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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: patie

mimi take my bow dea...u write so wel ...dis ws beatiful...wnderful concept...one of d bst stry i hv eva read...hats off to u :-) keep writting pls :-D



really???? OMG!! thanks Patie thanks a lottt...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing but bit scary..
as your last story too on such a concept i think you liked to write on suspense,thriller,hallucination ghost story.
you are an amazing writer..
keep writing more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dh19

amazing but bit scary..
as your last story too on such a concept i think you liked to write on suspense,thriller,hallucination ghost story.
you are an amazing writer..
keep writing more.


thanks😊..

actually I'm fan of romantic stories.. i love rom-com, classic love n all kind of romantic stories..

but i dnt know y recently i m getting ideas of romantic story with a mystic touch..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh god that was heart wrenching!!!!
But ya u wrote superb!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: -mimi-



really???? OMG!! thanks Patie thanks a lottt...🤗

ya girl realy :-D u r too gud ..m in luv wid ur stries...itne ideas kaha se laate ho bhai lol :-P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my god!! Wait a sec... Did I really read this awesome piece of work right now?! Woah! This was... It was... M seriously short of words right now di but I can totally say that this was marvellous, awesome, amazing.. ANd the most beautiful thing I have ever read... I mean, Wow!! This was seriously amazing!!
I had read Kisses from Hell and I loved it.. And now when I saw a PM from you, I jumped on bed and opened the OS then n there.. The starting waala poetry was like.. Outta the world!! How can someone write so fantabulous-ly?! And then.. whwn I startedd reading the original thing... My! My! Can't express how good it was di.. It was fab!! In the beginning I thought Taani was the girl whom Rey had killed but then you showed Taani being there in the club.. I was confused! And then in the flashback, when 'the girl's' father told Rey about his daughter and what all she's wearing I was like, "I knew it! The girl IS Taani"!!! Gosh di! The thought, the idea, the story, your imagination, the way you write,.. Its all amazing!! Seriously!! I so so so love you for this!! And the end.. This was unexpected by me.. Totally!! And I love aise unexpected surprises... God di! I m in love with your writing skills and please tell me.. Please please please tell me, from where in the world do you get such unique n amazing ideas?! You are amazing di.. Simply awesome!! I love love love love you for "She" and "Kisses From Hell"!! And yeah! Not to forget the banner.. As soon as I saw it, I was like, "Wow!! This is gonna be seriously amazing!!!" Thank you thank you thak you so much for this di!! Do write more on TaaRey... Please!!! I am your fan now!!
PS: Please reply to this comment if possible! I'll be real glad!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: patie

ya girl realy :-D u r too gud ..m in luv wid ur stries...itne ideas kaha se laate ho bhai lolitne ideas kaha se laate ho bhai lolitne ideas kaha se laate ho bhai lol :-P


my answer is i listen lots of hindi and english songs😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
OMG!!! This was so well written!! I just can't believe how someone can be such a great writter???!
This os was amazing, and at the same time so sad!! Seriously i felt so bad for rey!!
Do continue writting more on taarey!!
I just purely loved it!! The sins he did then the hallucinarions (or her spirit coming) and the pure love!! Just amazing!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

Oh my god!! Wait a sec... Did I really read this awesome piece of work right now?! Woah! This was... It was... M seriously short of words right now di but I can totally say that this was marvellous, awesome, amazing.. ANd the most beautiful thing I have ever read... I mean, Wow!! This was seriously amazing!!

I had read Kisses from Hell and I loved it.. And now when I saw a PM from you, I jumped on bed and opened the OS then n there.. The starting waala poetry was like.. Outta the world!! How can someone write so fantabulous-ly?! And then.. whwn I startedd reading the original thing... My! My! Can't express how good it was di.. It was fab!! In the beginning I thought Taani was the girl whom Rey had killed but then you showed Taani being there in the club.. I was confused! And then in the flashback, when 'the girl's' father told Rey about his daughter and what all she's wearing I was like, "I knew it! The girl IS Taani"!!! Gosh di! The thought, the idea, the story, your imagination, the way you write,.. Its all amazing!! Seriously!! I so so so love you for this!! And the end.. This was unexpected by me.. Totally!! And I love aise unexpected surprises... God di! I m in love with your writing skills and please tell me.. Please please please tell me, from where in the world do you get such unique n amazing ideas?! You are amazing di.. Simply awesome!! I love love love love you for "She" and "Kisses From Hell"!! And yeah! Not to forget the banner.. As soon as I saw it, I was like, "Wow!! This is gonna be seriously amazing!!!" Thank you thank you thak you so much for this di!! Do write more on TaaRey... Please!!! I am your fan now!!
PS: Please reply to this comment if possible! I'll be real glad!!


Shreya.. I'm on cloud no#9 after reading your comment..

the poetry on the beginning i didn't write it.. it's lyrics of "MUskan Jhuti Hai from Talaash"

n thanks u liked mt banner..

from where in the world do you get such unique n amazing ideas?

my answer is from songs.. this story crossed my mind when i was listening Muskan Jhuti Hai..😳

ANd the most beautiful thing I have ever read...

now i'm on cloud no #99😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Shanae_Diamonds

OMG!!! This was so well written!! I just can't believe how someone can be such a great writter???!
This os was amazing, and at the same time so sad!! Seriously i felt so bad for rey!!
Do continue writting more on taarey!!

I just purely loved it!! The sins he did then the hallucinarions (or her spirit coming) and the pure love!! Just amazing!!


AW!!! Thank you.. thanks a lot... I'm really really happy u likes my OS.. thanks again..🤗

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