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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
@Sparkling Eyes, PrithviSanyo, rajivkiijaan, golu_1677, prerna1

Thanks a ton guys!

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is really good
rajveer and shaliny were discussing about who will be the best cadet of the year and coincidently both of them wanted Naian to won this tittle as they both thinks she is the most deserving candidate
Rajveer who now knows that Naina hates him like anything wanted to talk to her and tell her that she should keep aside her personnal grudges atleast for the time being as they needs to be together to proff Naveen innocent and with this motive he called Naian and wanted to talk to her but Naian's mind is fully occupied with hatred for Rajveer didnt heard a single word of him she went from there leaving Rajveer in a devastated state
where here Ali andPooja whose relationship also got broken due to their family cant forget their love t
Ali who cant go against their family wanted to make P{ooja understand and requests her to atleast be his friend but Pooja for whom it is not all possible tells him to make a concreate decission
plz cont soon and pm me


Thanks! Both Rajveer and Shalini think Naina is deserving for the title. If Naina puts her hatred aside together as a team I am sure they can make progress. Ali is thinking of their families while he made that decision, he did not want to hurt them.
Next update will be tomorrowish.

Originally posted by: arpita25

Hey I don't know from where your story had been started but I loved the update ๐Ÿ˜Š or for me the first part of this FF.๐Ÿ˜‰ Naina is angry over Rajveer and obviously she will tell about it to her besties Pooja and Alekh.๐Ÿ˜› Now both of themhave started hating Rajveer. Both don't want to face each other.๐Ÿ˜› But they have to meet.๐Ÿ˜• Naina has a lot of hatred for her but Raj has love in his eyes.๐Ÿ˜ณ He still curses that day when Naina has come to know about the truth.๐Ÿ˜ญ I am waiting for their confrontation.


Hey Arpita, glad you like it. I can send you the link to S1 but my writing wasn't exatly the best then.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
Yes, Naina hates him a lot because he is her brother's murderer, let's see how Rajveer loses that title in the future.

Originally posted by: arpita25

Oh Naina, how can u still hate that man to whom u loved sometime back.๐Ÿ˜• He is trying his best to be with him and even want her to win the best cadet award but Naina has taken a resolution not to help him. I know her anger isgenuine but u know v can't see Raj getting tensed and be sad anytime.๐Ÿ˜’ Raj still can't trust someone else rather than Naina n she hates him.๐Ÿ˜” I agree that in Pooja and Ali's relation than how can he expect her to be friendly with her? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ I hope soon Naina's mood will change when she will come to know the truth about Raj and Naveen's death but any how they should be together. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
UPdate soon dear


She hates him because she thinks Rajveer murdered her brother, even he thinks so as well.
The truth that Naveen and Rajveer worked together won't be hidden for long, that is one secret that will be out soon.

Ali is hurt him self for his decision. Thanks for the comment, next update will be tomorrow.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey so sorry yaar.๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• I was not here when u updated the first part. Its kk, I am glad you are here now. :)

Nice update. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘Thanks!

Oh Naina...how can u hate him? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ I know u don't know the truth still how can u believe that? ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• Did u never feel the need to hear and know every thing from Raj personally? ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜กRaj was the one who revealed this to her.

I really don't like her behavior of telling every thing to Alekh and Pooja
๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ but it's obvious as both of them are her best buddies here.๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” Pooja is unable to believe it but Alekh believed her which was hurting for me. ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” Alakeh and Pooja are true friends to Naina.

Again what was the need to give such daggers by looks? ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก Raj was feeling uncomfortable and I am sure he wanted to class to be over asap.
๐Ÿ˜› Lol he was uncomfortable

Thank god Huda and Yudi didn't know about it otherwise no one was going to talk him as all would have been started to hate him.๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” Yes the would have.



Originally posted by: varshita

Confrontation was nice as well. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘Thanks!

I have expected the same thing or I should say response which she did.
๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” How could she behave normally? ๐Ÿ˜กUs se to yahi expected tha na? You are really angry at Naina๐Ÿ˜†.

Raj just wanted her help to prove Naveen innocent but she as usual denied as she can't trust him n Raj can't trust anyone else rather than Naina. ๐Ÿ˜’
๐Ÿ˜’
๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’Don't worry they both will be working together soon.

