FF last benchers updated thd2 link on pg1(3/27)

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Hey guys I am writing story on kriyaansh n swaron ...but its totally different story...all characters will be same..but groupswill bedifferent...all have the same passion for dance...but mostly my story will focus more on kriyaansh dan swaron..but swaron play a very gud role in this story..so here is the small scene from which the story will begin...

Sharon kriya bharat rinni vicky neha are sitting in d last bench in class...Sharon write down 1 pg whatever prof is dictating den passes the notebook to kriya who continue it till the next pg then again she passes it to sh n again sh continues for a pg n so on...they both are busy in that...neha promptly noting down every thing n vicky copying from neha's notes not bothering about what prof is dictating...rinni showing bharat her own dress designs which she has designed on previous weekend...n Bharat showing her few small cars models which he has designed last weekend...

After an hr the class ends...they were about to go to canteen, vicky's cell rings...he receives the call...

Vicky : hello dude whatz up??

Vicky : kya abhi ?? Par kyun ?

Vicky : ok ok relax...I am going home...vl call u guys 1ce I reach...

End of the call...

Vicky : guys I need to leave ...my frnds called me from goa...they need some urgent help it seems so ghar jaake call back karne kelie bol rahe hai...so guys bye..

Sh : kaun tumhare wo so called chaddi buddies??

Bh : aur tu unke lie hamme chodke ja raha hai ??

Rinni : obviously guys unke hathmein tho hai Vicky ka remote...

Sh : jab chaho ph karke disturb karte rehte hai...Vicky ko teek se hammare sath enjoy karne bhi nahi dete hain..jab b Vicky hammare sath hota hai tabhi unko tumse baat karni hoti hai...hammesha galat tyming...

Vi : guys ye kya bol rahe ho aap log...wo mere childhood frnds hai yaar...aise mat bolo unke bare mein..they need some urgent help dats y called me...ye kriya kagu samajao na inhe...plz

Kriya : u leave...I vl handle them...

Sh rinni Bharat opens their mouth to oppose bt 1 serious look from kriya was enough to shut their mouth...

Neha : go na idiot isse pehle ye log fir se shuru hojaye...

Kr : ya bye vicky...call me if u need anything...

Vi : thanks yaar kriya...(hugs her slightly) chalo bye...c u guys later...

Sh : later my foot...kriya tune usse jaane q diya..??

Bh : accha khasa bhakara banate hai wo dono iss ghade ko ??

Ri : bt ghade ko kaise bhakra bana sakte hai ??

All looks at rinni for few seconds then burst out laughing...

Kr : lets go to canteen guys...


Vicky reaches home n was about to open his house door bt Bhooommm

His both childhood frnds den shouts " surprisee3eee" from behind...

Vicky : salo kitna dara dia tha muje...aise chillate hai kya...

Both frnds laughs by looking at vickys scared face...

1 of them : aaja saale gale tho laga itne door se ayeen hai...

Then the trio hugs for few secs..

Vicky : andar chale...

They go inside n again Vicky becomes bali ka bakra here also...

1St frnd : itne der q lagaya aane mein..tera clg tho 10- 15 mins duri par hai na yahan se??

2nd frnd : iske so called dabhangg frnds jaane nahi diye honge isse...

1St f : tu itna darta q hai unse??

2Nd f : wo hai na iski lady dabhang frnd jisse ye apna sis manta hai

Vi : stop it guys...sale kriya ko bich mein math la..usse kuch mat keh tu..ussi ke waje se aaj jaldi aapaya main..guys thak gaya aap logo ke bich mein...

1St f : chal chal chod ye sab...aur puchega nahi hum yahan kaise ??

Vi : han yar...aap log aise achanak se ??

2Nd f : q khush nahi hai tu hame dekh ke??

VI : shut up yar...kaise bolta hai tu...

2Nd f : accha accha ro math...hum dono bhi tere clg join kie hai iss term se...

Vicky : jumps n stands on the sofa n says : sachhhiii?? Wow its a gr8 news...

1St ff : yes he z ryt...hum dono bhi kal se tumhare sath tumhare clg chalenge...

Vi : wow guys ii still dnt bliv this...hum. teeno fir se sath ?? Wow..abhi main mere frnds ko bulata hoon...unse milaunga aap logo ko...

2Nd f : nope...tu kisi ko kuch nahi batayega...hum khud unhe kal clg mein milenge...

Vi : kyaaa?? Freaks out...

