FF Finally I'm Home Pt8B August 7th 2013 - Page 6

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--Janvie-- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Wow, Very Awesome + Amazing Update yar!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ I loved it alot.❤️
I liked it that Arnav accepted RK as his Bhaiyya,But I hope He starts trusting him completely now.
And Arnav is second close to his Bhabhi Madhu and is caring, protective for her.Ahaan,I liked that alot. 👏 ⭐️ 😳
I was wondering earlier when will Nani enter as you have given a precap once,She can create trouble,But I loved how
Arnav is attached with his second family and defended them in front of everyone.I loved How he questions Nani.❤️ 😳
And The Maan Singh Khurana made his entry.Why was He eyeing RK ki Biwi?Lagta Hai Use Apni Geet ki yaad aa gai,They are look-alikes naa?😉 😳 😳
Can't wait to read more...Pls Continue Soon. 😳
Thanks for the pm. 😃

P.S. :- Sorry for my late comment.I didn't saw your pm earlier. 😳 😳
And Ya I wrote Aryan last time.My mistake. 😳 Actually I'm imagining Aarav from ipkknd as little Arnav whom Arnav & Khushi adopted. 😉 😳 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: titli4love

nice update...what's this Nani n Doctor's intention?they seems to be evil.



Nani and Maan's intentions will be soon revealed!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: janvie

Wow, Very Awesome + Amazing Update yar!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ I loved it alot.❤️
I liked it that Arnav accepted RK as his Bhaiyya,But I hope He starts trusting him completely now.
And Arnav is second close to his Bhabhi Madhu and is caring, protective for her.Ahaan,I liked that alot. 👏 ⭐️ 😳
I was wondering earlier when will Nani enter as you have given a precap once,She can create trouble,But I loved how
Arnav is attached with his second family and defended them in front of everyone.I loved How he questions Nani.❤️ 😳
And The Maan Singh Khurana made his entry.Why was He eyeing RK ki Biwi?Lagta Hai Use Apni Geet ki yaad aa gai,They are look-alikes naa?😉 😳 😳
Can't wait to read more...Pls Continue Soon. 😳
Thanks for the pm. 😃

P.S. :- Sorry for my late comment.I didn't saw your pm earlier. 😳 😳
And Ya I wrote Aryan last time.My mistake. 😳 Actually I'm imagining Aarav from ipkknd as little Arnav whom Arnav & Khushi adopted. 😉 😳 😳



I get excited to read your comments after every update :)

Glad you're liking the relationships and the story line.
Yea I had the pre-cap earlier, but I didn't feel it was right to introduce the Raizada family in to the story at that point.
Sorry, I don't speak Hindi, so im not sure what you said :p
I've started the next update and will post it hopefully tomorrow
Aarav may make an appearance in the future, but not sure yet :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: maaneet93




I get excited to read your comments after every update :)

Glad you're liking the relationships and the story line.
Yea I had the pre-cap earlier, but I didn't feel it was right to introduce the Raizada family in to the story at that point.
Sorry, I don't speak Hindi, so im not sure what you said :p
I've started the next update and will post it hopefully tomorrow
Aarav may make an appearance in the future, but not sure yet :P


Oh You dont speak Hindi,The line in Hindi means,Maan must have got reminded of his Geet seeing Madhu,Coz they
are look-alikes. 😳 And I'll be waiting for your update,Next time I won't be commenting so late,LOL.😆
And Aarav also going to enter,Oh Then I'll have to find some replacement for him,Coz That Kid really made a perfect
face for Arnav's childhood.They are like exact replica's and copies of each other.😊And Ya I adore Aarav.He is really cute and his acting is just superb. 😊 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
part 7
very nice...
wow Maan's entry...
Arnav is very angry now...
cont soon dear...
maaneet93 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Part 8A
"Arnav, calmed down, this isn't the way to talk to your Nani." came a new voice. Everyone turned towards the direction of the voice to see a man dressed in formals, with a laptop bag towards them, "I'm Maan Singh Khurana and I'm Anjali and Arnav's doctor." His eyes lingers at Madhu for a second longer than required, returning back to Arnav.

"Why the hell are you here in my house?" roared R.K. moving to stand right in front of Madhu, "How dare you look at my Biwi?"

