Dekha Ek Khwaab - Their Dream Continues -BK 2-UPDATED Chap 35 - Pg 138 - Page 66

Originally posted by: Shahista01

THANK YOU ZAINUB... 😉

Originally posted by: anjuroopak

😆 yipee let us have party to
night.we r getting triple update. LOL.. 😆

hai shahi... HEY ANJU...
update was very emotional shahi. I KNOW DEAR IT HARD TO BE
well beautifully written very emotional update. THANK YOU ... A NECESSARY CHAPTER

now unnathi knows everything
about manyata.now she knows
y manyata left uday.even if she
know everything she cannot tell
to her dada.poor girl.

YES UNFORTUNATELY ... BOUND MY LOYALTY.. TO DADISAAB

manyata giving birth to stillborn
was very emotional.i literally cried.
even iam a mother shahi.i know wat it feels wen a child is born.den
here manyata taking still born in her hand and having her last luk.
nooo.

YES THAT WAS NOT EASY TO WRITE AND LIKE YOU SAY FROM YOU BEING A MOTHER.. IT CANT BE EASY TO EXPERIENCE THAT PAIN AND EVEN WORSE KNOWING YOU CAN NEVR CONCEIVE AGAIN

unnathi wid help of jagat & karan going to trace manyata.ie a good
news.if she is found may b udays
engmt stops and have a scope for
manveer union

MMM well that i cant say, remember there is a condition set by the tantric vidya asam

which explains why ds is leaving everything to uday... they are now sacrificing...

devgarh merged wid jaigarh.daadi
saab d perfect ruler gave devgarh
in hands of another perfect ruler.
she knows devgarh is safe on his hands

yes devghar is the hands of the best rulers...

felt sad for komal.poor mother.her
two children away from her.

yes unfortuantely each and every character is intertwined by loyalty and their domain for being a royal

all in all chappy was amazing and
very emotional.loved every bit of
it.ur r an expert in writg emotional
scenes and today i learned abt a
new disease also.i google search
to know more abt it.

continue soon dear.

thank you for such a lovely comment and kind words.. means alot to me. and glad you learnt something new about lupus... 😉

😃 anju

😆😆loved possessive uday so much.got to see

him in dat avtaaar after along time.😆😆

i loved udays dialiog most.veryimpressive .👏👏👏

loved it.

😳😳manveer dance was amazing and beautiifull.😳😳

i can see it.☺️woow shahi...👏👏👏

😳😳😳adithya veer singh. nice name.manveer

son now have a hope for manveer reunion.

hope that will happen soon.😊😊😊

cant wait.try to update soon. waiting eagerly for ur next

update.

COMMENT EDITED ON PAGE 86 FOR CHAP 28

OMG SHA.. I was in manveer heaven. Well more like udayveer heaven. WOOOH he was back allright and with vengeance.. do you have any idea how many times I read this update?????? Amazing and jesus can you write love scenes so well' He is so hot and oh god you have no idea what kinds of thoughts you put in my head. Brilliant, supafantaboulous, mindblowing. Not just QUEEN OF EMOTIONS, undoubtedly QUEEN OF ROMANCE AND PASSION. Really I was blushing like you cant believe and my cheeks were heating up so I can only imagine the effect he was having on M. The more I read about yuvraj udayveer, the more I want him for myself.

I Love this line.. ' Princess I want you, now, here'

And this one..

'You wanted to play right' so game on'

And the teasing he does so well, shame m is also tired, her demanding husband always wants to play..

The way you portray M and U's thoughts is brilliant I must say. I personally love this part:

' OH TERI HE IS RIGHT I AM SO DEAD WHEN I GET OUT, NO RELAX MANYATA JUST TAKE A NICE LONG SHOWER AND HOPEFULLY HE WILL BE GONE TO HIS MEETING WHEN YOU GET OUT'

She stuck her tongue out at him as if he could see her MR INVENTOR, MY FOOT

'I heard that and stop sticking out your tongue at me'.'

Her eyes widened as she looked around for camera's

'Relax princess and enjoy your shower, stop looking around there are no camera's'

How does he do that? He reads my mind, invades my thoughts' She blew her fringe of her eyes and sighed. Oh well atleast he cant get in here now, that must be annoying him so badly' she smiled triumphantly placing the key on the washbasin

That was so well written and I could picture that so well. And U' s thoughts and viewpoint of her

He loved getting that reaction from her, it added to her childlike innocence that he so badly wanted to rip right now, he marveled at her breathtaking body that left him wanting, yearning, needing'. This women will never know just how beautiful she is, and she is all mine

And as for the actual getting it on.. I mean love making ' BLUSH LIKE YOU CANT IMAGINE. It was truly and amazingly supafantaboulously written.

