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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#311

The precap says that tension is brewing up.
Oh My God! Khushi's remarks are so, so scathing and point-blank! From Khushi's POV,it is quite justified to feel betrayed.
In the matter of Nikunja, Arnav fails to be Khushi's Arnav-ji,who would understand her feelings.. Rather he becomes Rohan's friend or Anjali's Chhote.
When will Arnav have a little bit of empathy and be thoughtful enough to not to hurt Khushi by his actions?
Hopefully, Khushi did knock some sense into Arnav's pretty head (with gorgeous hair!!).
P.s.- Why do I feel that the intricate beautification of Arnav's facial features(for eg. his sinfully smooth lips,etc.) is a direct result of you being Barun's phangurl?!!

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#312

OMG OMG OMG OMG
YOU MENTIONED ME IN YOUR DEDICATING THING
IM EXCITED AND GRATEFUL
HENCE THE CAPITALS

AND THE UPDATE
UFFF
IM NOT JOKING BUT TRUST ME I FELT LIKE FUNNY ALL OVER MY BODY
I DIDNT THINK YOU WOULD DESCRIBE THEIR PHYSICAL RELATIONSHIP THAT OF AN EXTENT AND I AM SOO BLOODY GLAD THAT YOU DID OR ELSE:(
But anyway, im kind of calm now...
I was just wondering if you could write in your update about how arnav could be angry with khushi for not having enough time with him and stuff...
And GUESS WHAT...
That was already included in there...
And when i was reading to that part of the story from arnavs point of view i felt frustrated too and from khushis point i just wanted to go right up and crush him to me tight...
And another thing...
Loved it the way khushi accused him about being only interested in, you know... Yeah that...
And she actually said the word ...
Lol
And Arnav!!!!! Hilarious... Even when he was getting accused, he was thinking about how she felt and looked...
Ye wala Arnav to change hi nahi hoga..:)

Please im still begging for a surprise update...
Pleasepkeaseplease...
Eagerly waiting for one...
Edited...
This is my 1000th post...

Edited by Chotteskhushi19 - 12 years ago

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subiscs

@subiscs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Farah i loved it !!!! Best part is the characters r jus super strong..being themselves at all times...i so loved the precap...arnav and khushi without fighting or arguing s so not them...😊 Waiting to see what next!!!!

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#314

Even when they are making out Arnav doesn't lose hold of his anger and Khushi of her light-hearted nature.Even in the precap, Khushi is affected by him acutely yet wants to scold him about keeping her in the dark about Nikunja, and Arnav is worried for her yet can't help the desire he feels for her. You are simply brilliant as an author.

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luckygal99

@luckygal99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#315

uh oh...another argument...hopefully Arnav will buy Nikunja for her and it will stay in the family

very well written chapter...keep going

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

OMG!.. Its getting li'll hot in here;).. Anywys as usual luvd d update.. N thnks god u are'nt wrapping up anytym soon *phewww* i soo luv dis ff.. Can't bear not reading it .. Pls continue..
Cuming back to d update..:
so khushi now realises dat she is playing wid fire;).. Poor arnav though.. Wud be interesting how dey wud meet?.. Hindi mvie style? 'Raat ko aaunga tujhe le jaunga?.'.
:D
or ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA style.. ? Direct to her room?..
Feelin xtremely badd for khushi..'nikunja' to be sold..:(
she wud rlly be upset..
Waiting for update..

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#317

Khushi's happiness does not last long

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#318

Thank you for the dedication...love the acknowledgement of readers comments!!!!

Also loved this zinger of a line..." I am not someone who calls her creation her baby & then kills the baby off when she gets too bored with it…".

Now for comments on this update...with the unashamed admission that I am an ASR fan girl.

You have no idea how eagerly I await your updates these days...story is at the most exciting stage. Sophisticated man of the world meets fiesty but innocent girl...I hope they do get time to actually see each other and spend some 'quality time' together rather than just have furtive moments in the wedding ceremonies. ASR is not exactly a teenager to sneak in a kiss here and there as you so rightly noted.

Now i will have to say something harsh about Khushi.who so magnamoniously offered to her family to sell her home...so now they are doing so...and Arnav helped...her anger in the precap at Arnav is totally NOT justifiable. If it is happening too fast, she should blame her percious family, not ASR!!!!!

Before she made her grand speech to her family...to suck up to them ...to show how grateful she is and to show how much she loves them...it's not like she discussed with ASR, not like she had shared her pain with him...so how the heck would he even know where she stands on issue. It's not like she has put him before her precious family. Why does she think in the little time they had together...where she again was accusing him of not being interested in her anymore, would he remember to talk about a realtor transaction...what the?

Loving this story...getting so involved into it!!!!! Look forward to more.

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#319

😊

Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: Chotteskhushi19
OMG OMG OMG OMG
YOU MENTIONED ME IN YOUR DEDICATING THING
IM EXCITED AND GRATEFUL
HENCE THE CAPITALS

AND THE UPDATE
UFFF
IM NOT JOKING BUT TRUST ME I FELT LIKE FUNNY ALL OVER MY BODY
I DIDNT THINK YOU WOULD DESCRIBE THEIR PHYSICAL RELATIONSHIP THAT OF AN EXTENT AND I AM SOO BLOODY GLAD THAT YOU DID OR ELSE:(
But anyway, im kind of calm now...
I was just wondering if you could write in your update about how arnav could be angry with khushi for not having enough time with him and stuff...
And GUESS WHAT...
That was already included in there...
And when i was reading to that part of the story from arnavs point of view i felt frustrated too and from khushis point i just wanted to go right up and crush him to me tight...
And another thing...
Loved it the way khushi accused him about being only interested in, you know... Yeah that...
And she actually said the word ...
Lol
And Arnav!!!!! Hilarious... Even when he was getting accused, he was thinking about how she felt and looked...
Ye wala Arnav to change hi nahi hoga..:)

Please im still begging for a surprise update...
Pleasepkeaseplease...
Eagerly waiting for one...
Edited...
This is my 1000th post...