Manveer OS:Break Of The Dawn - Page 4

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

haila!!! aisa kya karne waali hain?? o teri kuch darwna to nai?? ya fir too much ahem ahem?? dekh agr MODS ne padh liya to teri to bajegi. be careful. giv update fast, cant wait to read ahed

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Wow what an OS Payel...ur a brilliant writer👏👏...Ur story and the yester years description actually made me imagine those days...😳...Great job...lookng eagerly to read the next part😛

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Comment Edited on Page 1 😃

So so sorry I forget to edit it

thanks for reminding me

Really sorry

Read Part I at Page 1 before this part

Part II

Tale of An Apsara

It was a lovely morning in the Himalayan kingdom of Devgarh. But this very lovely morning was ominous to some young soul. It was the first time an eighteen year old beauty step her feet outside her house, which she never did throughout her life, as she never needed to.

With a well ranked army man father and a beautiful caring mother Manyata was leading a very happy life. As a child, and a girl she was very introvert. She rarely talked, people barely knew about her. She was taught at home. Apart from her parents, the only person she believed was Senapati Aryan Rai, he was her like her brother. Actually he was no less her brother.

Then her father died at a war and mother committed suicide in grieving, leaving her alone. In frustration she stepped out of her house on that morning and sat beside a lake full of lotus. She was crying hard. Never in her life she cried that much. Suddenly a passerby commented, "Look an Apsara! Came out of lake of lotus!" She did not pay any heed at that, but soon more people gathered to see her. She did not get then why suddenly the whole kingdom started caring for her so much. When her most trusted brother Aryan Rai also left her in this wretched condition.

Then one day the king summoned her in front his council of wise people. Meanwhile she was proposed by almost every man of Devgarh and also quite a number of wealthy outsiders.

"Oh My God! No wonder an Apsara on earth indeed". All wise men nodded with the king. The mere girl did not understand she should be happy or sad at their comment. She was confused seeing so many important people's glances on her at once. At the very next moment the Rajpurohit commented, "You said right my king! She is an Apsara indeed. I mean nobody knew about her existence till now but suddenly she is seen beside a lake full of lotus!"

"I am Manyata Verma , daughter of your late Captain Madhusudan Verma, your highness." The shy girl answered bowing her head.

"We never heard about his daughter. Apsara please don't play trick!" the Rajpurohit chuckled.

" I am no apsara". The girl retorted being irritated.

"Yes you are lady!" A Wise man of city council answered, "As you have chosen to live among us, mortals- you cannot be a single man's possession. So, we beg you respected celestial, to bestow your bliss to all." A careful mischievous smile crossed the man's lips.

In an instant she understood what they all were trying to say. Immediately she bowed to the Rajpurohit's feet, thinking the man of religion will save a young girl's dharma, but all of her hope erased as he said, "Don't make me commit any sin celestial beauty!"

The wise man of council spoke again, " Manyata ji we are requesting you for the position of Devgarh's Kalyani janapad (head Courtesan), but as you are an Apsara of that heavenly lake; your wish will be king's final wish."

Though all sounded requesting but their lustful glances said, "Do it or die."

She heard a voice again, "Take your time lady. Think from your heart. Without your beauty this mortal world is nothing but a desert."

She rushed towards her home crying. Suddenly the place which she used to know as her home seemed like a graveyard. She felt herself like a dead person. For a last time she went to Aryan Rai. But there was no brotherly affection in him, it was only lust. She ran but while running she heard, "Run safely dear Manyata; I won't touch you now. But I promise to be your very first customer." She ran faster but soon she realized she could not escape. This kingdom is full of Aryan Rais, even the king who vows to protect his subjects with due respect before taking the throne, whom she learned to respect like her Gods, is also vying to take her at his bed. There is a completion between the men of powers who will unveil the Apsara's beauty first.

Again she came back at her graveyard home crying. She cried for a whole day and night. And at last she realized she too has died. Well, not physically! But the old innocent, introvert girl inside her was definitely dead. She took a mirror and looked at her own face properly for the first time in her life. The voice which came next was not from a poor wretched girl but from a celestial creature.

"I know king why you want me as your kalyani janapad! It's not only for my beauty but also for my beauty!" She laughed out loud.

"So many worthy suitor for a single girl! How can you do justice to all! poor king! If I marry one, the rest thousands become your foe. How will you fight it! So you chose me to make a celestial- ha ha a prostitute to please everyone." She laughed again.

