Manveer OS:Break Of The Dawn - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
OMG...payel di this OS is awsomeee...hats of one more master piece by a gr8 writter...
I m speechless have no word to discribe ur update both the parts were awsomee...mindblowing...
I really like ur writting ur stories are always different...and i m a big pankha(fan) of ur FF library princess...the best OS i have ever read...
Lolzzz...J a maid 🤣
Awww...poor manyata
i can fell her pain this world is always crule with a women how they convert sweet inocent girl in to a prostitute...its really sad i felt like crying gosh...her past was too emotinole...all men are dog and her soo...called brother urghhh...such a jerk
hope uday will get her out of this mess...cnt wait to read more...thanx for the beautifull update PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Poor manyata.she lost her parents.Circumstance made her a rich beauty who had 2 please every1 with her beauty.She longs 4 uday.Their romance was burning with passion

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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Awesome Update
M's tale was great
the story of how she turned from an innocent girl
to a kalyani janapad ...

Aryan Rai😡 the man she thought of as a brother
even lusted after her !

Do cont soon
thanks for de PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Superb, brilliantly written. U gave given an insight into M's painful past that has led 2 her current position and status. Truely sad and dispeakable 2 know the frame of mind of men... in those days even her so called brother... filled with lust... but glad that as a women she has turned that downfall to her advantage with her terms and rules... but even then feel a part of her is empty and lacks the vitality and love more importantly hope for a better life... and peace of her soul and know she will find that in Udayveer... Loved it payel. continue sooon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
😊awsm chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Awesome Update

M's tale was great
the story of how she turned from an innocent girl
to a kalyani janapad ...

Aryan Rai😡 the man she thought of as a brother
even lusted after her !

Do cont soon
thanks for de PM


Aryan is nothing but an animal 😡

I'll update next part soon

Thankz for this awesome comment 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

OMG...payel di this OS is awsomeee...hats of one more master piece by a gr8 writter...
I m speechless have no word to discribe ur update both the parts were awsomee...mindblowing...
I really like ur writting ur stories are always different...and i m a big pankha(fan) of ur FF library princess...the best OS i have ever read...
Lolzzz...J a maid 🤣
Awww...poor manyata
i can fell her pain this world is always crule with a women how they convert sweet inocent girl in to a prostitute...its really sad i felt like crying gosh...her past was too emotinole...all men are dog and her soo...called brother urghhh...such a jerk
hope uday will get her out of this mess...cnt wait to read more...thanx for the beautifull update PM.


Thankzzz dear hugs for this awesome comment

I can write only for these awesome comments and constant encouragement from you guyz 😊

Thankz a lot fro reading
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Poor manyata.she lost her parents.Circumstance made her a rich beauty who had 2 please every1 with her beauty.She longs 4 uday.Their romance was burning with passion


yes it is

She got what she awaited for long 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Shahista01

Superb, brilliantly written. U gave given an insight into M's painful past that has led 2 her current position and status. Truely sad and dispeakable 2 know the frame of mind of men... in those days even her so called brother... filled with lust... but glad that as a women she has turned that downfall to her advantage with her terms and rules... but even then feel a part of her is empty and lacks the vitality and love more importantly hope for a better life... and peace of her soul and know she will find that in Udayveer... Loved it payel. continue sooon.


Thankzzz Shahi...I'll continue soon 😊

Thankz again for this awesome comment 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
hi
i did read the update the day you posted
but did not get time to comment
man!! this is really adult stuff
but it was totally different from other stories and it is the plus point of this story
but why did you not post this thread in dek forum
i could really imagine manyata as a apsara whose beaty is well known and using it to her advantage
uday taking the riskk to see manyata
and manyata falling for uday
the second update where you explained manyata's past was really touching
the way people looked at her with lust and how they wanted her to be a prostitute was really bad
hated aryan. he is a bas**d
really these updates are hot
continue soon and thanks for the pm

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