SwaRon OS : A Different Take On the Current Track

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Megha

@megsy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

beautifully written OS neeti!

this is the real swayam! he really does everything he does only for sharon...

hayeee...yeh ladka maar dalega! ☺️

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mahak_28

@mahak_28

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

extraordinarily awesumly wonderful...u have turned the track so well in a directiion which we want to see...awww so so gud...

wish tht track shapes up like this😊

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Awesome 😊

Swayam know Sharon so well

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

wow neeti... it is superb 😃

really loved it...😊

did'nt watched yesterday's episode ... but i wish i should have seen 😉

swayam is so caring... so sweet..

he is the perfect boyfrnd...🤗

this pic idea is urs na??? ..cute 😛

gr8... this asthma scene should be out soon 😳

he is bound to knw the truth 😎

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Superb os neeti...
Luvd it re!!:)
Beautifully written...

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Nicely done OneShot there. Made for a nice read.

I liked how you've maintained te essence of Swayam and Sharon throughout. Especially the part where you've portrayed Swayam as the "Sharon Encyclopedia". That's how he is! 😆
Oh well, I hope the day when the last part of your OneShot actually happens, on the show, comes soon.

Thank you for the PM.

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Neeti 🤗 after a long time, kaha the madam?

Well darling it is superb! I have told you na tu tho maha rani of OS, beautifully written, and haye swayam finding out is a treat to read. I loved the end potion, Gosh he knows her so well and he can find solutions for all her problms. Splendid yaar, the part where he says solutions should be found together is so sweet. I hope the swaron confession jaldi he mil jaye. Neets its a mindblowing OS and thanks so much...

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Awesome
Loved the starting.Sharon admiring sleeping swayam n then she mentally slapped herself .
That pic part was really cute.Hope we get something like this in show too.Sharon kissing swayam's pic hayee*dream come true*. :p n then swayam found out about sharon's asthma problem
The breakfast part was adorable
Ending was cute
Loved it