I am very sad about Naina's behavior and angry with her as well.๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” She was rude with him where as on another hand he wanted her to win the best cadet award and Shalu as well. ๐Ÿ˜Š

But no Naina don't care about it all. ๐Ÿ˜• Naina's behavior will get better towards him, just give it time.

Will be waiting for update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Coming Tomorrow.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

Hey Star good to see you back with this ff๐Ÿ˜Š Thanks Shreya.


Both updates were very nice ๐Ÿ˜Š Thanks once again.

How long will Naina going to hate Raj both of them had suffered the same hope this will end soon one day It will, I prefer happy endings, so this FF will have one too๐Ÿ˜†.

And as for Ali and Pooja they both are problematic by birth๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Loll ikr. :P

Continue soon
Thanks for the pm๐Ÿ˜Š
Thanks next update is tomorrow,

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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

OHooo Naina, I really hate her such behavior. I remember the days when she used to hate him in LRL, I just wanted to slap her that time as well. By now the feeling has changed a bit as I feel she was not wrong it was all situation.
Oh Raj u are really sweet as I know. You wanted ur Naina to win the best cadet trophy and Shalini as well. Shalini wanted Major Nair to realize that girls are no less and I know soon it will be proven with Naina.
Raj was feeling a pride to hear all the praises as if he is getting all praises after all she is his love and protege as well,
It was hard for Raj to face her and talk to her was much more harder. Par Naina ko to apna gussa utarne se fursat ho to kuch kare? He tried his best and see he at least called Naina to talk about Naveen's matter so that he could prove him innocent.
But once again he couldn't face Naina's hatred for him. She can't believe him and trust him so she as expected refused his proposal to help him in this mission. Poor Raj, he is not getting a single chance to say something or prove that he is innocent.
I seriously hope soon Naina will realize her mistake and than she will find no words to say him sorry.
Try to update fast.



Thanks Mahak!

Yes, Naina and Rajveer aren't to blame here. The situation is just bad and unfortunately Rajveer is on the lose end with Naina's anger.
Rajveer and Shalini both know that Naina deserves to win that's why they both support her.
Don't worry they will be working together soon.
Will do! Thanks once again.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Guys, unres soon๐Ÿ˜ณ.
Next update tomorrowish.

-Star
Edited by starasdf - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! Thanks.

Raj obviously wants Naina to win the title of the Best Cadet and even Shalini wants her to win it!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ They support her because she deserves it.

Raj suspects that Ritu is still alive and I have a feeling that he is right!!!!๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” Yes, he has his 6th sense on and he feels she might be. We will find out.

He needs Naina to work with him but Naina is too involved in her hatred right now!!!!! Yes, but she will come around.

It was diffcult for Raj to talk to Naina but he managed to ask her to work with him for Navin's sake!!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ He had to talk to her and he knew their first talk was not going to go well.

But Naina is too stubborn aur usse apne gusse se fursat mile tab na!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก Many times people don't make the right decisions in anger, Naina rejected to team up with him in anger.

As expected she refused to work with him and thinks that she can do everything herself without him!!!!๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ Once again, it's the anger that is making her take the decision.

Poor Raj!!!!๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜”He should tell Naina the truth!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š It will be out soon.

Ex-lovers cannot be friends and Ali should not expect Pooja to be just friends with him now!!!!!๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ Ali's decision hurt himself too, now he is seeing how much it will hurt him with not being with Pooja.

Good thing that Pooja gave him two options and if indeed Ali cannot go against his parents, he should forget her!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ He needs to make a choice but I hope you can see his predicament, going against parents and hurting them is not easy. It's easier that you take the fall and that is what Ali did but he also took Pooja down with him.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
hey awesome fic!! glad to see someone writing rn after such a long time:) keep up the good work!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Hey both parts are good.๐Ÿ‘ Sorry for being late in reply. Update soon n do pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
woww
nice parts
too good
great going
waiting for the next part.
sorry yaar, for late reply.plzz add me in ur PM list.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: strawberrychip

hey awesome fic!! glad to see someone writing rn after such a long time:) keep up the good work!


Thanks a ton!

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