"Inspector, I think you should take him away now. He is not required here." Maan said with a smirk. All he had to do was get R.K. out of their lives, and everything else will fall into place.

R.K. tries to resist when the Inspector tries to handcuff him. Madhu steps forward, placing a hand on his cheek, "R.K. don't struggle. I will figure things out. I'll bring the lawyer and I'll bring you back home. Don't worry. I'll handle this"

R.K. immediately calms down as Madhu places a kiss on his forehead, "I'll send the lawyers right away. Let me take care of the kids situation and then I'll come to get you."

Maan looks away indisgust. Geet, I'm doing all of this just for you. Don't worry, only a few days more, and you will be back with me forever and always as I promised.

R.K. is taken away by the police officers followed by Bittuji. Madhu turns back to the family to see Arnav trying to dragging his Di away from their Nani.

"If I may, I don't think it is a good idea that you try to get close to these kids. They have been through a lot. Its best if we adults talk alone to get this problem solved," Madhu calmly turns to Arnav, "why don't you and Anjali go to your room, we will call you later when we figure things out."

Arnav ponders for a while, before stepping up to Madhu and sticking out his pinky, "Promise me that you won't leave us"

Madhu's heart broke into pieces as she had no clue as to how she will handle the situation but nevertheless she catches Arnav's pinky with her own, "I pinky promise that I will do everything in my control to make sure that we will stay together." Placing a kiss on both of the kids' forward, she beckons one of the servants to take the kids into their bedroom.

Turning back to the crowd, she addresses Dr. Maan, "So you are the children's doctor right?"

"Well yes, I have been their doctor ever since they were born."

"So what would you recommend we do? Clearly the kids have been traumatized with what had happened with their parents. It took the kids a while to get trust me and R.K. Do you really think it is a good idea for the kids to go with them and push them further into unstable emotional condition?"

Nani looked furious, "You can't keep my grandkids from us!"

Madhu patiently addresses Nani, "I'm not saying that I'll keep them from you, I'm just simply saying that kids should stay here and you can visit them."

Nani didn't look convinced, turning to Maan, "Doctor you have been to be on our side. The kids are young and they don't know better. It is us adults who have to make decisions for them. They are my blood, so they have to stay with me."

Madhu turns to Maan, "It is up to you Doctor. You know what is best for the kids in term of their health and mental condition. Who
should the kids stay with?"

Maan thinks for a while...

to be continued...


Hey guys! I'm terribly sorry for the very late update. I have been going through some tough times in my personal life. I really hope to get back into a regular schedule soon. I really want to finish this story. Thank you for all my supporters!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Hey dear

Finally you updated this one

Really loved it

Waiting to read more

So do continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Hey Dear,Welcome back.🤗 🤗
It was an Awesome Update and You are back with a bang!👏👏⭐️Loved it alot.❤️
What the...?!RK in Jail?!😲This Maan is a Big Kameena I see.😡Or Should I say He is doing it for getting his Geet,thinking that Madhu is Geet.😲Btw Where is Our Geet?!😛😉I loved RK's little face-off with Maan.🤣My Two Angry-Young Man's.😳🤣 🤣
Loved the way Arnav don't wanna leave Madhu-RK and go with his not so good Naani here.😊His bond with Madhu is really adorable and heart-touching.❤️😳
And Then Again I loved how Madhu stood strong facing the situation smartly and courageously,unlike the Madhu in our Show nowadays,Which needs RK's reminder to think sanely and tackle with that Creepy Sadakchap Sultan.😡🤢

So Finally What will be Maan's decision?!😉I guess He is gonna say that the kids can stay with RK-Madhu but He will insist on him staying there as well.😛That's what can happen most probably according to me.😳

I'm waiting for My RK to get out of the Jail soon.😛😳So Pls bring him out soon,Ok?!😉😳

And Hey,I hope and will pray that everything go well with your personal life.😊You can continue whenever you get time,We will wait.😳

Btw dear,I saw in My dashboard that your Birthday is coming soon.😉 😳So I Wish you a very Happy Birthday in Advance.😃Hope you have lots of fun on that day and Enjoy thouroughly and May you have a Happy Year Ahead with God's blessings around you always.😊🤗 🤗
Btw What's your name?!😳

And Thanks for the PM.😃

Edited by janvie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Nice update though short --- So what vl be Maan's decision --- Lets see --- & Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 8B

A few hours later at the police station

"Inspector, I'm telling you for the hundredth time, I did not kidnap those kids."

