they have done this behind his back!!!!!

But even while doing his job as their teacher he would save his Naina and her friends!!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ŠThat is so like Rajveer!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

This was a wrong way for Naina to vent her frustration!!!!!!๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ

I loved it when Rajveer dragged Naina to the corner and pinned her against the wall!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Their feelings were for each other were apparent and their proximity just raised the heat!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ

But Naina forced herself to think of Navin and freed herself while Rajveer was lost in her!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

Instead of being annoyed, Rajveer is proud of her quick thinking!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘


Edited by Shaina_b - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Hi dear
i read all the parts of ur ff its awesome..
good going
and thanx fpr the PM
cont.soon
Edited by RPfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
๐Ÿ˜Š

Hey i just read your FF, and i loved it...you did a awesome job... continuing this FF was a great work...

i love the way naina is fighting was the justice to her brother...she truly deserved the title of best cadet...shalini is right, naina deserved this prestigious title...

i love the way Naina walked into KMA after the long break...she became quite nostalgic...since then, many things is changed all the relationship and their bonds changed...pooja-ali is not together, naina hate raj(whom she loved and believed the most) alekh too hate raj, as his loyalties is with naina...wish they all resolve their differences but one thing haven't change their friendship, which always remains in their heart...

loved the girl bonding, offcourse the hug, pooja-naina chit chat was nice...

the communication and strategy class was good...naina is not able to focus,somebody tell her if she not focus in class its going to be very hard for her to pass, but she rarely care...she just care for her vengeance, her revenge

loved huda...major nair ki class and his quote "These measly cadets think that joining the army is joke! "was too good

raj think that may be Dr.ritu mishra was alive while passing through her room...i also think in the same way..ek bullet ritu mishra jaisi ka kya bikaad paeyegi...

raj try to make conversation with naina, but naina is barley in mood...raj wants to be with naina to prove naveen innocence..but look like naina is not interested to team up with raj again.so she ditched him...and she know very well, she can capable of proving her brother innocence of her own...but naina you can't do this alone neither raj, you both are each other needs...you both needed to figure out your differences and work towards it, to prove naveen innocence...

poor ali and pooja, there family is not supportive to their relationship...hope their family understand their relationship, and they again be together...

good FF๐Ÿ˜Š

Happy New Year 2014๐Ÿ˜Š

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