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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved their intimate Moment...

Love the way Arnav is behaving..

Love their bond

Love the way you express their feelings..

Love your writing..

Love this story..

Loved the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahaha arnav can't seem to keep his hands off of her :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
I like the explanation given about Khushi's feeling in the first paragraph...cz I was thinking about how come a girl from such background and keeping in mind that it was her first experience being touched so intimately n was not reacting ...just not digestible...but it seems that it came to u as an afterthought...Great...😊...cz besides the hot stuff the sane readers want to c logic as well...

Hope u take my comment positively...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update, was simply splendid! it was so sweet and so romantic. it was very detailed and very beautifully written! a big congrats for this update, it was an artwork:)

n super liked the fact that they had some time for themselves even if it was stolen! the chemistry between them is just sizzling! im sure at the end of their cozy time, the room was full of steam! lol

arnav without any doubt wants khushi more than just on a physical level, i duno if that is love what he feels for them but wat im sure that he does care deeply for her and anything related to her matters to him!shayad yehi to pyaar hain!

wish i had a wardrobe like anjali and payal for my wedding, the choice of the kehengas and sarees were really beautiful! am sure both brides will rock in the clothes!

lol anajali, its not su who is to be blamed about princess gupta clothes being so sexy but its her own brother! its nice to see that arnav wants khushi to be dressed in his choice and style for the weddings!

felt really bad for khushi in the end, she is going to lose the house which has been home for such a long time, nikunja holds so many wonderful memories of her childhood with her other siblings. she has never known any other home apart from this one! n it must be hurting that the person who knows how she really feels about all this selling thing, is the one putting the helping hand to find its new owner!

but the precap got me a little worried and scared at the same time, i really dunt want khushi to misunderstand arnav or his intentions towards her.

really really really excited and impatient for the next update. plz make it sooon

n thx loads, loads n loads for putting my name in ur note, that really touch my heart! u r so sweet:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!
I'm sooo extremely glad to have logged into IF to come to know that there is another update of "Something About You". It was only I think ... last night or was it this morning ... not quite sure ... but anyway, my point being is that I was thinking about the next update of this ... how amazingly the story has progressed.
Awesome!
👏👏👏
Khushi's natural immediate reaction is pretty normal. If such a word exists. What I mean to say is that she's never had anyone look at her body, breasts in particular like it has been mentioned ... minus her sister and mother ... so she's bound to feel a little ... hmmm ... hesitant. The feelings that have been aroused, awakened within her are new ... tingly. Arnav it seems either unconsciously, consciously or a mixture of both then started his ministrations on Khushi's lips in order to make her feel relaxed, comfortable. If he did so with those intentions, well I gotta give it to him ... freakin' sweeet! 😳😳
Again, throughout the update, every part is written-well. Especially the initimacy shared between the two sexy people 😉
One of my many favourite parts of this chapter was this statement here ... >>>
"... he pressed his hardness against her softness & said in a matter-of-fact voice, "Everyone would know looking at that, what I've been doing."
That was sooo incredibly blunt! Loved ittt! More of this pleaseee!!! 😆😆😆 I can just imagine Khushi's facial expressions here ... bless her 😳 🤣 😳 🤣 😳 I can't help but continue to admire Arnav's honest anwers and explanations when he is conversing with Khushi. Yes at times she is left feeling flushed, hot, tingly all over because of his replies to her queries, questions ... but hey! >>> The man is nothing if not honest! Straight forward. No faffing about!
Khushi's reactions to what Arnav said above was just ... sooo surprising and sooo ... her, sooo Khushi!!! 😛
Marvellous!
She goes onto tease the poor man. Girls got gutsss!!! Damn! Another amazing quality about Khushi.
RED! ... >>> I absolutely adore it when he calls her by this name! Beautiful! So perfect. It totally suits her! 😃
Another favourite one liner for me ...
"Yes, it can be very messy. But it is the real deal, Red!"
I'm pleasantly surprised that Arnav thought to tell Khushi first about having to leave. The way he went about it, well ... its like he's been doing it for a good while. If only ...
He's beginning to read Khushi pretty well. Whether that continues to be a positive is yet to be seen ... but as of now it is. I say this because now that he can clearly see her facial expressions and the meaning behind them, he knows she doesn't want him to leave ... not sooo soon. They didn't get to spend much time together at all. Well apart from the kisses, touches, grinding ... woah there! 😆 I understand her point of view. Its only natural to feel the way she is doing so right about now.
As for their home having been sold this fast ... well for a couple to have been found that are interested to buy it this quick ... ofcourse it'll be a shock to Khushi. Don't blame her in the slightest!
Looking forward to the next part. As always 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!
im soo in love with this!;))
<3...arnav is superb;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
its good that your words are not to be taken seriously enough to panick
i love your story but more thn that i love ur writing so for me its important that u continue writing either this ff or a new ff on arshi but continue writting none the less.
hot really hot actually red hot was the start
blouses cut it to half and almost all dresses having an element of red ohhh my what love makes u do
khushi is right at her place that arnav should have informed her but i feel as if khushi has herself not completely accepted the sale of nikunja although she had given a green signal for it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update...incredibly passionate ...very well written ...loved it...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous update.

thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor Khushi feeling so betrayed by Arnav

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