"Save your energy Mr. Kundra. I have been given orders and I am following them. You can prove your innocence to the courts."

"That won't be necessary" a voice came out of no where, which turns out to be Bittuji.

The lawyers gave the inspector the necessary documents to release R.K. out on bail.

The officer turns to R.K." You can go now, but you would still need to appear at court for the official hearing."

R.K. rolls his eyes, and speeds out of the station, not wanting to stay there any long and wanting to get back to his family as soon as possible, however stops when he hears Bittuji calling him.

"Chief, Bhabi and the kids are not at home!"

"WHAT?"

Flash back to the R.K. Mansion earlier

Maan thinks for a while before turning to both families, "I think its best that the kids stay with someone they trust, in this case it is Madhu. If we let the kids go with you Nani, the kids may have a difficult time emotionally, as all this would be too much for them. However, I do believe that the kids should not stay in this house. R.K. is well-known by media, hence the kids may be harassed by the media."

Nani immediately jumps in, "then all three of them can come and live at our place!"

Madhu doesn't seem to agree, "Unfortunately, since there is a court case involved, the kids cannot move into a different city. They must stay within the city."

Nani gives her a smirk, "well, I guess you don't know how rich we are. Our ancestorial home is in this city. The you and the kids are welcomed to stay at our mansion. And Doctor Maan, we would dearly appreciate if you would stay with us as well to keep an eye on the kids."

Madhu thinks about it for a while, "I will agree to stay at the Raizada mansion only up until the court case. I have a strong feeling that we would win the court case and I will leave with the kids immediately, which means I should not have any problems from your side if the court provides a verdict that is positive on my side. That being said, I would not stop you from visiting the kids and spending time with them. You are their family as well, and I want them to grow up knowing who their relatives are. If you agree to the conditions, I will come right away."

Nani agreed right away. All she had to do was take the kids out of the house and she succeeded in that. All she has to do is somehow get Madhu out of the kids lives, and everything will go back to normal.

Nani, Mama and Mami returned home to arrange the house to accommodate the new guests. They decided to leave baby Akash at the R.K. Residence as he was not feeling well, and Doctor Maan said he would take care of the baby. Madhu calls Bittuji who was on his way to take R.K. out on bail about all the changes that has happened and told him to make R.K. call her as soon as he gets out.

Back to Present

R.K. immediately calls Madhu's cellphone, who picks up in two dials,
"Hello R.K. are you ok?"

"Hey Sweetheart, I'm fine. How are you? Bittuji just told me all that has happened. Why the hell did you leave? You know we could of taken care of the media."

"R.K. calm down and listen to me. You and I are used to the media, where as the kids are not. Also, the kids' Nani seemed really despearte and I felt bad."

"But you haven't thought about me have you Madhu? How would I be able to live with you living so far away?"

"Its not just you R.K. Me and the kids dearly miss you but its for the best. The court hearing is in a few days and I'm positive that the sentence would be in our favour. Then we can all be together. It is just a matter of few days. I don't want anything else to be complicated. Please try to understand R.K.. I don't like being away from you, it hurts, but staying away for a few days means that we get to stay together forever with no complications would mean for the good."

"I understand Madhu. But it hurts. Where are you right now?"

"I'm on my way to the Raizada Mansion. The kids are here with me along with their Mama's child as well as Doctor Maan."

Madhu hears something break on the other side, "R.K.?!?!? Are you alright?! What was that noise?"

"Don't worry, It's nothing"

"R.K. tell me right now!"

"I broke a glass" R.K. looks at the broken car window. God how he hate the fact that THAT Doctor is with them. He can't wait for his family to come back to him.

"R.K. please take care of yourself. I know it hurts but its for the better. Please go and get that hand fix by the doctor."

"Yea I will. Don't worry. I miss you."

"I miss you too R.K. I'll pray to God that we overcome this hurdle as quickly..."

R.K. hears some gun shots along side the screams of Madhu.

"Madhu! Madhu?!?"

Beep Beep Beep

R.K. cuts the call and tries to call again but it says the phone is switched off!

Dear God, don't let anything happen to my family.

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