||~Something About You~||#5 *COMPLETED* - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!

How had I missed such a lovely story?!
I am really sorry to have missed it so far. But you know the silver lining is I got to read it a one go and it had me enthralled!
You are one heck of a writer lady who had me pegged to my PC whole night as I just didn't want to leave it half way!
Your lucid writing skill is admirable.
Another point I feel the need to mention is nowhere have you lingered unnecessarily!
I never had the feeling to skip even a word though knowing what comes next!
Your talent for precise and smooth narration along with the in depth thought of the characters and especially Arnav -Kushi characters is clearly evident.
In one of the chapers loved the way you showed how Garima doesn't want Anjali as her d-i-l coz of her limp. That's what most mothers of boys do!
But how will she accept if it comes to Khushi slandering?

You must be wondering who this nut is to ask you whether you could pm the updates so late in the series. I have sent a buddy request. Hope you'll be able to include me in your list! It would be highly appreciated dear!

Looking for your next update.
Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm sorry it just slipped off my mind and I forgot to mention that-
The collection of colourful clothes were..
A-w-e-s-o-m-e.
.. Pure Visual Treat!
Honestly speaking, I was pretty much tempted to go for a Retail Therapy to calm my nerves..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww thank you for including my name in the dedicating part...

Love the romantic bits between Arshi, The clothes were so beautiful!!

The precap just made me go 😲

LOVE IT! Both are going mad and lets see who wins 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveARR



How is it always you come first di?😡

I mean c'mon let others too nah...😉😆

Farah this is definitely not fair😕

Well better luck me for other and me next time😳😃😛




Ha ha life is never fair :p

I don't know why but I need the first res at SAY

It seems like my birthright :p

Ps even if I am not online I always res first magically ;)

Samjhi :*

Hugs baby
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. Thanx. Story developing very well. There is sumthng about wedding romances, na?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SamiyaIPKKND



Ha ha life is never fair :p

I don't know why but I need the first res at SAY

It seems like my birthright :p

Ps even if I am not online I always res first magically ;)

Samjhi :*

Hugs baby


Ok I wish I had the magic too..

Hugs to you too di🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SamiyaIPKKND



Ha ha life is never fair :p

I don't know why but I need the first res at SAY

It seems like my birthright :p

Ps even if I am not online I always res first magically ;)

Samjhi :*

Hugs baby


Such an adorable show-off my Sami is!❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
A chapter that started off with romance and longing but ended with a raging Khushi! Arshi scenes were nicely written, Khushi's limited knowledge and Arnav's actions and words were very nicely written. The whole scene where he is trying to tell her he is leaving for a meeting, that was so sweet and the very fact he was feeling very bad about not been able to hold her when ever he wants shows how strong his feelings are for her and he himself concluded also that unlike any other girls he has been with he wants to know about her more😊 Khushi's costumes been "slaughtered" that was hilarious and Arnav doesn't give up when he puts his mind in to something, a true businessman indeed😉 now the precap eager to see how things will go about from here its getting really interesting!
Edited by foesb - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all 41 parts in one go. Loved it totally. You are an awesome writer. Please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
The best part about not knowing the opening of tne new thread is that you get to read multiple updates together :D

Just while everything looked happy and fun, Khushi hit a sore spot :/

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