Manveer OS:Break Of The Dawn - Page 2

my dear payel, its beyoind words
i doubt or rather i confess the undeniable truth that its high time that u turn it into a ff or otherwise some of us will die out of it

👏👏 beautiful. Very well written and superbly picturised. I love stories of history, and the way u have described the characters, their emotions, manyata's beauty... Made visualisation very easy. The poems included also were so epic.. and described the moment related 2 brilliantly. U really are a wonderful writer and I can definitely see this OS being a ff, u should consider it... it will be an epic one. thoroughly enjoyed paayal. muuuaah. thanks 4 pm.

i luv historical stories.from u its d 3rd historical story.rly loved it.Manyata as an apsara...a prostitute.plz reveal her story.plz update soon.cant wait

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

my dear payel, its beyoind words
i doubt or rather i confess the undeniable truth that its high time that u turn it into a ff or otherwise some of us will die out of it

Originally posted by: Dae_drmer

amazingly written👏

jaynandini maid...🤣 good one...

i lyked it

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

i luv historical stories.from u its d 3rd historical story.rly loved it.Manyata as an apsara...a prostitute.plz reveal her story.plz update soon.cant wait

Originally posted by: Shahista01

👏👏 beautiful. Very well written and superbly picturised. I love stories of history, and the way u have described the characters, their emotions, manyata's beauty... Made visualisation very easy. The poems included also were so epic.. and described the moment related 2 brilliantly. U really are a wonderful writer and I can definitely see this OS being a ff, u should consider it... it will be an epic one. thoroughly enjoyed paayal. muuuaah. thanks 4 pm.

Continue sooon.

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

your writing is so alluring and magnificent that you just drown into the story 😳😳, amazingly written payel 👏👏, It was beautiful, I have a feeling this is going to have tragic end, but seriously reading the story is worth whatever end you have planned 😳. thanks fro the PM payel, loved reading it 😊