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Posted: 12 years ago
This was too hot to handle...😳 The progress in their relationship is very well written...and various emotions are so well captured...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ah...Loved the update farah...🤗
The way he came and tld oly her abt him going was Aesome😳😳
So Arnav never said anything abt the house to khushi...Oh oh...no Mu pls...
Loved the precap😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was brilliant everyday its getting better n better
loved every bit of it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsum update. D precap was amazing. Arnav love khushi but he's no able 2 knw his own feeling.
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Posted: 12 years ago

A wonderful update, the right mix of chemistry between the two is undeniable and you express it so well, shame the CVs could not portray this on the show. I always imagined and still do imagine him to be a very sensual lover.. Khushi may be naive and innocent now but once Arnav ropes her in she will be a match to his needs.. if not more demanding.

So Arnav has redesigned her outfits and no one knows yet it was him... The precap brings on another feisty encounter between the two of them, I really hope that Arnav realizes his love for her and how much Nikunj means to her and buys it for her perhaps as a wedding gift from him to her ;-)...

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Posted: 12 years ago
love the updates!ooh interesting precap!those alterations to Khushi's dress
was Arnav's doing right?😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read last 2 updates in one go...Awesome updates...Hot...
Loved Arnav's naughtiness while holding her hand at the front door...Absolutely loved their stolen moments...😊
But most of all I loved the way u have penned Arnav's and Khushi's feelings when he had to leave for a meeting...It was almost like feeling khushi's feelings urself...Amazing...Their longing for each other...the reassurance they need...the pull they feel...the tumult of emotions...superb...
Eagerly waiting for the next update even more so after reading the precap...Khushi is right in feeling betrayed a bit...he could have at least hinted his participation in the process of getting Nikunja sold...Its her home for god's sake where she grew up with her siblings...
But why do I get the feeling that Arnav is buying Nikunj himself knowing its value for Khushi...Hope I'm right...
Plz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

aweee so sweet n lovely i like it

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update... Arnav has added so much red to her dress... Khushi is very sentimental abt Nikunja it seems, and Arnav's hand in selling it and not revealing it miffed her. I have a doubt whether Arnav itself is buying Nikunja or not ????/
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a passionate Arnav! Khushi might be outgoing and smart but when it comes to the physicality of the relation she is all too naive. Loved how you wrote about Khushi's initial mental reluctance to Arnav's physically amorous advances.
Despite being inexperienced,it is quite astonishing to find how she responded to Arnav's all-knowing passionate carnal attack!
Lines which Cracked me up-
1."Khushi finally found her mouth free to talk,she was just about to complain about feeling very funny in very unusual parts of her body."- Really!
2."You blush like clockwork."- Wow man! What a dialogue!
3. This is the funniest one-"Everyone would know looking at that,what I've been doing"- Seriously, Arnav has a very wicked sense of Humour..
.. And lo! Again he called her Red!
.. Seemed like Arnav couldn't keep his hands and lips off of her!
..Then came the sweetest part of the update-how Arnav was literally and figuratively wandering in Khushi's world. It shows that not only you have a way with words but also how deeply you think. Full on creativity,buddy-hats off to you!
It was so sweet of him to wish- seeing Khushi grow from Baby Gupta to real-pain-in-the-ass Princess Gupta!
.. And as always Aman to the rescue! lol!
Then comes the part where Arnav had to leave. Here ASR seemed to be the alter-ego of Arnav or the very different other side of the coin. Surely, there is a vast chasm of a difference between the two facets of the same man which can be profoundly felt by Khushi.. At this point they seemed to be talking more with the eyes than their tongues.. Then Arnav said to Khushi "Don't be upset..",but it felt like he was the one being more upset!!
.. Poor Anjali doesn't know Susie is not to be blamed here but it is her own romantically wicked brother who was behind the sudden blue-to-red and half-cut blouses! Imagine the shock when she and Khushi would find out!!
.. You know I think I like Anjali but the singular thing which irritates me about her is- she is somehow involved in the selling of Nikunja..
.. And I'm not like Arnav,so I would gladly like to express in words that..
I Loved The Update!

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