Infact this whole update was out of this world for me.. I enjoyed it immensely and once again marveled at your talent.

I Know its short thats because words fail me... hope this sums it up

THANK YOU SHA... FOR THE SUPA FANTABLOUS UPDATE

SHA… How do you do this? Seriously unbelievable and supa fantabolous. You know after reading each update I am left speechless. Triple update in one brilliant story and each update had me hooked. You are truly the Queen of Romance, Queen of Emotions.. i honestly feel from your depth of writing and level. There is nothing i can say to explain how brilliant it is.

Originally posted by: huma12.

Awsssmmm shahhh love it tooo the core update soonnn

Originally posted by: ricna

UNRES YOU UPDATED😆

OMG SHA so you finally updated.. and that too a triple update. Do you have any idea how happy I am' but you forgot to pm. Anyways you are forgiven for giving us such a treat. Truly you are the queen of emotions.. 😆 I am so glad to read know how happy you are.. from this update.. no sorry i am only sending out pm's today... wow queen of emotions lol i wont go that far but that thanks for the compliment ricna

Chapter 28

Undoubtedly the most touching and heart rendering update. The emotion and feel in this update was superb. Jesus can you write girl.. your talent should really be recognized. What a way of expressing words and feelings. I could feel and relate to every thing in this chapter. Finally the family know, even though I suspected manyata's predicament you cleared all confusion and uncertainty. I feel as a writer if your readers can visualise what you write, then you job is done, so i am very glad you could relate to it... lol i know oncei get started with writing its quite hard to stop...😆 but work permits me.

Poor M, that was horrific what she went through. Lupus?? Something new I learnt, I cant even imagine what she must have felt holding her dead baby in her arms, her perfect life came crumbling down when she fell ill and to keep it away from her family. That could not have been easy but she was strong to have to sacrifice her life for the betterment of her people and husband. How difficult is it to put up a brave front and behave normally when inside you are dying and in grief. Makes sense why she was rude and kept pushing uday back. She couldn't risk him or anyone else knowing her condition and her not being able to give jaighar the heir. Truly tragic and once again you did total justice in making us feel that pain. yes i suppose thats what makes life so uncertain.. nothing is as perfect as it may look. manyata's illness became the turning point in the story.. it was not easy to write that but i felt itw as necessary for the story. You are right i made manyata very strong in this story well in all my ff's, i dont like women meek and undermined. We are strong and bold and can face up to anything no matter how much it hurts

Unnathi after knowing the truth cant tell her brother. Its true what ds said 'the life of a royal is never your own' I like unnathi, even in the serial, she was one strong character and I am glad you kept that in tact. It was heart breaking for komal to miss her children and feel m's pain. Also she blamed herself for not knowing, brijraj really impressed me I must say. He stood up to the plate and consoled his wife, for once like a caring husband and feeling daughters pain like a father and not a king. Unnathi was one of the strongest characters on the serial... i also liked her. well apart from brijraj being a maharaj, he is a father and husband something he very oftens fail to realise.. komal needs his support, its never easy for any mother to cope and function normally knowing their child is in distress and komal is an excellent mother

Tantric' Whooo this is a nice twist. I love how you get your point across while explaining their role at the same time.Thank you I have heard of these tantrics watching fear files.. lol😆 FEAR FILES SERIOUSLY... and jesus they are capable of some serious stuff but like you said I suppose some are good and some bad. But I am very curious and have some what of an idea of the condition?? Now that would be telling wouldnt it... ricna While I am happy that ds handed everything over to U, was that some kind of a condition and what sacrifice?you will find out soon enough... Are they walking away from devghar? seems like.. 😆

So karan and jagat are helped unnathi trace manyata, good to know they are still in contact. I was supa excited when I read that hoping for a manveer union but something tells me you are not going to let that happen so easily are you sha?mmm you know me very well.. Well sha ds was wrong its not destiny that's playing the games?? Its you' and I personally love it. 😆😉 why thank you ricna..

And your quotes and thoughts are beautifully intact. I love it especially this part'.

thank you

THERE IS NO PERFECT PERSON'YOU JUST HAVE TO FIND THE RIGHT ONE AND MAKE HIM PERFECT WITH YOUR LOVE!!! Well sha I am on the look out for yuvraj udayveer , when you meet him next time tell him to look past manyata' lol I Will try ricna but unfortunately Yuvraj Udayveer is so strung up on his queen, its very difficult to distract him.. i will be sure to let Manyata know she has competition...🤣

Truly supafantabolous update and very much needed. It was very emotional and truly missed some manveer' It was meant to be an emotional update, and i am glad you agree it was much needed. thank you for enjoying

Thank you sha you welcome ricna

aww this is so sweet, thank you ricna for the kind words. I truly love this comment.