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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

AMAZING OS neets...

Loved the way twisted the real sequence..and gave us all the missing elements..

The way he found out about the secret behind her rudeness..

The way he made sure she is alright ...the breakfast..the inhaler ..the letter...

Everything was perfect..the kiss on the cheek was sweet...

Lovely OS...keep writing swthrt

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome Neeti...thnx for d PM

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LittleBitOfAlexis

@LilBitOfAlexis

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome OS loved swayam's photograph scene ...I wish it could happen in real And also the swayam's positive reaction on revealing Sharon's. asthma prob.do write more. 😊

Edited by swaron_pk - 12 years ago

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Silentreader95

@Silentreader95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Neeti wat are uplanning to do kill me kya ??it was too beautiful and sweet..reallly enjoyed re reading it 👏 palki ma'am should take ideas from u khash yeh hota d3 me

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