RN-Look into my eyes-Pt 25+Sumry ||Sept 1|| Pge.72

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Posted: 16 years ago

I MISS LRL SOOO MUCH secialy season 1 n2 N THEY R NOT REPETIN ANY EPISODES(r they i dun think so) ANY way if they r than can sme1 post them awwwe the sad thing is that no1 is lookin bak at this fourm there is like no activity goin on so i thought to make an FF if any of u guyzzz have any ideas than just PM me i am hoppin for replies nad suggestions on how to make this ff better of just comment thhx guyz!

Pls be peitent its my first FF 😳

*EDITED* (thought i would add a summary/Plot)

Plot/Summary:

Naina a Bubbly girlis happy with all her friends and her life untill herbrother, Navinis proved as a traitor.She decides she will prove him innocent with the help of her friends. She goes to KMA (Kanchangunga Military Academy) where her brother was was last posted(Navin is aCaptain and was teaching at KMA) She goes there as a cadet(student) with her friends. There they meet Rajveer(Rajveer-Naina-Couple). Rajveer is a teacher at KMA andhas a lot of screats that he has been hiding....Some even about Navin. He decides to helpNaina. They will ofcoursestart having feelings about each other but will the Navin's case get in the way?

Okay thats the story and if u have seen the show than my story will be similar up to the mentorship camp than take its own turn......

And all of you are probably thinking this is a very serious story but dont worry there is a lot of comedy in it too.

Some in hindi sepically the starting

<And (lol lot to say) You can see that not a lot of Info about Rajveer...Well read they story and get too know him. I want his screats to reveal slowly. And by the sumary you may think Raj's Charcter is serious...itz not....you may think that in the first 2-3 partz but trust me his charcter is very fun.

Part 1

Naina: Your Hounour may i suggest a punnishment for this criminal?

Judge: go ahead

Naina: your Hounour i was thinking to makin him do good deeds for our country instead of sendin him to jail because ifhe goes to jail he will cme out sme day and start stealing again so why dont we makehim my helper for solvingcases for the next year?

Judge: if you think this will work than suit ur self but it is your responcibility that herealises his istakes

Naina:yes sir

Judge: courtdismissed

everybodyleaves andnaina is about to leave but some 1 tapps her shoulder

Person: naina mane tuhje meri help karne karne ko kaha tha!

Naina: help to ke now you wont go to jail

Person: kya help ke ise toh me uss jail me sadta to achha ho taa

Naina:oh toh i saved youshould be thanking me

Person: THANK YOU VERY MUCH OR MEH HELP NAHI KARNE WALA HU

The person is about to leave

Naina:ALAKEH!!!! RUK TU HELP KAREEE GA AGARNAHI KAARE GA nA TOH meH TUJE MARDALU GI

Naina knew this is a dangerous world so she had learned karate nad now has a black belt in it alakeh had to say yes because he knew naina the power to knock him out rite there and rite than acutually

when they first met him and naina did have a fight..............

k guys i will continue later andlater on iwil show flashbacks about naina and alakeh's first meeting GuYS pllz cOMMENT THHx

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1.Shaina_b

2.arpita25

3.Mahak Sinha

4.dazzling_glory
5.prerna1

6.fanatic 21

7.ronojoy_ria
8.sumaiya wahid

9.sea_nyx

10.Nishtth

11.gazal_sameer

12.crazyme

13.suhana_dixit

14.Lion_Priya

15.rituka7

16.Meera01

17.Revolutionbreez

18.sharmi06

19.golu_1677

20. Dhara_s

Promo and Part Index:

Promo:

Pge.1

Pge.3

Pge.

Pge.56

Part:

Part.1....................Pge.1 Part.22A.................Pge.59

Part.2....................Pge.2 Part.22B.................Pge.62

Part.3....................Pge.4 Part.23...................Pge.66

Part.4....................Pge.6 Part.24...................Pge.68

Part.5....................Pge.7 Part.25...................Pge.72

Part.6....................Pge.10

Part.7....................Pge.12

Part.8....................Pge.14

Part.9....................Pge.16

Part.10...................Pge.20

Part.11...................Pge.24

Part.12...................Pge.25

Part.13...................Pge.29

Part.14...................Pge.31

Part.15...................Pge.33

Part.16...................Pge.35

Part.17...................Pge.39

Part.18...................Pge.42

Part.19...................Pge.46

Part.20...................Pge.49

Part.21...................Pge.53

Edited by starasdf - 14 years ago

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@starasdf

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Posted: 16 years ago

thx for giving me advice to transfer it to the ff section and ihope i get the same response maybe more as i got from lrl fourm keep reading and posting comments and improvements as this is my first FF thx guys and i will be updatin tomorrow and if i get lots of reponses than the updates will probably be longer thxx and here is a promo

every 1 was havin fun and Suddenly a capt. had just stepped in the room but no one heard or saw him comming in because of the loud music and everybody was dancing

all of a sudden naina tripped over yudi's foot and some1 strong but gentel had caught he

hope you guyzz like it and remember too coment thxx

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vvdn

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Hiiii,

so we have another new writer...COOL.
starting is interesting.......keep updating.

