She~TR OS~Completed - Page 3

Originally posted by: -mimi-

Shreya.. I'm on cloud no#9 after reading your comment..

the poetry on the beginning i didn't write it.. it's lyrics of "MUskan Jhuti Hai from Talaash"

n thanks u liked mt banner..

my answer is from songs.. this story crossed my mind when i was listening Muskan Jhuti Hai..😳

now i'm on cloud no #99😃

what was that mimi omg like seriously i have no words to describe it!

how did u come up with such an amazing out of the box story and the way u have written it so beautifully really commendable mimi hats off to you👏👏

the story well what can i say about that have never ever read such an amazing concept and never ever thought TR aise bhi ho sakte hai...gosh the whole ambience of mystery that was created at the time of reading was breathtaking...the TR conversations and each and every detailing was so engrossing and touched my heart...the TR scene was so sensuous,platonic and passionate and beautifully written...taarey's characterisation gosh commendable again couldn't have ever imagined taarey like this and the climax left me speechless and awestruck...the pain the emotions were very well portrayed...a feeling which can not be described in words

seriously mimi u r one of the most beautiful writers i have ever come across tumhe toh seriously movies mein try karna chahiye u r so damn talented

and ya the banner is amazingly done👏
that sense of mystery that mysterious aura is created by the banner itself great job mimi keep coming up with such master pieces
and the poetry adds to the perfection it creates a beautiful ayra around love u mimi for this🤗

Beautifully written. And very scary.

OH.MY.GOD!!! I am dreaming? Ya maine abhi abhi ek OUTTA THE WORLD OS padha? Gosh dii!! M seriously speechless!! Where do you get these superb and so so so different ideas from? How do you write so so so beautifully? Just how do you manage to make your works breathtaking? I had read kisses from hell and I had LOVED LOVED LOVED it!! And this is seriously seriously seriously the best work I have EVER read!! Gosh!! M still under the spell!! Jab woh part aaya na when Rey remembers that he killed a girl tan mujhe laga ki it was Taani whom he killed but then when Taani came mai confused ho gayi.. But after reading the description her father gave.. I WAS SURE IT WAS TAANI!! The ending was SUPERB!! LOVED IT!! Gosh! M still shivering!! IT WAS HIS HALUCINATION!! Gosh!!

Hey, I've read ur OS before as well, u r such a different writer, and ur writing skills are sooo good!!!! Seriously u r really ana amazing writer!! I've become ur fan

Mimi wow no words, Im blown away this was out of the world so different kinda scary but I totally love it. Rey is one dangerous guy a contract kiler, love Taarey conversation and how comfortable Rey was sharing his deep dark secret with her. He realizing Taani is the man daughter was shocking is she a ghost or a hallucination hmm love thr suspense ending.

i don't have word to explain how i'm feeling right row... plzzz become a professional writer and write books , i wll definetely be the first one in the que to buy ur books for sure... ur r simply amazing and plzzz keeping writing such outstanding os dear... this is my most favourite os till date on this forum... vry happpy to come across such a fantastic writer :))))))))))))))))