KR FF(new): Annihilating A Mirage (Ch2 Pg11)

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

Memories

They make us cry

They make us happy

And some memories are made to bury inside

But sometimes when life makes u face it

The deepest wounds are opened

Trapped in a moment where future becomes bleak

And past becomes the reality

Seeking it to be a dream when it is the truth

And wishing for the truth to just be an illusion

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

Index

Chapter 1
Chapter 2

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry story has been removed to a new place.
New link

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

res

unres

finally!!!!!!!!

finally u penned it down!! i was dying to read the first chapter...i m telling u ur such a confused soul!! but coming to the intro...it was awesome!!! and coming to chapter .. it was awesome re!!

i meani loved the start!! u see those abrupt starts!! pata hai kitni mushkil se i read thinking mujhe concept nahi pata i m totally new to this story just to enjoy it... and the way u write...u know how much i like it!!!

rey ka reaction his pain and then kria ka words!!!!! feeling too bad for rey!!! agla part jaldi kar😳

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

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Posted: 12 years ago

res...

unres...

finally finally u hav posted this...

pta nhi tuje kya prob hai apne aap se...

why u doubt urself...

see i think ab tere dobts kuch clear hue ho...

so abt the update...

tuje sachi me dubara se apni tarif sunani hai...

yaa rahne dun...

as i tole u earlier k mere ko ye update kitna pasnd aya...

feeling really sad for rey...

it wld be really difficult for him to make her realse er love for him...

but that wld be really interesting to read...wid ur touch...

mere ko abi se isme bht maza aa rha hai...

so update next part soon...

P.S.-baki k ff ko mat bhul jana plzzz...

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

what was that

accident

m real thing is that kuj palley nahi pre

aveyi 3 baar read ki

phir b upar sey gya

kriya pagal go gyi kya

first mey hi rey ko rula diya

agli updatte k baad kuj bol paugi

so update fast

AROMA_RUBHARU😉

Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

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Posted: 12 years ago

Interesting start :-) can't wait to read more

Nikki <3

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shalini saroha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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unres

yeh kya tha yaar...
mns frst m hi accident...
yaar chappy toh thoda smooth rakhti...:p
kriya is behaving lyk a mentally retarded patient...
is she b'cum lyk one????????
contiinue pretty soon...
it seems intrsting/...
loved d update but d sad one at this hour is nt gud...:p
osssoommm update...

thanxxx 4 pm

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Araina

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ktine shuru karegi casper?!!

Padhai karo 😳

-Edit-
Okay, sach se shuru karti hi... I wasn't going to read this... I just saw the link in DD's thread and I thought ki tune koi already ongoing FF ya SS ka update diya.. Phir I found out you started new one... Toh sirf tujhe daantne ke liye I had commented... Then you asked me to read and see if it's confusing because others found it confusing... Isiliye I read Chapter 1... I dunno if I'll continue to read... NT padh rahi hu yahi mere liye shocking hai... I dunno if I'll able to continue to read this one too... Sorry for that Casper...
- Title -
Off to the FF... Sabse pehle... The title... Itna ache ache title tu sochti kaise hai?? I should make you my title thinker 🤣 I have like manybe 7 FF's unnamed as of now 🤣
- Introduction -
Intro on first post was mind blowing. It just captures my heart for reason... It holds such true and deep emotions in it!! It's all about memories... I can just tell that this FF won't be happy go lucky types... It's gonna be very emotionally packed and drama right? Trapped in a moment when future becomes bleak... and Past becomes the reality... Yahin pe tune pure ka pure FF ka raaz hi khol diya meri maa 😛 Yet, I love it.. Like I said.. the words hold such deep emotions and feelings that you just feel attached to it..
- Chapter 1 - Ye kya bomb phoda? I knew it... Ye happy go lucky FF nai hai. Starting mai hi itna heavy?? Kriya ka accident... aur A...
Jab she's living in the past now... Ye bhi bata de ki past mai Swayam ne aisa kya kiya tha ki she hates him and Rey both... Kuch bada hi hoga..
And their child? =( She's pregnant and this is what she thinks?!! Oh Gosh... Rey toh must be heart broken... At such happy memories, life takes a harsh turn and everything is forgotten... I wonder what wil happen when she realizes her 'weight' isn't going down...
Please don't put it like the doctor saying if they try to make her remember anything, it will endanger her... I hate such moments 😆
How I wish no one had to go through this in their life... Alas, it's the truth.. I'm liking how well you put forth Rey's expressions and emotions.
Erm.. Dunno what else to say.. Just that I'm shocked at the beginning... But well put forth. Good luck for this one as well 🤗

Aur haan... please please please focus on writing less and more on studies..! Kuch mahino ki hi toh baat hai.. Then you can write all you want =)
Chalo bye! I'll see if I can continue reading.. else, please forgive me Casper 😳🤗
Love, -NS.

Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago