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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

my dear payel, its beyoind words
i doubt or rather i confess the undeniable truth that its high time that u turn it into a ff or otherwise some of us will die out of it

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Shahista

@Shahi01

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

👏👏 beautiful. Very well written and superbly picturised. I love stories of history, and the way u have described the characters, their emotions, manyata's beauty... Made visualisation very easy. The poems included also were so epic.. and described the moment related 2 brilliantly. U really are a wonderful writer and I can definitely see this OS being a ff, u should consider it... it will be an epic one. thoroughly enjoyed paayal. muuuaah. thanks 4 pm.

Continue sooon.

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

i luv historical stories.from u its d 3rd historical story.rly loved it.Manyata as an apsara...a prostitute.plz reveal her story.plz update soon.cant wait

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer
my dear payel, its beyoind words
i doubt or rather i confess the undeniable truth that its high time that u turn it into a ff or otherwise some of us will die out of it

Dear Sanjana It is a four part OS..it is not finishing here and after reading all of these parts you will understand that it is best as an OS 😊

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Dae_drmer
amazingly written👏
jaynandini maid...🤣 good one...
i lyked it

Pari you liked only Jainandini being a maid thing!!

Throughout the whole Manveer romance 😲

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
i luv historical stories.from u its d 3rd historical story.rly loved it.Manyata as an apsara...a prostitute.plz reveal her story.plz update soon.cant wait

Thank you Jasmine..you always give me nice comments 😊

I'll try to update soon 😊

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Shahista01
👏👏 beautiful. Very well written and superbly picturised. I love stories of history, and the way u have described the characters, their emotions, manyata's beauty... Made visualisation very easy. The poems included also were so epic.. and described the moment related 2 brilliantly. U really are a wonderful writer and I can definitely see this OS being a ff, u should consider it... it will be an epic one. thoroughly enjoyed paayal. muuuaah. thanks 4 pm.
Continue sooon.

Dear Thank you for this wonderful comment but this will remain an OS only...

But It will be a big OS-As promised it will be a four part OS. 😊

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

your writing is so alluring and magnificent that you just drown into the story 😳😳, amazingly written payel 👏👏, It was beautiful, I have a feeling this is going to have tragic end, but seriously reading the story is worth whatever end you have planned 😳. thanks fro the PM payel, loved reading it 😊

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Hi Di , comment edited on page1😊. Thanks.

(Oh & don't fall off to sleep while reading it)

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: chitra_rao
your writing is so alluring and magnificent that you just drown into the story 😳😳, amazingly written payel 👏👏, It was beautiful, I have a feeling this is going to have tragic end, but seriously reading the story is worth whatever end you have planned 😳. thanks fro the PM payel, loved reading it 😊

Thankz for this awesome comment dear 😊

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