"Well I am a celestial! Yes from now onwards I am an Apsara. Then I must be treated like an Apsara-a celestial beauty."

She broke the mirror in front of her, "Not everyone gets to see an Apsara. It is and will only my wish, my choice." She grinned.

The final day of decision came for Devgarh's newly found beauty. All those priests who wore the mask of Dharma, ran temples, become teachers, advise the head council of Devgarh- officially declared her an Apsara in front of the whole city. Then the time came for the final declaration of Devgarh's new Kalyani Janapad and the shy, introvert girl raised her voice in front of everyone for the first time in her life.

"Respected councilor of Devgarh, I am ready to take the responsibility of a Kalyani Janapad. But I have some conditions and sorry if I am harsh, but I will accept your approach only if my conditions are being fulfilled with proper value."

The wise men of city council frowned; no Kalyani Janapad has dared to talk like that before! Instantly they sensed danger. But it was too late; tale of her beauty was already spread across whole Aryavarta. If she rejects that position, whole Devgarh will drown in a massive attack.

So they had to bow as the Apsara's voice rang-

I will have my own palace as big and as beautiful as king's,

Every guest has to pay five hundred gold coins for spending one night with me

Inside my palace I will have my own guards and maids and my own law. No law of Devgarh will work inside my palace.

Devgar city council was okay with first two conditions but third one made them to think. What if they need to do any investigation inside her palace? She answered yes they can but she has to be informed first. They can investigate only after seven days she has been informed. The council has no other option but accept her conditions.

And she added, "Dear King and citizen of Devgarh, remember it very carefully, as an Apsara of heaven I am a swayamvu (self born) in this mortal world and so possess the right of causing Swechamrityu (self death). If any of my conditions are disregarded by any man of authority I can do whatever I want."

Immediately a magnificent palace was made at the centre of the city of Devgarh. Kings, princes and wealthy men from all over the country came to savor her divine beauty and made her richer. Soon she became one of the richest people of Aryavarta.

As she came back from her memory she found herself dressed in elegant blue attire. It covered most of her curves. He loved her beyond her body, she does not need to flaunt her curves to him again.

How much times passed while recollecting her pasts, she could not remember. Suddenly it occurred to her mind that her man is waiting impatiently for her! But when looked at the mirror she found that she forgot to put any make up. When hurried to put it on her face she stopped, "What is the need of make up in front of the man who has already unveiled her soul". Her mirror reflection smiled at her.

As king Udayveer entered the luxurious bedroom of lady Manyata's he saw a lotus on his own statue. Smiling he took it from there, it still bears the scent of her hair. He kept it with him. Then his eyes fell on an erotic sculpture. A couple is in the position of union, entwining their legs. The man's face showed complete submission, the lady's face glowed with the intensity of his love. Both the lovers holding each other's passionately with desire. But their sacred love dominated all of their emotions. He touched the fine piece of art, but his mind went back few moments ago. It reminded him more about her. Closing his eyes, keeping it bare open he saw her face, her eyes, her lips, her night like hair. Suddenly he felt as if she is everywhere.

"A sculptor from Madhya des has made it for me!" He looked back hearing her voice again. Her natural beauty made him believe she could not be from this world.

"I beg your apology again, to make you wait again your Highness".

He understood she is really present in front of him now.

"No need to apologize my lady!" He chuckled, "I see you have quite a collection of good books."

"It's the habit I carry from my early life. As a child I was quite a reader. I still read for my pleasure." She smiled a genuine smile.

"Hmm impressive!" The king smiled back.

"If you want to check my library your Highness, I must insist you to come again and again. None can finish the collection within a night." Though she tried to hide her playful smile he noticed it immediately.

"So you want me to come again and again huh!" He smirked playfully.

"How can I deny It will be my pleasure your Majesty!" She lowered her eyes to hide her smile.

He held her close and solemnly he said, "My lady! The pleasure will all be mine. I can risk my life every day to spend a night with you!"

She looked at his eyes and sighed for doing so, it burned her so severely, she doesn't know if her eyes could fell on any other man's face again. She kissed him; he dragged all the sweetness of her lips again! But the passion of the kiss was too much. Immediately he carried her to the bed.

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( some parts inspired from the tale of Amropali of Vinaypitak)

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Panchaali/Payel

Originally posted by: panchaali

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Originally posted by: ...navina...

BTW ... maine edit kar diya😃.