KR FF(new): Annihilating A Mirage (Ch2 Pg11)

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Interesting concept..

n about d 1st chappy... wht can I say?! actually I'm confused...

whtz d prob wid Kria? She's out of her mind...

continue soon

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

ryt now all I can say is after reading this for the second tym I feel like laughing..

naa naah.. its not that update mein problem hai.. aisa ho sakta hai kya.. well surely not

but its lyk mystery, drama, n all in one single update

lagta hai sumone's mastering to get all emotions with the perfect flow in a single update..

I am gonna love this for sure as the flaahbacks gonna be amazing

aur toh aur I have this very strong feeling to get a really spicy chapters in future for this..

all I wanna ask is.. its just a confusion.. are u trying to make ppl addicted to ur works.. I mean aur kitne aane baaki hai.. I remember theres still one or two story lines u told me abt is yet to come..

aur updates jaldi dena.. u see I am addicted to these works.. toh pretty please.. make it soon...

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anjali

@anjali22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

awesome start

kriya ki memory loss hogai hai kya?

update next part soon

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Sanjana

@sweet_sanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

can't understand yeh kriya ko kya hua
Continue soon
eager to know ahead

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Back to create magic 😉
Ahaan! I liked that title
Plus your starting lines on 1st post 😃
Seems to create mirage 😉😆

Again flabbergasted plus worried Rey running through hospital foyer.
The choice of words and their explanation were adding emotions to your writing👏

Kria was alright which was indeed a goodluck for him but poor Rey unaware of upcoming traumatic series.

She is pretending to hate him, or is she really? or is there something more to it?
Well, I know the answer but would like to zip up until next update 😉

Good work Vaishu

N update soon 😃

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arshafever

@arshafever

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

i love your titles.. they have such deep meanings..

umm it was kinda confusing..

seems kriya was pregnant and after accident she got a memory loss... something really bad has happened in past i suppose.. 😕

but nice concept.. something really different..

would love to read furthur..

thanks 4 the pm.. 😊

n do update soon..!! 😳

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

vaishuuu... i'm so happy..😊

tujhe jiska darr tha... vo bilkul nhi hua..😃

maine sab comments padh liye..😉

hehehe... sab kanfuse hain... maza aaying 😆

han... ab kriya ka accident is story ka main point h...uske bina to memory loss hi na hota 😳

awww ... i told u na... rey ko rote huye nhi dekha jata..😔

aur yahan to kriya khud se door karing rey ko...

aur vo bhi uski wife ho ke... rey ki haalat to 😭

ab memory loss me to apna unborn baby bhi nhi dikhega na...

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Amrutha

@only_kriyansh

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

kria aise kyu baat kar rahi hai...rude sa...😔aage dekhte hai...😉

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annu

@_sweetannu_

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

woow another new well written story..👏

start was just fabulous..i like it i like it..😛

kriya ka accident..😲..n is she partially

lost her memory..she is suffering frm amnesia..😔..?????

she remember hard time of their relation..😭..poor

rey kitna hurt hua....wo kaise kriya se dur rahe.

i can't wait to see what comes next

i want to see how their relationship moves forword in story..

i too love reading more..🤗

Edited by _sweetannu_ - 12 years ago

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DocSNair

@Mukthaa

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Really really interesting
But m totally confused...what happened to
Kriya...why is she behaving like this...rey ne
isa kya kiya..is she pregnant...interesting
...poor rey 😭 ...he is really hurt...
Cant wait to read more...plzz update the next part soon