Dekha Ek Khwaab - Their Dream Continues -BK 2-UPDATED Chap 35 - Pg 138

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#661

Firstly this is for you for dedicating the chapter to me...🤗

Awesome chapters 29 and 30 Shashi.👏👏..

firstly coming to chapter 29 which was steamy hot...!!..OMG...the best part in your hot writings are that even though you don't detail it, its so sensuous and epic!⭐️...The entire bathroom scene was too good to read it again and again...👏👏

Uday's marks to get his way of wearing his dress was too UV style😉...n you know how much i love this over possessive UV n thanks for creating such a grt character😳

Chapter 30 was again a great one with the fabulous party where Manyata was dressed in this UV's given dress but again is Jai's style, only to annoy our princey more n get it Manyata's way...

One more thing...How do you manage to write such lovely dialogues..m more fascinated with UVs dialogues..They are so much his style!..Hats off to you for that...

The songs that you select are always so suitable with the chapter which is again classy👍🏼

and the last part was sad that Manyata is soon about to fade, but going to take all the sweet memories of her beautiful love life ahead with her...

Great story Shashi n plz don't delay this time..I want to see Uday's reaction after knowing the truth...😛

Edited by sweet_gargi - 12 years ago

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Ravneet Kaur

@Fantasyangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

superb updts...29th chap was emotional..mai to senti ho gyi thi...bt m gettin confused..M ke to stlbrn baby tha na to ye adi kon hai?..nd nd pls is updt ki sad endin mt krna..nd tum to badi eed ka chaand ho gyi ho...ab agli baar jldi se ana nd updts dena..nd thanku fr the pm

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#663

Comment on chapter 29

Awesome Update

Manveer scenes were too good

i was great to read about UV's possessive and romantic side

Such a hot hot Update

Very steamy

no wonder de bathroom was filled with steam😆😉

Manveer Love is ...

U expresses it very well in through ur writing

Portraying their love and passion with perfection

So UV gets a key to de bathroom from de hotel staff

Naughty Boy 😳

Poor M but Yuvraaj Udayveer singh never loses

Aur Unke hi game mein toh kabhi nahi ...

But I m sure M didnt mind losing to her Uday

All In all Chapter 29 was beautiful written and filled with

Manveer and their Love

Such a passionate Update

comment for chapter 30

Under construction

Edited

Beautiful Updated

Loved every line

So J and M improvised on the dress "a bit" 😉

M and UV are made for Each other

Glad Uday didnt get his way atleast once ...

after all he cant have things his way always

YOU WERE BORN TO STAND OUT

awww This was superb

Charming kaise ho ye toh koi UV se seekhe ...

Uday is such a romantic husband

Manveer dance scene was very good

The flashback end UV whispering in her ear

haye mai mar java ...

so romantic

Aditya Veer singh

such a royal regal name

I always think of that name whn i imagine manveer's Son

I can imagine the pain M vud have gone through whn she held her

stillborn child in her arms😭

Poor M

But J is right

there are enough angels to look after little Adhi in heaven

UV needs his princess , his angel , his wife , his Queen here on Earth

Hope things get better for Manveer

For True Love there is always Hope ...

Cont ASAP

Thank you once again for these truly beautiful updates

The final quote was good

It tells us that v shud be optimistic instead of pessimistic ...

We really shud stop complaining and look at the brighter side of life

After ALL There is always a brighter side ...

After the dark night there is always an illuminating Dawn

Take care

hugs

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#664

Simply Amazing Shahi👏 more than words can describe.👏

just loved the Triple Treat you gave us. 😳it was fabulous.

Poor Manyata she wasn't betraying but serving her riasat and fulfilling her duties.😭 first i thought that she aborted her child but i was wrong, instead she took it as much as she could. she is suffering from a disease and uday doesn't 😆knows about it. inspite uday does all know it?😕

i hope he soon finds it out😭

What a hot Bath☺️, it was not at all vulgar but really intense and passionate.😳 it showed the depth of their love. and according to me a love story is incomplete without any kind of hardships. it is the main part of love.😳

the updates were as usual lovely. i really feel the depth in your writing. its just PERFECT 👍🏼

Update soon Shahi.

Thanks for the PM.

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Prerna

@Lovelydrops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Fantastic update👏...all three chapters were awesome...hope manyata and uday meet soon...🤗

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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#666

HEY SHAHI😃

COMMENT FOR CHAPTER 29 EDITED IN PAGE 88.

😆HAVE A LUK.

Edited by anjuroopak - 12 years ago

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shivanika

@shivanika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#667

👍🏼 thnks 4 update dear

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serat

@serat

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#668

wow really good
updateee
dil ko touch kiyaaa
bhut accha hai
loved it❤️
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nimmi

@aksuji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#669

thank u shahi for the triple dhamaka...all the three updates were beautifull...👍🏼

the flashbacks were a bliss to read😳...u r an amazing writer.👏...thanku for giving in to our demands n giving us updates taking out your precious time...🤗

oh I sooo wish everything goes fine in the life of this manveer and their life becomes as beautiful as it had been when the two were together...

...u gave us triple updates but still we will be waiting for another installment😆 so plz continue soon

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#670

amazing update loved it #27 was so emotional and heart breaking so much manyatha went through and alone so sad #28 that was so hot and sexy no one can win against the dare devil prince the hot scenes hot and very sexy beautifully done #29 possessive uday loved how he gave her the love bite so she won't put on the dress but she was smart than him and change the dress and used concealer awesome update thanks for the pm

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