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Priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hiiiiii....

nice intro....👏

plz do cont. soon....

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Posted: 16 years ago

the intro is really good... i'd love to read more... pls ud soon

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Shaina_b

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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina saved Aalekh from going to jail and now Aalekh has to help her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh is clearly not at all thankful for it and would have preffered going to jail!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Naina is a black belt!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

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Prerna

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Posted: 16 years ago

sounds interesting

really good start

plz continue soon

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@starasdf

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Posted: 16 years ago

okay guyzz here it goess

Part 2

FlashBakkk

4 years ago

DING DONG DING DONG the bell rings

Person: uffffff yeh naina ka connection kabhi nahi lagta

DING DONG

Person2: tum ruko meh atta huh

Person 2 climbs up the window as he saw sme expensive bracletss

Person2: hmm yeh toh pooja ki dost hai mujhe kya asa toh tohdi na hai ki meri bi dost banegi meh yeh braclets rah de ta hu

Naina opens the door

Naina: srry pooja meri aakh lag gayi thi

Pooja and naina here a noice that went THUMP!!

They heard it and ran upstairs and pooja had gussed who might be upstairs

Naina opens the door

Naina: yells CHOR CHOR!

he was about to escape naina pulled him bak and knocked him out on the bed.

pooja came running and naina was about to call the police

Pooja: naina ruk. police ko mat bula

Naina: kyu??

Pooja: yeh mera dost haiiii alekeh

Nania: pooja tu ne kaise dost rake haiii yeh CHORI kar raha tha!!!

Soon enough naina had forgiven alekah for his mistake and they became really close friends and soon alekah had started thinking of naina as her sister and was let me correct that is very protective of her. Naina hates him when he becomes protective because 2 of her boyfriends had broken up with her in the past because of him.

End Of FlashBakk

Alekeh: hummm appun logg ha naa ek kamm kar te haa tu kam kar aur apun aram karta hai taak hai?

Naina: alekeh to chal we have to work on mrs. mehra's case

At naina's house

Naina: alekeh ajj date kya hue?

Alekeh: ummmm october 23 08

Naina: SHIT!

Alekeh: kya huaaa?

Naina: ajj pooja ka B-DAY HAI!

kya kareee IDEA

Naina and alekeh call 4people and tell them to meet at kma by 5pm

5pm In Ambala KMA

Naina: yeh log kaha reh gayeee

Alekeh: ajj jayenge tu jinta kaiko kar ti hai?

Suddenly some 2 come on a bike

Person: haiii naina tuhje dek kar lagta hai ke meh swarg mein hu

Naina:Shut Up Huda! aur yudi tu utrega bike pe se

Person2: Naina Huda bahi edhar behind the tree

Alekeh: Ali?? kya kar reha hai tu?

Ali: edhar ayiye

They go to meet ali

Ali: i sent pooja to the mess lets go her window is here

All of them sneek in and some1 is w8ing for them

Naina: oh sit koi hai ander Ali tune pooja ko mess meh hi behja tha na?

Ali: haa

Person: itz ok guyz ma hu

Naina: oh thank god app hai naveen bhaiya

Naveen: jaldi karo

They decorate the room in a party style and when pooja came bak too her room they all YELLED SURPISE! HAPPI B-DAY!

Pooja: awww than you guyzz i tought u huyz forgot

Everybody is parting and a capt. passing by heard the loud music

nobody heard the capt. knocking

every 1 was havin fun and Suddenly a capt. had just stepped in the room but no one heard or saw him comming in because of the loud music and everybody was dancing

everybody was havin fun and

all of a sudden naina tripped over yudi's foot and some1 strong but gentel had caught her.

the capt. looked at her and naina's eyes were close as she was scared to fall pooja noticed that Huda was a little jelous see naina with the capt. on the other hand capt. couldnt get her eyes off naina's face

Huda: are naina tum thik ho

reality had stuck the capt. and he let her stand up

Naina: ha huda

thank you par app kon?

Capt. meh Capt. Rajveer Singh Shekawat

Huda & Naina: OH SHIT

Capt.: tum log yeh party? no the first thing i should ask is tum log ho kon? aur cadet Gahi abhi tak tumara first year suru bhi nahi hua or ur breaking the rules?

Naveen: itz okay raj.. Capt. Rajveer( he had to corect the name mistake because major: bhargave was there) Cadet Gahi ne meri permision lee thi.

Major Bhargav couldnt do anything because Navin was the vice pricipal but he wouldnt go as he wanted to know wat Naveen would do to these kids

Naveen: naina parti over dekho itz 9pm u should go now

Naina: okay bahiya

Naina and her gang left through the window they way they came in and major bhargav and all the kids wer leavin and it was naina turn to climb down the ladder and she fell offf up in the room Capt. Rajveer naveen and pooja burst into laughter and naveen called naina stupid because they could have just left through the door it would have been much easier

guyzzz i will update 2 night again and i am hoppin for lots of comment so plz comment!

THx

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Edited by starasdf - 16 years ago