1St f : han...he z ryt...hum pehle new students ki tarah unhe milenge...badme tum hume unke barein mein batana...

2 nd f : we dnt want to meet them with pre assumptions...hum bhi tho dekhe tumhare frnds kaise hai...

Vi : saalo its not funny...mere gang hi new stdents ki ragging karti hain...tamasha banayenge clg mein aapka..sabke samne...

2Nd f : ohh ragging n all haan ?? Not bad

1St f : fir tho hume unse as a new students hi mill lena chahie...

2Nd f : goa mein hum bhi bahot ragging n all kie hai..lets c tumhare clg mein kaise hota hai...n tumhaare woh lady dabhangg sis se bhi mil lenge issi bahane...

Vi : tu kriya ko bich mein math la saale...n she is z d only 1 jo kabhi kisi ki ragging nahi karti...bt ya 1 look mein pehchaan leti hai wo logo ko...marenge sale aap log

2 nd f : shut up Vicky...hum bhi kuch kam nahi hai...n q na bolu uss lady dahangg ke barein mein...jab dekho sale tu ussi ka side leta hai...

1St fr : chod na..muje tho uski dusri sis...kya naam hai uska??

2Nd fr : syren...the diva (dramatically)

Vi : syren nahi be...Sharon...

1St f : haan wahi siren Sharon whatever...usse milna hai muje...bahot bolta tha na tu muje ki muje ek baar usse milna chahie meri dimaag tikaane mein aajayega...muje dekh kar tuje uss siren ki yaad aati thi na kameene...lets c 2mrw..

Vi : guys seriously warning you...mere sath chalo kal clg ...I vl introduce u guys to them..warna joker banake chodenge mere frnds tum logo ko...

2Nd f : no ways dude..kal tum jao apne frnds. Sath...hum badme aajayenge..n dnt wry abt ragging ...humne bhi bahot rag kie hai...iss bar khud experience karlete hain..

1St f : waise bhi yahan kaun janta hai humme tumhare alawa jo hum embaress feel kare..

2Nd fr : ryt ...so chill n ragging ke bad tu unse officially mila dena..no prob with that...

1St frnd : yeah...tab tak tu bhi apne frnds ke sath hi reh...

Vi : okay as u wish guys...warn karns mera duty tha...baaki as u wish...



Done for now...plz tell me howz the concept...i vl give character sketch when its needed..not now...


Part 2 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3400034/ff-last-benchers-updated-thd2-link-on-pg1-3-27?pn=3

Part. 3 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/74656952

Part 4 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/74809391

Part 5 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/75150959

& https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3400034/ff-last-benchers-updated-thd2-link-on-pg1-3-27?pn=17


Part 7 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76843947

Part 8 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3400034/ff-last-benchers-updated-thd2-link-on-pg1-3-27?pn=33

Part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/78599882

Part 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3400034/ff-last-benchers-updated-thd2-link-on-pg1-3-27?pn=43


Part 11


Part 12


Part 13



Part 15 : pg 71

Part 15(ii) : pg 95
Part 16: pg 105

[DIV]Part 17 : pg 119
Part 18: pg 124
Part 19: pg 130
Part 20: pg 139


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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum update
Luv d gang
Krisha were awsum
Waiting for next part
Pls update next part soon
Thanx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i think it rey and swayan... as new in the college... continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome
Interesting concept
I think 1st one is swayam n 2nd one is rey..:p
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing updte 👏

luvd it...

vicky k woh 2 frnds rey nd swayum hai na...?😉

aah! lady dabbangg kriya 😆 and sharon as always hamari DIVA

newyaz updte soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update... loved krisha...pls update next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG SMI. . . . . . . .
1 more ss. . . . ,
woww. . . . .its awsome like the 1st part. . .
Superb concpt. . .
And yes unique tittle. . .
I knw,
1st frnd who calld sharon siren is our majnu swayum
and
2nd frnd who calld kriya lady dabanagg is rey. . . .
M so so so excitd 4 it. . .
Jaldi se nxt part update krna yaar. . . . . . , . .
Egarly waiting i it. . . . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start
wanna read more
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start
loved it
continue soon n thnxx for pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loveed d update...
sharon n kria were cute...
neha s sincere while vicky s copyin...
rinni n bharath in their own world discussin their interests..
loved vicky n kria relationship...
lady dabaang kria nice...
2 frinds r rey n swayam right???
waitin 4 d next part update soon...

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